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sanjana yadav

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Posted: 14 July 2010 at 9:49am | IP Logged
its nothing like tht dear
i just loved it and really dying to read next part
so update soon

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Posted: 14 July 2010 at 10:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by myownarea

hey lovely updates.. :) totally loved it!! Dont worry when u start a new FF, a lot of times u may not get as many comments as u would like to have, but then slowly people would read and the word wud spread.,.. !

so cheer up and update soon ..I guess more u start writing on the couple interactions the more will be the audience..

dont be disheartened, u are wonderful..keep writing!! :)


Thank you for the comment!
As I have started the story from scratch it is hard to add romance so soon , which is why I made it that Gunjan and Samrat are already in love, hopefully by part 4 atleast I can add some romance between them.

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Posted: 14 July 2010 at 10:09am | IP Logged
awesum work dear...itz awesummmmmmmm.....!!!!
great great workk :)

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Posted: 14 July 2010 at 10:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Parvin86

Originally posted by myownarea

hey lovely updates.. :) totally loved it!! Dont worry when u start a new FF, a lot of times u may not get as many comments as u would like to have, but then slowly people would read and the word wud spread.,.. !

so cheer up and update soon ..I guess more u start writing on the couple interactions the more will be the audience..

dont be disheartened, u are wonderful..keep writing!! :)


Thank you for the comment!
As I have started the story from scratch it is hard to add romance so soon , which is why I made it that Gunjan and Samrat are already in love, hopefully by part 4 atleast I can add some romance between them.
 
I can totally understand that, please go as per ur storyline ...
I m just saying thats the general trend :)

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Posted: 14 July 2010 at 10:46am | IP Logged
Hey man don't be disheartened!!!!!!

Lovely part

even when I started a new ff I got less response but now it's really popular

do cont soon

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Posted: 14 July 2010 at 2:15pm | IP Logged
fabulous and lovely update......cont soon

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hey thanks for the pm
really nicely written
continue soon
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Posted: 15 July 2010 at 4:17pm | IP Logged
Part 3

Scene 1
Location ~ Shergill house
Characters in scene ~ Nupur & Ratna

It is the next day (Saturday). Nupur is sitting at the dining table having breakfast in pyjamas. Her mum walks in and sits down opposite her. She is wearing a light pink saree with dark pink boarders.
Ratna - Good morning beta (She smiles)
Nupur - Good morning maa (She looks up and gives a weak smile to her mum)
Ratna - Kya hua Nupur? (she gets up and comes over to Nupur and puts her hand to her forehead) Teri tabiyath toh teek hai?
Nupur - Meri tabiyath teek hai maa. Bas kuch buri kabar suni hai.
Ratna - Buri khabar? Samrat aur Gunjan ke beech kuch hua kya?
Nupur - (She cringes) Uhs bare mein to bhool gayi.... (She sighs) Gunjan meri best friend hai, par kabhi kabhi woh meri samajh mein bilkul nahin aathi. Agar main kisi se pyar karthi, aur shaadi karna chathi, main apko aur bhai ko batha dethi. Par woh! Woh yeh maneh ko bhi tayar nahin ke woh bhai se pyar karthi hai. Woh uncle ke permission ke bina kuch nahin karna chahthi, par agar woh poochegi nahin, useh patha kaise chalega ke unhe mazoor hai ya nahin?.......(She shakes her head) Patha nahin undono ka kya hoga.
Ratna - Nupur sabki family ek jaise nahin ho thi. Maine kabhi tujhe ya teri bhaiyo ko kisi cheese se mana nahin kiya, isliye tujhe mujse kehne mai takleef nahin hoti....Par Gunjan.......? (In deep thoughts) Kya Ravi bhaisaab ab bhi Delhi mein hai?
Nupur - Dia ke dad? Haan ab bhi wahi hai. Kyun?
Ratna - Woh kuch kaam tha....Vaise aaj ka plan kya hai?
Nupur - Plan? Well... Samrat bhaiya office gaye hai, Adhi bhaiya restaurant aur main chali Dia aur Gunjan ke ghar.
Ratna - Tum theeno ke pass apne maa ke liye bilkul bhi waqt nahi (She pouts)
Nupur - Maa.. (She hugs her mum from behind) mera original plan tho tha aapke saath pura din bitana par... Dia ki ek problem hai, solve karna parega.
Ratna - Woh buri khabar jiske bare mein baat karahi thi?
Nupur - Haan. Main chalthi hoon mujhe abhi tayar hona hai. (she makes to pick up her plate and her mum stops her)
Ratna - Tujhe jaldi haina? Tu ja main saaf karloongo.
Nupur - Thank you Maa
(another hug and she goes. She gets ready, then leaves the house.)
Ratna (THOUGHTS)
' Lagtha hai ke Samrat aur Gunjan ki Love Story mujhe hi likni hogi! (Ratna gets the phone and dials a number)
Ratna - Hello? Namaste Ravi Bhaisaab. Main Ratna bol rahi hoon........

Scene 2
Location ~ Shergill family business HQ
Characters in scene ~ Samrat & Benji

Samrat is wearing dark Jeans and a pale pink shirt. He is sitting at his desk in the office deep in thoughts, when he hears a knock on the door.
Samrat
- Come in. (he picks up random papers to make it look like he is reading)
Benji - Ek thu hi hai dost jo bina vajeh mujhe Saturday ko bhi office ane par majboor kar saktha hai.
(Benji strikes a dramatic pose. He is wearing a blue and green T-Shirt and faded ripped jeans)
Samrat
- Bina vajeh nahin Benji, bohut kaam hai!
Benji - Acha? Kaam? (He stands infront of Samrat and bends down twisting his head so it is top down)
Samrat - (Samrat playfully hits him) Aisa kyun karraha hai Benji?
Benji -  Ouch! (He stands up straight) Yeh isliye ke kisine yah is report ko ulta lika hai, ya tu ise ulta par raha hai.
Samrat - (Looks at the file) Woh ... (He looks down sheepishly)
Benji - Dude, main tujhe jaantha hoon, tu office weekends par sirf tab aatha hai jab Ek) tujhe kaam hai, joh aaj... (he takes the file off Samrat and throws it on the desk) nahin hai , aur do)jab tu stress main hota hai, jo abhi tere chehre pe dik raha hai. Bata na, kya hua? Gunjan ke saath problem? (He sits down in the chair opposite the desk)
Samrat - (Frustrated) Sabko aisa kyun lagtha hai ke main hamesha Gunjan ke bare main sochtha hoon?
Benji - Kyunki tu hamesha Gunjan ke bare main hi sochtha hain.
Samrat - (He sighs) Mujhe nahin lagtha yeh Gunjan ki situation itni easily solve hogi. Aur vaise bhi main Gunjan ki nahin, uski cousin, Dia ke bare main soch raha hoon.
Benji - (Benji picks up the report file, again upside down and starts flicking through it) Kaun Dia?
Samrat - Tu toh Dia ko milchuka hena? Usne pichle saal tere ghar re-decorate kiya tha?
Benji - Oh woh ladki? Uska naam Dia hai? Acha? (Samrat looks at Benji questioningly) Uske bare main kyun soch raha hain? Kya hua use?
Samrat - Hua kuch nahin. Kal uske boyfriend ne useh propose ki....
Benji - Kya! (Shocked he stands up) Uski shaadi ho rahi hai?
Samrat - (bewildrered by his reaction) Pehle toh uska naam nahin pehchaan raha tha, aur ab uske mangni ke bare sunke itna chawk raha hai?
Benji - Nahin, woh... (He walks arouns the room avoiding eye contact with Samrat) tune yaad dilaya, toh yaad agayi. Gunjan ki cousin. Jis ladki ne pichle saal mera ghar re-decorate kiya tha.(THOUGHTS - Jis ladki se main pyar kartha hoon) Kise shaadi kar rahi hai?
Samrat - Us ladke ka naam Ranvijay hai. Kal raat main.....(Samrat tells Benji how he went to Gunjan's house, Dia coming home and telling them Ranvijay had proposed and the conversation he had overheard)... Phir jab main ghar aya maine Nupur se baat ki, usne bataya ke Ranvijay ek bohut bara flirt hai, aur use poora yakeen hai ke Ranvijay Dia se pyar nahin karta, toh phir yeh proposal? Mujhe samajh mein nahin aa raha. Dia ek bohut  sweet aur innocent ladki hai, I hope woh useh dokha nahin de raha.
Benji - (Benji turns around and faces Samrat) You're right! Dia ek bohut  sweet aur innocent ladki hai. (He sees his raised eyebrows) I mean... tu ke raha hai to sweet aur innocent hi hogi! Toh kya Nupur itni asani se, apni achi dost ko, aise ladke se shaadi karne degi?
Samrat - Nahin! (He smiles)After all woh meri behen hai! Woh puri koshish karegi key eh shaadi na ho!
Benji- Phew! (Samrat raises his eyebrows again) Uhh... Tune yaha kaam karne bulaya that yah gapeh marne? Kaam kare?

Scene 3
Location ~ Bushan House
Characters in scene ~ Gunjan, Nupur & Dia

Nupur arrives at Gunjan and Dia's house. She is wearing a blue with white printed calf length skirt a turquoise vest top with a 3/4 cardigan on top. She knocks on the door and it is opened by Gunjan. Gunjan is wearing a pale green anarkali suit.
Nupur -
Hi Gunjan.
(She smiles and hugs Gunjan)
Gunjan -
Hi Nupur. Acha hua tum agayi. Dia ki kal ki news sune ke baad mujhe nahin pata ke mein uske liye khush hoon yah sad
. (They walk in to the living room and sit down)
Nupur - (Nupur cringes)
Mujhe toh yakeen hi nahin ho raha ke uhs flirt Ranvijay ne Dia ko Propose kiya. Aur rahi baat khush ya sad hone ki, khush toh mein sirf tab hoongi jab mein Dia ko Ranvijay ko na karne ko convince karlu.

Gunjan -
Nupur ho sakta hai ke Ranvijay ke saath hi Dia ki khushi ho. Dia meri behen hai, mujhe bhi uski fikr hai, par main nahin chathi ke hum bina vajeh useh uske pyar se alag kare.
Nupur -
Gunjan, tum pyar ki baat na karo tho behtar hai (Gunjan is about to speak) aur vaise bhi tum nahin jaanthi ke Bhai ne kal raat kya suna.
Gunjan - (Gunjan frowns)
Samrat? (Nupur nods) Kya suna Samrat ne?
(Nupur tells her what Samrat heard)
Nupur -
Mujhe toh pehle se hi woh teek nahin lag raha tha par iske baad toh mujhe pura yakeen ho gaya hai ke kuch garbar hai, aur tum bhi yeh baat jukla nahin sakthi Gunjan.

Gunjan -
Haan, main bhi nahin jukla sakthi. (She looks worried) ...batch ke jayegi kaha? Uska is baat se matlab kyat ha?
(Just then they see Dia enter the room. She is wearing a short pink night dress)
Dia -
Nupur! (She runs over smiling and hugs Nupur) Main jaanthi thi ke tum subha hote hi mujhe congratulate karne zaroor awoge!
Nupur - Dia (Dia cuts Nupur off)
Dia -Tum kuch kehne se pehle main kuch kehna chahthi hoo. Nupur I know ke tum Ranvijay ko pasand nahin karthi, tumhe laktha hai ke woh bohut bara flirt hai, aur yeh sahi bhi hai, par phir bhi aaj tum mujhe congratulate karne aye mujhe bohut acha laga. Thank you Nupur (She smiles and hugs Nupur again)
Nupur - (Touched by what Dia said) Dia kya tum sure ho ke tum Ranvijay se shaadi karna chahthi ho?
Gunjan - Haan Dia. Abhi tum ne kaha ke woh bohut bara flirt hai, aur phir bhi.....?
Dia - Gunjan. I know ke tum dono meri bohut fikr karte hoon par it's not necessary. Ranvijay sirf flirt karta hai, woh mujhe kabhi dokha nahin de ga. He loves me! (She smiles) Yeh dekho! (She holds out her showing off her ring) Isn't it beautiful?
Nupur - Dia...(She looks at Gunjan who shakes her head. Nupur forces a smile) It is beautiful! ....Tumne Ravi Uncle ko bataya?
Dia - Nahin. Dad abhi Delhi mein hai next week jab ghar ayenge tab suprise karongi! Well guys mujhe Ranvijay ko milne jaana hai. Main jakar tayaar hoti hoon.
(She hugs them both and leaves. Nupur faces Gunjan)
Nupur -
Gunjan. Tumne mujhe kuch kehne se kyun roka?

Gunjan -
Nupur, agar hum Dia ko yeh ab batate toh use lagtha ke hum uski cushion ko cheen rahe hai. Aur vaise bhi Ranvijay ka uhs baat se kya matlab tha, hume hi nahin patha tho hum Dia ko kya batate?
Nupur -
You're right Gunjan bina saboth ke hum Dia ko kuch nahin ke sakthe.  Woh Ranvijay ke pyar mein itni andhi hai ke bina sabooth ke woh humari baat kabhi nahi manegi.
Gunjan -
Haan hume ... (Just then the phone rings) Main dekh kar athi hoon.
Nupur (THOUGHTS) -
Ranvijay ki Sachai Dia ke samne kaise lao? Woh Dia ke samne toh kisike saath flirt bhi nahin kartha. Main Dia ko Ranvijay jaise Ladke se Shaadi kabhi nahin karne doongi! (Gunjan comes back into the room, her face is pale. Nupur rushes over to her and puts her hand on her shoulder)
Nupur -
Kya hua Gunjan?

Gunjan -
Woh.... (Gunjan looks worried) Woh.... Bauji aaj raat ke flights se Mumbhai a rahe hai.
Nupur - Tu bhi na Gunjan (She sighs in relief) khamakha daradiya. Uncle aa rahe hai, yeh toh achi baat hai.
Gunjan - Nahin Nupur. Mujhe ghabrahat ho rahi hai. Bauji... achanak? Aise toh woh kabhi nahin athe.
Nupur - Uffoh Gunjan! Teri yaad arahi hai, isiliye ah rahe honge! (Nupurs phone starts to ring, she gives Gunjan a reassuring smile and picks up)Hello...Namaste! Maa main abhi bhi Gunjan ke ghar........(she smiles) Kya!...... . Kya bhai ko patha hai?......Maa main abhi ghar ayi.... bye Maa! (She puts down the phone and faces Gunjan smiling) Gunjan, mujhe abhi ghar jaan hai!
Gunjan - Abhi? (Confused)Itni jaldi? Abhi toh ayiho!
Nupur - Haan kuch.... urgent kaam hai! (Still smiling! Dia then comes down the stairs) Dia tum tayaar hogayi? Chalo hum saath nikalthe hai! (She grabs Dia's arm and drags her out the house, an also confused Dia looks back and shrugs at Gunjan)
Gunjan (THOUGHTS) - Nupur ko kya hua! Achanak itni khush kyun lag rahi thi? Mujhe bataya bhi nahin!


End of Part 3

Does Gunjan have a reason to be worried?
Will Dia really marry Ranvijay?
And why is Nupur soo happy?
Keep reading my FF to find out!

Thank you for all the comments! Please keep commenting. Will update soon!




Edited by Parvin86 - 15 July 2010 at 4:32pm

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