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Posted: 15 July 2010 at 8:34am | IP Logged
and finally i completed my mission....story is complete within half hour....so let me comment....the story was brilliant,with nice spark of suspense ,thrill and all...its one of the best stories in forum i ever read...good if you conc. more on situation description....its very imp. in thrillers...nice sketch,accurate chara arrangement,script can be more readable if you do not write 'scene' bec.it will carry the suspence away...write it without pause....am not a hindi wrtr but experienced reader....thats y i suggest....pls dont care if these r wrong....once again very well done....

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Posted: 15 July 2010 at 8:52am | IP Logged
^^ Did you find story lengthy?


Edited by sunnyp1414 - 15 July 2010 at 8:52am
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Posted: 15 July 2010 at 9:15am | IP Logged
Great story, sunny! The plot was really well-built, I especially liked the illusion pic. Big smile  This is what the official "CID Under Fire" should've been like. Great work.

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Posted: 15 July 2010 at 9:45am | IP Logged
wonderful story sunnyStarThumbs Up really different!Clap

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Posted: 15 July 2010 at 9:49am | IP Logged
its beautiful sunny. pretty exciting story Smile& loved itBig smile

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Posted: 15 July 2010 at 11:00am | IP Logged
THe story was awesome with every element in it. You are too good at creating this cue letters yaar. You are superb. the story was awesome waiting for next one

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Posted: 15 July 2010 at 11:23am | IP Logged
Now this is what we call CID UNDER FIRE !! fireworks waale aaj fireworks chodte if they had used such a plot,very good Sunny you're awsome Clap loved it !!

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Posted: 15 July 2010 at 8:53pm | IP Logged
Thanks everyone for liking it and telling area of improvement as well. Will try my best next time.

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