RN - Imtehaan.[The Test Of God] - Page 3

Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by preet09


Hi RIti
How r u?

I am also a RN fan and I just loved ur FF. Its very different and the starting is really nice. The title is good as well.
Please continue soon and add me to ur PM List.
Luv Preet


Hey..Thanks so much for this comment ...
I am really glad dearr😊 Thanku so much
Yes I'll surely PM u when i'll update...πŸ˜›
luv Riti😊
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by Deepanwita


hiii riti how r u?
after a very long time aur tum naya
ff likh rahi that's gr8 kyunki RN ff's ko
bahut miss kar rahi hoon aur maine
tumhe bahut bahut bahut miss kiya
aur haan tumhe main kabhi bhul nahi
sakti isliye kabhi ye mat poochena ki do u remember me
awesome ff dear
mindblowing
do cont dear
will be waiting

love
Deepa


Hi Deepa
How Are You....??
Yup Actlly Chutti Main Bore ho rahi thi to socha FF Start Karu....
Yes Sweety Maine Bhi tumhe Boht miss kiya.....😳 😳
Thanx So much for The Comment...😳 😳
I know....U remeber me.....actlly....na maine wo Send to all friends mara tha PM
to sabko Ek hi PM gaya..πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
Thanx for liking Mah FF...πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
I'll update soon ....

Love
Riti😊 😊
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by poojabi


hey i just read it .its really good.carry on dear


Hiee...😊
thanku soooo Very much for the comment...πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
Do comment in the next part too when I update..πŸ˜ƒ

With Love, Riti....😳
Posted: 13 years ago
Episode 2
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After 3 months..!!
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Mona n Naina has becum very gud friends now...
They are always together at every place..

Its Another Saturday....

Naina n Mona are sitting together n having their Snakcs in the class room
Suddenly...
Mona:hey waha dekh koi dekh raha hai ??
Naina:Kaun hai ?? tu janti hai kya...

[2 guys are lookin them from the class window...]

Naina:pata nahi kaun hai tu chup chap khana khaa...
Mona: are aise kaise !! wo shayad senior hain...
Mam ne mana kia tha na ki senior agar class k ass pass dikhayi diye toh mana karna..
Naina:are to kya hua hum kuch nahi kahenge tu chup chap khana kha.
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Naina:nahi chal hum unhe bolenge ki aap log yaha mat aiye...
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Naina:Excuse me..!! kaun ho aap log aur kya dekh rahe ho khidki se..
1 of the guys:hum kisiko dhund ne aye hain [Introducing Mishal Raheja As Jay ]
Naina:kisse dhund rahe ho aap ? n r u seniors....
Jay:han kyu ??
Naina:dekhiye aap log chale jaiye ...Principal mam ne mana kia tha ki hum
kisi senior ko yaha ane na dein....to please aap log chale jaaiye
Jay: hum nahi jayenge...kya karloge.....
Naina:thik hai hum mam ko bolne jaa rahe hain
Jay:jaao hum bhi dekhte hain kitna mam ko bologi....
Naina starts to goin 2wrds the principal office....
Jay: are ruko ruko....ok...fyn...par sach main hum kisiko dhund rahe hain
Naina:Kisse dhund rahe ho...kya naam hai uska...
Jay:Parmatma....πŸ˜†
Naina was so angry...but after hering that name she laughed out loudely....
N jay is watching her very sweetly...
Naina:Hahahaha....Oh...God kya naam hai...lekin yaha koi parmatma nahi hai..
Jay:hai...too aur nahi kyaa.....maine kaha na hai....
Naina:nahii too aur hai kyaaa....maine kaha na nahi hai....
Jay: hai...
Naina:Nahi hai...waise aap kaun ho n usse kyu dhund rahe ho..
Jay: tum jis ladki se baat kar rahi thi abhi...
Naina: han.....kya hua..
Jay: main uska friend hoo...
Naina: ohh okay...achha jo bhi ho aap yaha se jaao...warna main bol dungi...
Jay:okay...fine....

He has gone...!!!

Mona:kya kaha usne...
Naina:chor na...jane de...pagal tha.....mujhe dar lag raha tha..kahin wo
Mam ko bolke punish nahi karwayega na...senior hai...
mona:ha tune usse kyu bola itna kuch..
naina:..tune hi to kaha tha bolne ko
mona:achha chor kuch nahi hoga...

Next Day In the School
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Naina:yaar aaj...to maths ka period hai.....meri aaj waat lagne wali hai
Mona:are maths hi toh hai kuch nahi hoga tension mat le!!
Naina:kya yaar...maths kitna tough hai mujhse kuch nahi hota..
Mona:are tujhe maths nahi ata toh kya hua english main to tu top karti hai na
Naina:han...par maths main tu TOP karti hai....bhak Top kaha karti hoo...mera
to humesha 10 logo ke baad hi naam ata hai.

All students have gone to class.....

Maths teacher :okay all of you....!!Home work compleated hai na..??
Students:Yes Sir......!!
Maths teacher :okay fine....Monitor.!! colect the copies n place it on mah table..
Monitor: yes sir !!

Naina has not finished the sums....
she stood up n told
Naina:sir...
Sir:yes naina..
Naina:sir i hvnt finished all the sums...I couldnt solve around 6 problems....
Sir:okay no problem...Its Fine..!!

N the class has finished...n the bell was rang..

Naina:kya yaar...aj to sir ne kuch kaha hi nahi thank GOD...
Mona:ya tumhe chor dia...
Naina:....hey..dekh kal ka senior....
Mona:chal chal..us ladki ke naam se usse chidayenge...
Naina: kaun ladki ??  
Mona:are kal wo bol raha tha..na ki us ladki ka friend hai...
Naina: are wo to Lisa didi ki baat kar raha tha..wo jo meri cycle kal leke
gai thi...
mona:are wohi toh...tujhe samajh main nahi ata..kyaa..??
naina: kya samajh main nahi ata
mona:tu buddhu hai kyaa.....(she whishpered to naina) are wo dno grl frnd noy frnd hain??
Naina:Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa !!! Chiiii tu kinti gandi baat kar rahi hai....
Mona:are ha wohi to bol raha tha wo...
Naina:tu pagal hai kya....wo to bola ki friend hai....
mona:ohoo friend to aise kyu bola.....chupke...
Naina:are haa....sahi keh rahi hai tu ??
Mona:aur nahi toh kya....
Naina:Chal chor na...hume kya hai kisise...
Mona: are Chal na Chida te hain...
Naina: are Senior hai sir ko bol dega to hum fans jayenge...
Mona: ohoo kuch nahi hoga yaar...
Naina:R u sure...
Mona: ha be Chal.....
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Naina N Mona Went to Jay.....
Jay is watching naina very sweetly...
Naina is standig out with keeping very much distance from him near a Tree....
N jay is watching naina ....from ....Far Away....
Naina.....shouts from far .....:areee....monaa...lagta hai aaj...koi akela hai...
Mona:haan yaar.....pata nahi Lisa Didi kaha gai...
Naina:Ha yaar....bechare bhaiya..humare didi ke bina kitne akele pad gaye....
n they laugh our loudly.......
Jay is watching.....naina....n.....he is smiling too....
Jay's Friend:kya hua yaar...wo ladkia tujhe chidda rahi hai n tu kuch bol nahi raha...
Jay:kuch nahi....chor...
Jay's friend:lo kar lo baat....u know...ur only 13 okay...
JAy:....so....
Jay's friend:abhi padhai kar....Pyar vyar abhi se mat karna....
Jay:kya bak raha hai...wo to choti si ladki hai has rahi thi..isliye.....
cute lagi....
jay's friend:ohooo....cute se beautiful hone main jyada der nahi lagti...
Jay:tu chup kar....Are..pagal hogaya hai
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Chal.....
They Gone.....

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Hey Friends..It Was The second part...
I hope It was okay...
I know I really do Update Late...
But as u all know...After Opening the college...I really wont get time to update...
As I go to college at 8 am...n come back at 6 pm in the evining..LOL
So I hope u guys understand...I'll update sunday to sunday...After Opening the college...
okay...Now..I'll update...Soon.......In This week....
Take Care All Of you and Do comment...
Love you all Lots.....
Riti...😊 😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š
Posted: 13 years ago

hi ,😊

the up is really sweet naina and mona became friendsπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ƒ
mona aur naina dekhte haai koi senior unhe window ke through peep kar raha haai πŸ˜•naina goes to him its was jay he said he is seaching for paramatma oh goddddddddddddπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
mona tells naina that he is looking for lisa didi as they are boyfriend girlfriend😳😳😳😳
but yaar is part mein bhi humare raj kahin nahin aaye kya wohi jay ka friend haai 😭😭
anyways cont soon and do pm me
Posted: 13 years ago
hey nice update.bt tune rajveer jaisa   itna acha nam chod kar hero ka nam rizwan kyun rakh dya?mnik ke ka hangover hai kya?par kamse kam hero ki entry to kara.aur ek baat mai to humesha use raj bolungi.naina is really cute.
Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Riti
How r u?

The update is really very sweet.........I enjoyed it a lot.
Naina and Mona became good friends.
The way they teases Jay is so sweet and Jay's friends are really too much....
I really loved it.

Please continue soon.
Luv Preet
Posted: 13 years ago
hii riti dear........
loved the first part to the core sweety.........
it was awesooooome.....
superb and really wonderful update dear........
well dear maine apna id name change kar diya hai........
par tumhe inform nahin kar paayi thi........
aur haan mera no. bhi change ho gaya hai.........
i really missed u a lot sweety..........but now remember me ok........
and don't worry ab hum IF mein hi scraps aur PM'S ke through baat karsakenge...........
take care love u.........byeeeeee..........
and thanx for the pm.........
priti........
Posted: 13 years ago
cool part dear and welcome back.
continue soon.
Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Riti
 
How r u???
 
Update was really sweet..I love this concept..
Naina is so very innocent ..😊
Jay is finfing Naina cute but his friends r teasing him..Where is My Rizzu???
 
I understand that its difficult to continue fiction when u r attending  college..
I'll wait for the update..😊
 
Continue soon
Bye
 

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