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Posted: 23 July 2010 at 4:47am | IP Logged
@Naina and Aishu....it's a nice beginning, sweeties! So Nikki and Armaan break up! Yay!!! *dances around the room* Well, I know I shouldn't be happy in such a sensitive scene, but ah well, I'm so heartless! LOL
 
Continue soon!

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Posted: 23 July 2010 at 5:02am | IP Logged
Its very lovely part khush.I liked it how u expressing both their fears to accept the love they have for each other.
 
Its good ur saving time by writing in school recess.
 
After reading ur i m desperate to post mine.I can't believing that i m writing ff.

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Posted: 23 July 2010 at 6:32am | IP Logged
Oh my goodness!!ShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedYou have no idea what you have done to me....I'm just spellbound, speechless..and I don't know what else...praises are even less to what you have writtenClapClapClapClapClapClapClap...I'm TOTALLY & COMPLETELY in love HeartHeartHeartHeartHeartHeartHeartHeartHeartHeartHeartHeartwith your scene.
 
"I'm not trying to hurt you. I'm just trying to protect myself."
 
This line is like everything to this part...This hurts a hell..a hell lot to  fall in love, once again, with the person whom you have hurt...
I'm just so proud of you,Goddie!!!HugHugHugHugHug
 
Yeh tune kya kar diya??? Ohhhhhhhhh.....you are simply superb jaani....even more than that!!!Heart

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Posted: 23 July 2010 at 11:20am | IP Logged
ohh...that was so good Khushbii...once again..I felt the pain...so put them so beautifully in ur words...I loved it..hats off to you..!Clap
although I wanted a kiss...since I am not sure whether i will be having one in mine or not...LOL
anyway..even then it was amazing...Clap

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Posted: 23 July 2010 at 11:25am | IP Logged
Aishwarya I like ur ff ... it seems diff from all other AN ff's i have read till date ... the cocept seems diff !

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Posted: 23 July 2010 at 12:54pm | IP Logged

Hey guyz HugHug

first of all I apologiz 4 commnting so late1 m so sorry bt waz really bussy wid collg n pracs!Embarrassed
Bt omg look at ths place! ths AN wrting challenge thrd is hottest place in the earth! BlushingBlushing (causing globl warming)EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
A huge round of applause 4 each n every participant!  you guyz really rock!ClapClapClapStar
u all r doing gr8t job! keep rocking, jumping, bouncing ..... !Big smileBig smile
 lov ya all!HeartHeartHeart

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Posted: 23 July 2010 at 12:57pm | IP Logged

@Rati- (part 1) oh dear fantastic scene !toally lov the title whch is so true! n jus lov the beggning! nikki being J wid ammy- ridz clossness !nd then her detaild descrptn abt the effct she waz havin on herself waz  too gud  ClapClapClap   thn typical nikki who hatz dr.modi to the core!LOLLOL                     n then being confused, then evn 4 that blaming him, n saying ullu da pathha waz totaly cool!           i agree abhi iz real monstr bt hiz Hot Handsom Stylish monstr!BlushingBlushing (lov him)

oh i jus lov the whole part! nice work ratz n really wel writtn!ClapClap
 thanx dear !lov ya!TC! jhappizz!Hug
 


@Annie-(part 1) hey ths is chaitali! omg ur scene is totaly awesom dear! n evn u hav added sad+b'ful vm in it which shows u hav taken so mch of effortz 4 the challnge!                                        n song completly suitz ths ff !!ClapClapjus lov it!

jus lov ths part,  She wanted him to understand her fears.
She wanted him to understand how important he was in her life
and how important it was that he gave her time to overcome her fears.
u made me cry 4 ths one!
 (ths is so trueEmbarrassed)and if looks could have killed, Niki would have been dead by now.                 I really wantd smthin like this to b happn in dmg!bt expcting somthing lik ths from cvz is foolisness!
bt thank u so mch1

 (n ths is totally nikki pehlwan!)She wiped away her tears and made up her mind ... she was going to fix things between them.
. She was going to stick around him, haunt him,
 do whatever it took to convince him to forgive her
and make him fall in love with her                                                                                                             
  "Dr.  Modi, abhi dekho toh  sahi, agey hota hai kya.                                                                         Dekte dekhte hee tumhari akkad niklegi".WinkLOLLOL


really lov the way u hv startd n evn  the end of ths part is totally cool! keep rocking gal ! thanx!Tc!
jhapizz!Hug


Edited by chaitali_an - 23 July 2010 at 1:03pm

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Posted: 23 July 2010 at 1:08pm | IP Logged
@Annie- (part 2) awww abhi again misundrstood nikki!
   ( had paced his room like a caged tiger)  Itz purrfect description
 4 THE ABHIMNYU MODI  WinkEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 N abhi is getting mor n mor jalous! jus lov jalous, angry abhi!Embarrassed
itz gona b fun now!WinkBig smileBig smile 
 thanks dear! tc! jhappizz1    
 
 
 @Rati-(part 2)omg rati u rock man!Really well  writtn dear!itz too gud!Star

N then abhiz entry mst b dhamakedar na!
lov hez style of consoling othrz i mean only nikki
Embarrassed

" You will dehydrate, better you stop crying."LOLLOLLOLLOL
aww jus lov hez each n evry adaa!Embarrassed lov him soooo mch!
n now we wil get to read paligaon incidence! aww waz missing those b'ful daz!
love you 4 that yaa! jhappi pale!HugHug

jus lov th way u hav described nikkiz  inner turmoil ! awesomClapClapClap

our hands met yesterday, his eyes chained me at nurse station this morning,
 he was sad for me, he wanted me to fall in love with someone else,
 he caught tears rolling down from my eyes.........
 all I had wanted was this, WHEN I FALL, SOMEONE WOULD PROTECT ME..
 
 too gud yaClapStar

really nice one ratz ! keep rockin gal! lov ya jhappizz! tc!Hug


Edited by chaitali_an - 23 July 2010 at 1:13pm

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