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Posted: 22 July 2010 at 9:39am | IP Logged
@Khushboo- Yaar, kitni baar kaha hain ke I'm Rhea....... You know, I should open another accoiunt to avoid confusion....lol

But really, i'm rhea.....

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Posted: 22 July 2010 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
oooh this place is getting HOT!!!!!!!!!!
Good goig everyone! ......only one complaint all of u r lazy bums except annie .

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Posted: 22 July 2010 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
@Khush....yessssss.....extend!

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Hey guys, this is Aishwarya aka malluangel and Naina aka naina.patel.

This is our first FF together, and it's [obviously] on Abhimanyu and Nikkita Modi!

We hope you like it, because we're working really hard on it.




Bairi Piya: Vengeful Lover

By: Naina and Aishwarya


Prologue:

"It's not that I don't love you Nikki! You know that!" Armaan knelt at her feet, his eyes searching her face. "Nikki, you're my best friend, I love you more than anything. But I can't do this right now."

Nikkita looked away, not wanting him to see the tears in her eyes; couldn't he see she was miserable?

"Nikki I don't want to hurt you."

Too late. Her hands clutched at the chair, wanting this to be over, just say it already.

"But I don't want to get married now, I can't get married now! Nikki, sweetie look at me." She looked up, hesitant to meet his eyes. His eyes softened seeing the unfallen tears, "please baby, don't make this harder!"

She let out a sob, this was hard for him? She was the one getting her heart crushed into a thousand pieces!

"Nikki I'm not saying we'll never get married, just not now!"

She sniffed, promises promises, he should know not to make promises he couldn't keep.

She somehow found the courage to look straight into his eyes, "It's now or never Armaan, and you know that."

He looked down this time, torn. She scoffed slightly, and then stood up, her mind made. Armaan got up slowly, still unable to meet her gaze, "Go Armaan." She said. He looked up in surprise, "what?"

"Go. You're right; this is a chance of a lifetime for your career-"

"Nikki-"

"You should take it, I don't want to hold you back Armaan." He shook his head sorrowfully. "And please don't hold me back either." She continues, "I think we should break up."

He gasped, his hands almost instinctively reaching for hers, "No baby."

She gently pulled away; he was the one crying now. "Yes Armaan, neither of us should be forced to wait for the other; I think it's better if we just move on."

"Nikki!"

"Bye Armaan. Just so you know, I don't regret this, and I hope one day we can be friends." She walked away before he could pull her back, back to him, back to his hesitance.

"Nikki!" he shouted after her, "come back!"

But he didn't chase after her, and that was the last Nikkita Malhotra heard of Armaan Malik.


Edited by malluangel - 22 July 2010 at 6:53pm

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Posted: 22 July 2010 at 10:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mitzification

oooh this place is getting HOT!!!!!!!!!!
Good goig everyone! ......only one complaint all of u r lazy bums except annie .

you too...

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Posted: 23 July 2010 at 12:31am | IP Logged
hi Aish n Naina. Ur first ff is wondeful, i loved it guyz.
 
I loved ur siggie also.Continue it.

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Posted: 23 July 2010 at 4:14am | IP Logged

Okay, so I guess we really should extend the deadline.

 
Since I haven't been able to talk to Marausha about this yet, I'll do it myself. Wink
 
Deadline will be extended, by two weeks. Last date of submission is29th August. (LOL I'm sounding like a school teacher announcing last date of submission for projects LOL LOL LOL)
 
So people, take your time...Big smile
 
 
 
Also, the award categories have been changed slightly according to the kind of responses we have been getting. Wink
 
 


Edited by Khushboo_AN - 23 July 2010 at 4:17am

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Moved here:
 


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