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Posted: 15 July 2010 at 6:18am | IP Logged

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Posted: 15 July 2010 at 6:34am | IP Logged
Sunny, U tooooo gud yaar!!! Really a Star Clap Lekin... just tell me, what does d last line, Acp's dialogue, mean? D Hindi....U know ,mere prob hote hai!! But u r really creative!!

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Posted: 15 July 2010 at 6:44am | IP Logged
Wonderful story yaar!! Clap Different from all other stories! Had everything bit of suspense!! Last scene among the trio was wonderful!! Short simple yet touching! Really a wonderdul work!
The title is appropriate !! Wah wah.... Wonderdully written yaar! Thoda confusing tha at times... But the suspense was alive ay every moment!

Whatever doubts i had, i hav already pmed u abt them n got my ans!! Wink

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Posted: 15 July 2010 at 6:57am | IP Logged
This is what call Dhamaka Clap Superb Logical, Emotionally written Story.. Every Scene is very well connected and well explained... No loops... This is the way I was expecting friday "CID Under Fire" to be.. i is a very well justic to title name.. mind blowing work yar.. Just keep it up!!! Clap

Edited by bhinder.kamboj - 15 July 2010 at 6:57am

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Posted: 15 July 2010 at 7:03am | IP Logged
a mind blasting story!!!

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Posted: 15 July 2010 at 7:26am | IP Logged

Wow....good one yaar....much much better than the CID under fire that they showed.

And yeah....do write Theek instead of Dhik....it's a bit confusing.

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Posted: 15 July 2010 at 7:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by visrom

Wow....good one yaar....much much better than the CID under fire that they showed.


And yeah....do write Theek instead of Dhik....it's a bit confusing.

Ya that dhik thing even i got confused for a sec! LOLTold u sunny, spellings!!!! Wink (i suffe a lot from such typo mistakes!)
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Posted: 15 July 2010 at 7:47am | IP Logged
Next time will write taking care of spelling mistake.  I just didn't get enough time packing up stuff  leaving time so.  will edit it soon.

Thanks everyone for liking it. 

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