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Posted: 19 October 2010 at 2:57pm | IP Logged

Sorry took so long to write this part, but I got married in august and have been really busy.  

Part 6

Scene 1
Location ~ Shergill House - Living Room
Characters in scene ~ Bauji, Ratna, Adhiraj, Nupur, Samrat, Benji,Dia & Gunjan

Continued from previous part. Gunjan and Samrat stare at each other. Nupur who is sitting next to Samrat, winks at Gunjan who smiles and looks down shyly. Dia leans close to Gunjan.
Dia - Kaisa laga suprise? (Gunjan smiles and faces away from Dia)
Ratna - Bhaisaab. Lagtha hai hume bacho ko akele mein baat karne ka mauka dehna chahiye. Tab tak hum baat karthe hai?
Bauji - Haan haan, kyun nahin. Dia, Gunjan? Tum dono Samrat aur uske bhai behen ko humara ghar dikhawo.
Dia - Jee Tauji! (Samrat, Adhiraj Nupur, Samrat, Benji, Dia & Gunjan all make their way out of the room)
Bauji - Behenji, woh ladka joh Nupur aur Samrat ke saath aya....?
Ratna - Woh Benji hai, Samrat ka dost, aap usko mere beta jaise hi samajiye...... 
(The conversation becomes inaudible as they get further away from the living room)
Adhiraj -
Bhai? (He stops and takes out his phone) mujhe ek phone karna tha. Yaha network nahin hai toh main bahar jaatha hoon.
(He smiles, gestures to the others and goes outside)
Nupur -
Bhai, mujhe..... bathroom jaana hai, baad mein milthi hoon
(She smiles and leaves too. Dia looks at Samrat and Gunjan and smiles)
Dia -
Mujhe un dono ki thara bahana banana nahin atha toh... main bhi jathi hoon. (she takes Benji by the arm) Chalo Benji!
Gunjan - Dia? Dia...(Gunjan tries to stop her but to no avail, she finds herself standing alone in the passage with Samrat) Woh sab hume akela...

Samrat -
Jab hum saath hain toh akele kaise? (He smiles and comes and stands close to Gunjan) Ghar dehkne chale?

Scene 2
Location ~ Shergill House - Dia's Room
Characters in scene ~ Benji, Dia, Adhiraj & Nupur

Dia and Benji enter Dia's room.
Dia - Acha hua humne unh dono ko akele chor diya. I'm pretty sure ke aaj yeh rishta paka hojayega. Toh Benji.... Anything new in your life?
Benji - Mere life mein toh nahin par suna hai tumhare life mein khush kabri hai.
Dia - Mere life mein...? (She frowns at him)
Benji - Haan! Suna hai tum kisi Ranvijay se shaadi
...(Dia puts her hand over his mouth, and Benji just stares into her eyes. Eye lock lasts a few seconds, then Dia feels awkward and takes her hand off his mouth)
Dia-
Sorry, woh... Dad aur Tauji ko bataya nahin is bare mein. (Benji turns around and faces away from her)
Benji - Kyun? Dar lag raha hai?
Dia -Nahin, Dad Delhi mein hai, jab ayenge main unhe batadoongi
Nupur - Tum dono yaha ho? (Nupur comes into Dia's room followed by Adhiraj) Maine tumhe kaha kaha dhoonda!  (She smiles at them both) Bhai, bhabhi ke beech kuch hua?
Adhiraj - Main abhi unh dono ko dehk kar a raha hoon. Woh kuch baat hi nahin ka rahe.
Benji - Yeh ankho ki boli hai bhai. Jab tujhe pyaar hojayega tab samajh mein ayega.
Adhiraj -Haan, tujhe toh bara pyaar ke bare mein patha hai.....
Dia - Come on guys! Ab tum dono shuru hogaye? Chalo hume jaa kar dehkna chahiye ke Aunty aur Tauji kya baat kar rahe hai.

All four leave and go to the living room.


Scene 3
Location ~ Shergill House - Living Room
Characters in scene ~ Bauji, Ratna, Adhiraj, Nupur, Benji, Dia & Samrat

Bauji - .......meri saab se bari daulat meri beti Gunjan hai. Yeh sab kuch jo aap dehk rahi hai, mere bhai Ravi ka, aur uske baad meri bathijee Dia ka hai. (He joins his hands together) Par phir bhi maine apni mehnath se apni beti ki shaadi ke liya kuch paise jama kiya hai, jo saab main dahej ke thor par......

Ratna - (Ratna interrupts him and puts her hands over his)
Yeh kya ke rahe hai bhaisaab? Hume koi Dahej nahin chahiye. Hume to sirf aapki beti chahiye. (She looks up to see Dia, Nupur, Adhi and Benji enter. She stands up) Areh! Tum charo aa gaye? Samrat aur Gunjan kaha hai? (She sees Samrat enter behind them) Samrat, Gunjan kaha hai?
Samrat - Gunjan apne kamre mein gayi hai. (Bauji stands up)
Bauji - Aap sab betiye! Main Gunjan se milkar aatha hoon. (He looks at Dia) Beta tum sab ko chai nashtha do.
Dia - Jee Tauji

He leaves the room as everyone sits down to eat and chat.


Scene 4
Location ~ Shergill House - Gunjan's Room
Characters in scene ~ Gunjan & Bauji + Samrat (
sort of)

Gunjan is sitting at her dressing table, dazing at the mirror with a smile on her face.
Flashback!
Samrat -
Jab hum saath hain toh akele kaise? Ghar dehkne chale?(Gunjan nods her head and walk around the house for a while. After a while she stops in front of her room)
Gunjan - Samrat mein...(she looks at him hesitantly and looks away)...mein....
Samrat -
Gunjan, tum kuch kaho, uske pehle mein kuch kehna chaatha hoon. (Gunjan looks up at him) Main tumhari bohot izat kartha hoon Gunjan. Tum chahthi thi ke tumhare Bauji tumhari shaadi ki bare mein faisla kare, isliye maine maa ko humare bare mein nahin bataya. Par ab jab woh jaan gaye hai, main bohot khush hoon. Main khush hoon ke unhe patha chala aur woh humare rishthe ki baath lekar Bauji ke paas aye. Kyunki ab, sab kuch waise hi ho raha hai jaise tum chathi thi. Humari arranged marriage hone jarahi hai. Bauji ko dekhar patha chaltha hai ke woh humare parivaar se bohot khush hai, toh ab sirf tumhari haan baki hai Gunjan. Aur tum is faisla karo, ise pehle tumhe ek baath bathani zaruri hai. (He takes her and stares into her eyes) I love you Gunjan! (Gunjan gives a little gasp and she tears up. They stare into each other's eyes and then suddenly Samrat lets go of her hand and takes a step back) Hume wapas jaana chahiye (He starts to walk away but stops and looks back) Mujhe intazar hai us din ka jab tum bhi mujse apni dil ki baath kaho gi.
End Flashback!
Gunjan (THOUGHTS) - Meri tharaf se haan hai Samrat aur jald se jald main tumhe apne dil ki baath bathane wali hoon! (Gunjan looks up and sees Bauji's reflection smiling at her in the mirror) Bauji! (She stands up and faces him)
Bauji -
Meri bachi! (He comes over and cups her face in his hands) Main to aya tha tujhse tera faisla poochne, par ab poochne ki zaroorathhi  nahi. Jawab tere chehre pe lika hai! (He tears up and they hug, he then takes her hand) Chal! Hum Samdanji aur damadji ko ja kar khush  khabri dehthe hai!

Scene 5
Location ~ Shergill House - Living Room
Characters in scene ~ Bauji, Ratna, Adhiraj, Nupur, Benji, Dia, Samrat & Gunjan

Bauji and Gunjan walk into the living room and everyone stands up and stares at them expectantly. Bauji walks over to the table with a straight face and picks up a plater or sweets.
Bauji - Moo meeta ki jiye samdanji (He smiles) Humari tharaf se haan hai! (Everyone gets excited and feeds each other sweets. Ratna takes out some bangles from her bag and goes to Gunjan)
Ratna - Bahu, yeh hamari khandani kangan hai. Yeh hamesha hamari ghar ki bari bahu ko diya jaatha hai. Aaj ye tumhare hue. (She puts them on for her) aur tum hamari!


Scene 6
Location ~ Sharma House ' Mayank's Office
Characters in scene ~ Mayank & Shilpa

Mayank is sitting at his desk reading a newspaper. He is wearing light blue jeans and a maroon and beige striped top. Shilpa enters the room, she is wearing a light yellow shelwar suit.
Shilpa - Are? Tu abhi tak yaha hai? (She puts her hands on her hips and frowns at him) Tujhe dosto ke saath bahar jaana tha na aaj? (Mayank frowns)
Mayank - Nahin to...Mera matlab haan, jaana hai na. Mai abhi nikalne wala hoon.
(He puts down the paper and quickly gets up, Shilpa stares at him intently)
Shilpa -
Tujhe sach much dosto se milna haina? Tune mujse jooth toh nahin bola?

Mayank -
Nahin Maa... mera matlab haan maa, milna hai na! Mujhe jaana chahiye, warna late ho jawonga! (He leaves the room; Shilpa stares after him and then suddenly smiles)
Shilpa (THOUGHTS) -
Mujhe patha hai ke tu dosto se milne nahin ja raha hai, after all Maa hoon main teri, ithna toh jaanthi hoon tujhe! Par koi baath nahin, is bahane tu  ghar se bahar to gaya!

Scene 7
Location ~ Samrat's Car
Character in scene ~ Samrat, Nupur & Benji

Samrat is driving the car with Nupur in the passenger seat and Benji in the back on the way home. Samrat is grinning to himself.
Nupur- Bhai! I am so HAPPY! Main itni khush hoon... itni khush hoon... toh aap kitne khush honge?
(She nudges him with her elbow Samrat blushes slightly)
Benji -
Oye Hoye! Yeh toh Dulhan ki thara Sharma raha hai
! (Samrat gives him a dirty look in the mirror)
Samrat -
Shut up Benji, warna main tera gala daba doonga!

Nupur -
BHAI! Stop the car!
(Samrat does an emergency break)
Samrat -
Kya hua! (He stares at Nupur) Main sachme use marne nahin wala tha!
Nupur - Sorry bhai! Woh mujhe is mall mein jaana tha. Do din se mera mobile kaam nahin karaha. Mobile ki dukaan mein dikana hai.
Samrat - Abhi? In kapro mein? Kal ajaana? Ya phir ghar jaake, kapre badal kar ajaana?
Nupur - Nahin bhai. Kal kaam hai. Kal kaise awongi? Aur kapre badal kar ayi thoh dukaan band ho jayegi, aaj Sunday hai na!
Samrat - Ok. Chali ja (Nupur makes out to leave the car) Tujhe lene kab awu?
Nupur - Nahin bhai aap math aana. Patha nahin kab kaam khatam hoga. Main Taxi se ajaongi!
Samrat - Acha teek hai! Koi problem ho to phone karna.
Nupur - Ok bhai (Nupur hugs Samrat) Bye bhaiya, bye Benji. (She gets out the car, waves them off and heads into the mall to the mobile shop)

Scene 8
Location ~ Shopping Mall
Characters in scene ~ Mayank &
Nupur

Mayank is strolling around the Mall aimlessly.
Mayank (THOUGHTS) - Maa ko toh bata diya ke dosto se milne ja raha hoon. Par ab kis dost ko dondo? Mera toh ek bhi itna acha dost nahin hai jisko main itne short notice par milne ko bula saku!
Mayank stops as he notices a crowd of people. Police officers have broken up an illegal gambling/betting stall and are attempting to arrest the men responsible. The men resist arrest and start to get violent with the police causing the surrounding public to panic and cause a stampede.


Nupur leaves the mobile shop in a temper. The Mobile repairman had aggressively refused to fix the phone for free without a valid receipt. She had only bought the phone a month ago, and although she could afford to buy 20 phones to replace the faulty one, in her eyes it was about principles. She threw the faulty phone in the dumpster and vowed to buy one from another shop were the sales persons were more forthcoming to customer needs.
As she exits the Mall she notices a crowd of people. Suddenly the crowd starts to rush around attempting to move away from whatever is happening. Nupur gets caught up in the ruckus and finds herself being pushed about. A man barges into her as he runs from a police officer and she finds herself falling. Afraid, she closes her eyes but as she is falling she finds herself steadied by strong arms. She waits a few seconds to get her breath back and then opens her eyes....

Mayank attempts to get away from the crowd but just as he is about to move away, one of the criminals rushes past him after barging into a woman. Mayank sees the woman about to fall and rushes to catch her. Her gets to her in time and catches her before she hits the floor. Her eyes are closed and he stares at her face. Then, she opens her eyes....


End of Part 6!

I didn't spend much time writing this part but hope you like it. Please press 'LIKE'  and  leave feedback.
Thanks for reading!


Edited by Parvin86 - 19 October 2010 at 3:06pm

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congrats for ur wedding.......beautiful and lovely update.....cont soon

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awesome update
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congratulations 4 ur wedding!!!
and lovely update..
do continue soon
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oh  congo  dear!! >:D<
nice  part  cont  soon..........

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this is a gr8 part, i was worried u had stopped writing..so glad u r back!! :)

and congrats and wish u a gr8 married life ahead Smile

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