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MJHT FF ~ Same characters different story! (Page 6)

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Posted: 17 July 2010 at 12:53am | IP Logged
nice prt!
hope SaJan get together soon nd nuthing happens to Dia!
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Posted: 18 July 2010 at 9:52am | IP Logged
Part 4

Scene 1
Location ~ Outside Bushan house
Characters in scene ~ Nupur & Dia


Continued from previous part.
Nupur stops walking once they are a safe distance from the house and gives out a squel of delight.

Nupur - I am so Happy! Dia you won't believe ke kya hua!
Dia - Kya hua! (Nupur tells Dia) Kya? Thauji Mumbhai aa rahe hai? Woh bhi Samrat aur Gunjan ke rishte ke bare main baat karne? Yeh saab kaise hua?
Nupur - My mother is too good! Unhone Ravi uncle ko phone karke Shashi uncle ka number manga, phir directly Uncle se rishta manga. Aur ab uncle kal a rahe hai humse aur bhai se milne!
Dia - Wow! That's so great. I hope key eh rishta hojaye.
Nupur - Me too (Smiling) Ab mujhe ghar jaldi jaana hai, kal ke liye tayariya karne hai. (They hug) See you tomorrow!
Dia - Bye!
Dia goes off to meet Ranvijay and Nupur heads home.

Scene 2
Location ~ Sharma House
Characters in scene ~ Mayank and Shilpa

Mayank is in the living room looking for something. He is wearing vlack trousers and a white short sleeved shirt.
Mayank - Maa! Maa.....!  (He turns around to see his mum standing with her hands behind her back. She is wearin a pink and white churidaar suit) Maa, aapne mera briefcase deka kahin? Office mein ta par ab kahi nahin mil rahi!
(He starts searching again)
Shilpa
- Aaj Saturday hai na? Toh tujhe briefcase ki kya zaroorath?
Mayank - Kaam pe nahin jar aha hoon Maa. Mere briefcase mein kuch important papers hai joh mujhe parne hai....(he realises his mums hands are still behind her back, he looks at her hands on his hips) Maa, aapke peeche kya hai?
Shilpa - Mere haath mein? Kuch bhi to nahin. (Mayank moves slightly so he can see what is behind her)
Mayank - Maa aap mujhe mere briefcase denegi kasht karenge?
Shilpa - (she pretends to think about it) Nahin!
Mayank - Maa, aap Suhaani ko jakar thang ki jiye na aur please mujhe mere briefcase dedo!
Shilpa - Suhaani ghar par nahin hai aur vaise bhi main tujhe thang thori kar rahi hoon.Tujhe briefcase chahiye toh pehle vaada kar ke tu is weekend kuch kaam nahin karega
Mayank - Maa...
Shilpa -Vaada kar!
Mayank- Teek hai Maa, vaada kartha hoon main kuch kaam nahin karunga. (He holds out his hand for the briefcase)
Shilpa - Tu kaam nahin karne wala toh iske kya zaroorat? Main ab tujhe yeh Monday ko hi doongi.
Mayank - Maa... (Shilpa puts the briefcase down and walks over to Mayank)
Shilpa - Mayu.  Har waqt tu ya kaam katha hai ya ghar pe rehta hai. Na tu dosto se milta hai na pyaar ke...
Mayank - Pyaar? Maa aap baat kaha se kaha thak leja rahe hai? (Shilpa goes and sits down on the sofa)
Shilpa - Acha useh chor. Main sirf yeh keh rahi hoon ke har waqt kaam aur ghar achi baat nahin hai. Kabhi kabhi dosto se milke bahar ghoomna firna chahiye.
Mayank - Maa, aap toh aise keh rahe hai jaise main apne dost se milta hi nahin!
Shilpa - Aacha? Pichli baar kaab mila tha?
Mayank - Uhhhh...... Atually Maa, kafi din ho gaye is liye maine apne dosto ke saath kal ke liye plans banaya hai.
Shilpa - Sach? (Shilpa claps her hands together in glee) Yeh toh bohut achi baat hai. Kaha jaa rahe ho?
Mayank - Woh... (He looks around the room) Woh... hum kal milke decide karenge.
Shilpa - Mujhe khushi hain ke tum apne dosto se mil rahe hai, ab agar tum shaadi ke liye maan jaathe to main aur kuch nahin chathi!
Mayank - Maa!
(She ruffles his hair smiling)
 
Scene 3
Location ~ Shergill House
Characters in scene ~ Adhiraj, Nupur & Ratna

Nupur is about to take out her keys when the door opens.
Adhiraj  - Nupur, kitni der kar di! (They both come inside and go to the living room)
Nupur - Bhai woh traffic tha isliye. (Her mum sitting on the sofa) Maa! (She runs to her mum and hugs her) Thank you, thank you!
Ratna - Thank you math keh, abhhi baath pakki nahin hai
Adhiraj - Hai nahin toh ho jayegi! Hamare bhai mein kuch kami hai kya?
Nupur - You're right bhai. Koi kami nahin hai, toh uncle na kyun kahenge? Vaise..... (She looks at them both) bhai ko bataya?
Ratna - Abhi tak nahin, tum dono ka intazaar kar rahi thi.
Adhiraj - Nahin. Hum bhai ko kuch nahin batayenge. Hum uneh kal suprise karenge!

Nupur and Ratna agree to suprise Samrat and make plans and arrangements for tomorrow!

Scene 3
Location ~ Bushan house
Characters in scene ~ Nupur, Dia & Bauji (Shashi Bushan)

The girls are up late waiting for the arrival of Gunjan's dad. Around 12am the door bell rings. Gunjan opens the door.
Gunjan - Bauji! (Gunjan hugs her father)
Bauji - Kaisi hai meri beti? (he holds her tight, his voice begins to quiver) Kitne din ho gaye tujhe deke hue!
(They let each other go and Gunjan looks up at her dad)
Gunjan
- Bauji aap roh rahe hai? (She wipes they tears off his face even as tears fall don her cheeks)
Bauji - Yu bhi toh roh rahi hai (He wipes her tears)
Gunjan - Bauji, (she hugs him again) maine aap ko kitna miss kiya.
Bauji - Maine bhi tujhe bohut miss kiya (just the Dia comes into the hall)
Dia - Tauji! (She comes and hugs him) Aap dono yaha kyun kare hai. (She picks up his bag) Chaliye abdher chalthe hai, aap thak gaye honge tauji!
Gunjan - Haan Bauji andher chalke araam ki jiye. (Dia and Gunjan take him to his room and help him settle in)
Bauji - Dia mujhe Gunjan se kuch akele mein baat karni hai, tum hume kuch waqt akele chor dogi?
Dia - Haan Tauji! Main aapke liye chai aur kuch kahne ke liye lathi hoon (She smiles at him and leaves)
Gunjan - Kya hua Bauji?
(Bauji sits on the bad and Gunjan sits down next to him)
Bauji -
Beta main tujhe ek baat poochu toh tu sach jawab degi?

Gunjan -
Haan Bauji!
Bauji -
Tujhe shaadi ke bare mein kya khayal hai?
Gunjan -
Shaadi...? (Gunjan looks away) Maine.... is bare kabhi socha nahin Bauji
.
Bauji -
Toh ab sochle
(Gunjan looks at him confused)
Gunjan -
Bauji?

Bauji -
Tere liye rishta aya hai!
Gunjan -
Kya?... Bauji...?
Bauji -
Dekh beta (he holds her hand) Tu abhi bachi nahi rahi, bari ho gayi hai. Ab waqt a gaya hai ke main ek baap hone ka farz nibaoon. Sach toh yeh hai, ke... tere shaadi ke bare mein kal tak,maine bhi teek se nahi socha, par yeh rishta ek bohut ache ghar se hai.

Gunjan -
Bauji...?
Bauji -
Dekh beta main tere saath zabardasti nahin karoonga. Kal ladke aur uske parivaar se milne ke baad joh tera faisla hoga mujhe manzoor hoga.
Gunjan-
Kal? Bauji itni jaldi....
Dia - Yeh lijiye, Tauji, chai aur samose.
(Dia comes and gives the tea and snacks, shestarts a conversation with Bauji)
Gunjan (THOUGHTS) '
Shaadi? Bauji mere shaadi ke liye ladka dekhne aye hai. (She gives a sad smile to Dia and Bauji). Acha hua maine Samrat ko apne dil ki baat nahin batayi
.Batayi hoti toh meri shaadi ke baat sunke uska did toot jatha, jaise mera toot raha hai.

End of Part 4

Kya kal Mayank sachmein apne dosto se mil raha hai?
Suprise ke baad kya hoga Samrat ka reaction?
Keep reading my FF to find out!

Sorry part 4 is a little short and boring, next part will hopefully be better!


Edited by Parvin86 - 18 July 2010 at 9:57am

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Posted: 18 July 2010 at 10:32am | IP Logged
nice part
waiting for for mayur meet
thanks for the pm continue soon Smile Smile
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Posted: 18 July 2010 at 10:38am | IP Logged
lovely loved it continue soon
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hey! gr8 part
loved it
cont soon n thnx for the pm
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Posted: 18 July 2010 at 11:41am | IP Logged
great update ...but plz make Nupur-Mayank meet ..
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gr8 part update soon
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interesting part!! do write the next part, lol am getting very curious now Smile

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