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lovely start
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Part 2

Scene 1
Location ~ Sharma House
Characters in scene ~ Mayank, Suhaani and Shilpa (their mum)

Continued from previous scene. Mayank , Suhaani & Shilpa (their mum) in the living room.
Shilpa - Hi, mera beta kitna romantic hai. (She looks at Mayank then Suhaani grinning. Mayank looks down shyly)
Mayank - Maa...
Suhaani - Sach bhai, aap itne romantic ho sakthe hai humne kabhi socha bhi nahin. (Also grinning)
Mayank - Maa, joh aap chahte the maine batadiyan ab main apne upar ke office mein jahke apna kaam khatam karu?
Shilpa - Acha jao (Mayank gets up and picks up his briefcase) Are kana toh kake ja!
Mayank - Nahin Maa, mujhe bhook... (Shilpa gives him a stern look) Maa please mujhe bohot kaam hai.
Shilpa - (She sighs) Teek hai, phir main khana tere office mein bijwathi hoon (Mayank is about to decline) Aur teri na nahin chalegi. Tu ya upar khana kayega ya neche humare saath....
Mayank - Teek hai aap upar bijwadena.
Suhaani - Saath kahte to acha lagta bhai.
Mayank - Nahin Suhaani aaj sachi bohut kaam hai. Kal saath kayenge, pakah. Bye Maa (he hugs his mum) Suhaani (hugs Suhaani and is about to leave when he remembers) Suhaani, tujhe mujse baat karni thi naa?
Suhaani - Bhai woh.. (she looks at her mum)... woh (and then her brother)..Kuch nahin bhai, itni zaroori nahin hai. Aap apna kaam kariye.

Mayank goes to his office and works. Shilpa and Suhaani sit down to dinner after sending food up for Mayank.

Scene 2
Location ~ Adhiraj's New (yet to open) Restaurant, Nupur's
Characters in scene ~ Samrat, Nupur Ratna & Adhiraj

Samrat, Nupur and Ratna arrive at the restaurant. When they enter Adhiraj is talking on the phone. He is wearing a light blue short sleeved shirt and faded denim jeans.
Nupur - Bhai! Aap ab bhi kaam karahe hai? (She goes and gives him a hug)
Adhiraj - (Into the phone) Bye. (He puts down the phone, smiles & hugs her back) Nahin...
Samrat - Mujhe to laga humare bina hi tumne kana shuru kardiya hoga (He and Ratna walk over to Adhiraj)
Adhiraj - Bhai...
Ratna - Kaam ke vaje se waqt hi kaha milta hai mere bache koh kane le liye. Dekho kitna pathla ho gaya hai.
(Adhiraj puts his arms over Samrat and Ratna's shoulders and kisses his mum on the check)
Adhiraj - Ab mujhe bhi koi bolne dega? (he smiles) Main kaam nahin karaha tha. Main Benji's se baat kar raha tha.
Samrat - Benji? Dost aur Manager mera hai, tujse kyun baat karaha tha?
Adhiraj - Aapki burayi karaha tha. Just joking bhai. Main use keh raha tha ke woh ugle Friday aapke liye koi meetings ya plans na banaye, kyunki aap ko yahan meri restaurant opening mein hona hai.
Samrat - Adhiraj, main use yeh already kehchuka hoon.
Adhiraj - Ha bhai par aapka kya barosa, pichli baar yaad hai?
Samrat - (He sheepishly looks down) Woh main bhool gaya tha aur... woh bohut important meeting thi.
Adhiraj - Haan aur us vajese mujhe apna opening postpone karna para!
Samrat - Acha mere bhai tune teek kiya Benji ko bata kar! Ab hum chale? Hum sub ko bhook lagi hai.
They all go to the table and start to eat. When they are almost finished a phone starts ringing.
Nupur - Bhai aapka phone baj raha hai. (to Samrat)
Samrat - (Samrat checks his phone ) Mere nahin hai
Nupur - Bhai aapka? (To Adhiraj, who shakes his head)
Ratna - Tere bag se lag raha hai, tera hoga!
Nupur - Haan Lag to aise raha hai, par mera phone ka toh battery dead hai. (She looks in her bag and takes out a phone) Oh god! (She makes a face and answers it) Hello Mrs Shukla... jee nahin main Nupur bol rahin hoon ... woh uska phone galti se shayad mere paas a gaya..... Acha..... Nahin koi problem nahin, main use batha dungi ke woh aap ko aaj hi phone kare. Accha bye.
Ratna - Kiska phone tha?
Nupur - Woh humari ek client hai jiske saath Gunjan kaam kar rahi hai. Woh apne pati ko surprise karne ke liye apna naya ghar decorate kar rahi hai. Achanak unhe aaj patha chala ke unke husband kal raat apne business trip se wapas a rahe hai. Jo business trip agle hafte khatam hone wali thi.....(She looks at her brothers) Bhai main aapme kisiki car le sakthi hoon, mujhe Gunjan ko uska phone lautana hai, thaki woh saab kaam kal subha khatam kar sake.
Adhiraj - Itni raat ko akele? (He frowns shaking his head) Nahin, main chala.... (Then he sees a golden opportunity, he winks at Nupur grinning) Bhai jayenge naa.. Hai na bhai?
Samrat - Main? Adhi....
Nupur - Haan bhai (Also grinning) Bhai aap Gunjan ko uska phone lautayenge, aur main aur Maa Adhi bhaiya ke saath ghar chale jayenge.
Samrat - Adhi bhi toh ja saktha haina phone dehne?
Ratna - Nahin. Nupur aur Adhi sahi ke rahe hai, Adhi itne der se kaam kar raha hai, woh thak gaya hoga (Adhi gives a fake yawn), Tumhi jao Samrat. (Nupur and Adhiraj grin at Samrat)
Samrat - Acha teek hai (He holds out his hand and Nupur hands him the phone, he leaves the restaurant to go to Gunjan's house)
Ratna - (She looks at Nupur & Adhiraj) Kya baat hai tum dono useh itna force jyun kar rahe the?
Adhiraj - (Looks at Nupur) Nahin Maa woh to bhai ke balai ke liye keh rahe the. (He bites his tongue when he realises he said too much)
Ratna - Balai? (She looks at Nupur) Nupur beta tum batoa, kuch chal raha hai kya?
Nupur - Maa (Nupur holds Ratna's hand) Aapko bhai par vishwas hai?
Ratna - Haan...
Nupur - Aapko Gunjan pasand hai?
Ratna - Haan, par...
Nupur - Toh phir par var kuch nahin. Waqt aane par aapko sab patha chaljayega.
Ratna - Main toh sirf ye keh rahi thi ke kuch agar chal raha hai toh... (she suddenly smiles) toh main Samrat ki fikar chor ke Adhi ke liye ladki dhond thi.
Nupur - Maa (She smiles and hugs her mum)
Adhiraj - Maa aap bhool rahe hai, ke meri shaadi nahin ho sakthi. Woh isliye kyunki....
Nupur/Ratna - Jab tumhari shaadi hogi Mumbhai ki sari ladkiyan ghum ke mare suicide karlenge. (The say together, as they have heard it all before)
Ratna - Par ek din aisa bhi ayega bachu, jab tumhe aisa lagega ke ek ladki ke elava, Mumbhai mai kya, is duniya mein koi aur ladki nahin hai.
Adhiraj - Aisa kabhi nahin hoga Maa, kyunki is duniya mein kahi ladkiya hai, kisi ki ankhen achi hai to kisiki baal, kisiki....
Nupur - Bhai Shahrukh khan ki Dialogue choro. Mujeh toh us din ka intazaar hai jab aap sari duniya ko bula kar ek ladki se pyaar karenge.

Scene 3
Location ~ Sharma House
Characters in scene ~ Mayank and Suhaani

Suhaani enters Mayank's office.
Suhaani - Bhai? Aap busy ho? Main baad mein athi hoon.
Mayank - Nahin Suhaani (He switches off his computer) Kaam aaj ke liye khatam. Ao kya baat karna hai?
Suhaani - Woh... (She comes and sits on the seat opposite Mayanks desk) Bhai woh...
Shilpa - Knock knock (She comes in holding 2 small bowls) Apne do sweet bache ke liye garma garam sweet rasmalai (She looks at her children) Kya hua? Disturb kiya kya?
Suhaani - Nahin Maa, undar ao. (She looks at Mayank) Main woh bhai se keh rahi thi ke..... ke.... (She remembers an article she read in the paper) ke agle hafte Friday, woh Nupur's line ke restaurants ka naya branch yaha paas hi kul raha hai. Hum sab ko saath jaana chahiye.
Shilpa - Are wah kitna acha idea hai. Kitni din hogaye, kahi bahar kane nahin gaye. Mayank tum apne calendar par note kar lo ke Friday raat tum koi kaam nahin karoge, Hum sab saath jayenge. Ab jaldi rasmalia kahlo, tandi ho jayegi. Main chali sone, tum dono bhi dehr math karna. (She leaves the room)
Suhaani - Main bhi chali sone bhai. (She gets up to leave)
Mayank - Suhaani. Kya tu yehi kehne ke liye ayithi? Restaurant ke bare mein?
Suhaani - (attempts to smile) Haan bhai, yehi kehne ayithi. Good night bhai. (She leaves the room)
Mayank (THOUGHTS) - Suhaani itni pareshaan kyu lagrahi hai? Zaroor koi baat hai. Woh restaurant jaane ki baat karne nahin ayithi.
Suhaani is walking down the passage to her room.
Suhaani (THOUGHTS) - Kyun main bhai ko bata nahin pa rahi? Main jaanthi hoon woh samjenge to phir...? Aur agar main bhai ko nahin bata pa rahi, mai maa ko kaise...? (Lost in thoughts Suhaani goes to her room and eventually falls asleep)

Scene 4
Location ~ Bushan House
Characters in scene ~ Samrat, Gunjan, Dia & Ranvijay

Samrat parks his car outside Gunjan's house and walks up to the door. He rings the door bell and starts to tuck in his shirt.
Gunjan - Kya Dia, tum phirse apne chabi ghar blool gayi? (Her voice can be heard behind the door. She opens the door and sees Samrat) Samrat? (They stare at each other in that romantic way)
Samrat - (Samrat shakes himself out of the trance) Gunjan itne raat ko, tumne bina pooche darwasa kol diya. Koi aur hota to?
Gunjan - (Quietly) Koi aur hi hai Samrat. (She looks down)Tum yaha kyun aye ho?
Samrat - Chinta math karo Gunjan. Main tumhe pareshaan karne nahin aya. (He takes her phone out of his pocket and hands it to her) Tumhara phone, galti se Nupur ke paas agaya. Mrs Shukla ka phone ayatha unhe aaj hi phone kar le na, urgent hai. (He turns around to leave)
Gunjan - Samrat! (He half turns towards her) Tumne mujhe kabhi pareshaan nahin kiya.(He fully turns)
Samrat - Gunjan...
Gunjan - Please Samrat! Main tumhe pehle bhi keh chuki hoon. Main apni bauji ki bohut izaat karthi hoon, aur meri shaadi tab hongi jab woh chahte hai, jiske saath woh chahte hai. Main tumse pyar nahin kar sakthi.
Samrat - Main jaanthi hoon Gunjan. Par tum yeh bhi toh nahin kehti ke tum mujse pyar nahin karthe. Tum apne feeling ke bare mein baat hi nahin karthi. Pease Gunjan kuch toh kaho!
Gunjan - Samrat main....
Dia - Gunjan! (Dia comes running and hugs Gunjan) Main aaj itni kush hoon! (She sees Samrat) Samrat tum yaha? (She hugs him too) Nupur aur Gunjan ko main pehle bata na chahti thi par tum yaha ho to phir....main ruk nahin paoongi! Guys, Ranvijay ne mujhe aaj propose kiya!
Gunjan - Kya? Kab? Kaise? (Gunjan is shocked)
Dia - Gunjan! Congratulate nahin karogi? (She opens her arms wide)
Gunjan - Congratulations Dia (She hugs Dia again)
Samrat - Congratulations Dia
Dia - Thank you guys. I'm so happy! Chalo Gunjan hum Nupur ko phone kar ke suprise karthe hai. Tum bhi ao Samrat.
Samrat - Nahin Dia main chalta hoon. Congratulations again! (He hugs Dia again then looks at Gunjan) Bye Gunjan.
Gunjan - Bye Samrat
Gunjan watches as Samrat walks off and then follows Dia inside. Samrat is walking towards his car when he over hears someone talking. A man is talking on the phone in his car. When he turns slightly, Samrat recognises him as Ranvijay.
Ranvijay - ....ab Dia batch ke jayegi kaha? (Ranvijay drives off)
Samrat (THOUGHTS) - Yeh toh Ranvijay tha. Kya keh rahta?... batch ke jayegi kaha? Koi is tara baat karta hai apne mangetar ke bare mein? Nupur sahi kethi hai, Ranvijay sahi ladka nahin hai! Kuch toh garbar hai!

End of part 2

Kya Samrat ko uska pyaar milega?
Kya Dia Ranvijay ki sachai jaan payegi?
Kya hai Suhaani ka raaz?
Keep reading my FF to find out!
Sorry no Benji, will definetly add him in Part 3.

It is a bit disheartening that I had over a hundred views and only 9 comments. Don't know what to think, is it because readers didn't like it?
Anyway a great big thank you to everyone who left comments on here as well as those who PM'd me. It's nice to know you like my story.

Edited by Parvin86 - 19 July 2010 at 6:39pm

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hey nice one i liked it very much

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hey lovely updates.. :) totally loved it!! Dont worry when u start a new FF, a lot of times u may not get as many comments as u would like to have, but then slowly people would read and the word wud spread.,.. !

so cheer up and update soon ..I guess more u start writing on the couple interactions the more will be the audience..

dont be disheartened, u are wonderful..keep writing!! :)

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nice prt dear........
plz cont soon!

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Lovely part loved it continue soon

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