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Posted: 17 July 2010 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Khushboo_AN

@Annie...thats a lovely scene! Big smile So Sid makes Abhi jealous! *rubs hands together* This is gonna be super-fun!
 
I'm really looking forward to how this goes forward....hungry for more! Embarrassed
 
And The VM is beautiful! Hug Very nice way to incorporate the song in the scene! Big smile
 
 
 
 
But sweetie could you please give your scene a name? It makes the identification a lot easier.
 
Thanks,
Khushboo. Embarrassed
Hey khushboo, thanks for the comments. Am glad you liked it. Will update the story name with part 3. Smile. I still have to coin it.Embarrassed
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Posted: 17 July 2010 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mitzification

Hey Annie , this is such a good twist , always wated something like this . Great writig .. do carry on ....
eve after the chalege is over we will ot let you stop writing heheheh
hey if u do iculcate honeys idea ...it wld be steaming hot !!!!!!!
both preteding to be datig other or likig others and yet wwhen they meet unexpectedly the eyelock ... the sparks !!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks a lot ... appretiate your comments. And as I told Honey, my story is a bit different ... hope you like it .... I have updated Part 2.Big smile
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Posted: 17 July 2010 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
First of all Thanks Annie that u chose to start from that point of time...

and I loved your start, ...am really wondering where u wud take the story out from here...keep on updating jaldi jaldi..Big smile
best of luck with this..Thumbs UpHug
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Posted: 17 July 2010 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
Annie, me waiting for some real masala from you...LOL
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Posted: 17 July 2010 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
Anie ... love the way ur ff is going sply Abhi's concern for nikkis well being ......
also love abhi geting so jealous n Nikki being so understandig.
What will happ in the 6 am meetig i wonder?
 
aww thers no one to look after Abhi , no one to make sure he had lunch in time :(


Edited by mitzification - 17 July 2010 at 12:53pm
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Posted: 17 July 2010 at 1:05pm | IP Logged
@Annie...could this get any better...I love it! Big smile The jealousy he's trying to hide, and the way Nikki is misreading it is simply awesome!
 
Nikki has no idea what else he has in store for her and OMG...a meeting at 6 in the morning? *faints* Poor thing...that, and night duty. That's why you shouldn't mess with Dr. Moody.
 
I'm really waiting for when Sid finds out the truth...I kind of have the feeling that by then, Nikki will have turned the tables and she might even try to get Abhi back by making him jealous.
 
Update soon! Embarrassed

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Posted: 17 July 2010 at 1:09pm | IP Logged
ratika whers d update ????///
u get a tardy !
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Posted: 17 July 2010 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
Hmmmmmmm Abhi is jealous and mean....LIkes!!!

keep it coming Annie!!

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