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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
add me to yar i have send you a buddy request
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Nice start
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
Nice start dear

Thanks for PM

Waiting for next part

Love,
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
wow
 
your first ss
 
congratulations
 
love the concept yaar
 
the first part was amazing
 
 
i am eagerly waiting for the next part
 
continue soon
 
luv
 
mahima
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
Gus start plzzzz cont soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
Part 2:

at khandelwal mansion..

A lady enter the mansion..

Maa:aarey mrs.shregill aao betho..kasie ho

Sm:haan main thik hun aur batoo nupur khahan hia??

Maa:who rosh aur gul ke sath bahar gayi hia..

Sm:thik hai ..nd smiles

Maa:aur bolo kasie chal raha hai tumhara kaam??

Sm:achey se cahl raha hai samrat ni pure zemidaar jo samhal le hai..woh kaam main itna busy ho gay hai ki usey uskey past ke bahery main yaad karney ki bhi fursat nahi hia..

Maa:aur itney dino ki baad aye ho kya kaam hai..mrs.kalpana bata rahi thi ki usey fir se mumabi le jaa rhai ho??

Sm:haan..maine doctors se bhi baat karli hai ..aur doctors se ne mujhe bataya hai ke usey ab hum phele jasie bana saktey hai..

Ma:aur uska pari'

Jus then nups,roshn nd gul enters..maa change the topic

Maa:lo anamika bhi aa gyi..dekho beeta tum se koi milney yae hai..

Roshini :(mummres in nups ear )offoho!! Yeh yahna kyun aye hai ..mujhe yeh bilku nahi pasand bin buley mahmaa ki tarha kyuna aajati haii..(roshini hates sm)

Ana:rosh aise nahi khtey..

Anamika :namastey aunty kasie hai aap??

Sm:main thik hoon beta tum kasi hoo??aur gul kasi hia..??

Ana:main bhi thik hoon aur gul bhi..

 Sm take gul..

Sm:wasie beta main soch rahi thi ki kyun na tum mumbia a joa whan bhut sare achey industiers hai tum waha join karlo..main wahan ki bhut ach company ko janti honn.kyun na tum wahi join karlo'

A:mu..ba.i..

Sm &maa lokks each other

Gul was tied so she slept

Sm:kya hua beta

A:haan.. han..kuch nhai

Maa:main gul ko andar room main le kar jaa rhi hoon

Maa takes gul nd goes to the room

Maa comes back

Sm:aur mrs kahdelwal main soch rahi thi ki rosh bhi yahn akle ho jaey gi toh kyun na rosh ko bhi mumbai le chaloon..wahna toh bhut cahey achey colaages hai..kyun rosh tum chal raho hoo na

Rosh:haan main chal rahi hoon

Sm:tho chalo aapni packing shuru kar do..\

Ana:matlab??

Maa:matlab ki tum dono.. kal mumbi jaa rhaey hai..

Jus then sm cel start ringing..

Sm:excuse me..

After some tym sm comes..

Sm:srry mrs.kahdelwal par mujhe aaj hi jana hai who actually mujhe kuch meeting attend karni hia'.rosh anamika tum dono mumbia akele aana padega..any problem..

A:nai aunty  koi problem nhai hai..

Sm:toh thik hia tum log kal mujhe ..subha 10:30 am ko mil rahi hoo..

A:thik hia aunty..

Sm leaves ..

Rosh:cahlo di packing kartey hai..hum fir 3 saal baad mubai jaa rhey hai..

Anamika smiles..

Nupur & rsoh r packing they stuuf..wahile packing nupur goes out of the room

Rosh:di wasie 'kyun na hum papa mama ki sath hi mumbai chaley jaye..waise bhi papa kal se tho office nahi jaa rthey hai.toh..(then rosh stops )(

Rosh( in her mind):ek min rosh tu inni der se baat kar rahi hai aur teri di ne tujhe kuch answer hi nahi diya..

Rosh: di aap sun rahi hoo ..mian jab se booli jaa rahi hoon aur aa..

Nd she truns..

She find on one in the room..

Rosh:dii!!

Nupur come back to the room

Anamika:ky hua rosh tum intna chila kyun rahi hoo??

Rosh:kuch nahi..aap kahna gayi thi..

Anamika:main tho bas yun hai bahar gayi thi..

rosh:kya hua di jabhi mian apko mumbia ka naam suntey hi app mujhe kuch pareshan lagti hoo

a:pata nhai rosh..kyun mujhe mumbai ka naam suntey hi aise lagta hai ki mere koi aapna mera intezaar kar rahi hai..pata nahi mumbia ka naam suntey hi mere dil mein ek ajjeeb sa ishsah hota hia

Rosh first gets confused with her sentec then she smiles

Rosh:b'cuz  aapna matlab ki who ki who jagha jo hum ne 3 yrs phele chod kar  yahna shimla main aye the usi jahga hum wapis se jaa rhaey hai..

Jus then maa enters the room with gul..how was palying with nupurs daiiry

Maa:chalo beta jaaldi se packing karo tumhe raat ki 8 ko hi nikalna hai uar tum abhi tak yeh baat ey kartey baati hoo

Rosh:mom hum isliye baat kar rahey hai kyun ki hamri packing ho gayi hai..

Maa:wsaie beta main tum teeno ko bhut miss karogi..

Nupur:kyun miss krogi hum thodi na hamesha ki liya jaa rhaey hia..

Rosh:haan aur agar hum wahan hamesh ki liya ka bhi rhaey hai tuh koi problem nahi hia..

Maa:who kasie??

Rosh:who asie ki miane ne suna tha ki dad office se reted ho rahey hia toh papa ka paln tha ki who mumbia shift hojatey hia..

Nupur:kyun miss krogi hum thodi na hamesha ki liya jaa rhaey hia..

Rosh:haan aur agar hum wahan hamesh ki liya ka bhi rhaey hai tuh koi problem nahi hia..

Maa:who kasie??

Rosh:who asie ki miane ne suna tha ki dad office se reted ho rahey hia toh papa ka paln tha ki who mumbia shift hojatey hia..

 

Nupur:hmm..(with a smile)

Jus then  then  dairy slpis from  guls hand

Gul starts criyng

Maa:chup hojao beta..chup hojao..

Maa  leavs with gul..

Rosh takes the book..opens it..

Rosh:di aap ki yeh gaan abhi bhi aap iske pechey padi hua hia..aap dusra gaana likh saktey hai na..

(anamika use to write the song but incomplet..she trys to compltey but can't)

rosh:kya hua di??

A:nahi hua hia pata nahi yeh mujhe yeh gana bahut adhura adhura lagta hai'.

R:acha acha chalo aaab humey  nikalna chaey.

Rosh never want her di to get upset

A:haan chalo..

They take maa&papa blessing and leve the place..

Railway staion:

Both came to know that the train is delay for hour

R:hmm..di mujhe bore ho raha hia..pata nahi mera train ka kya haal hoga'

Nd satrts walikg to the other direction..

A:areey rosh kahna  jaa rhi hoo..

rosh:kahi nahi abhi aye..

a:haan par samhal kar jaoo

Rosh:di kya mian gul ko bhi le jaoon??

A:haan le joa..par samhal ka joa..yahna bhut bheed hia..

Rosh:thik hia di..

Rosh take gul nd goes from there leaving nupur behind..

After some time..

A girls comes holding mayapari

After seeing the "mayapari"nupur satrt get flashes ns some word r echoing in her ers"mayank meri mayapari kahna hia.."


precap:nupur , nd rosh in excel collage



srry for the mistakes..

plz do comment..

Edited by angel.ridz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
lovley update but yaar is gul is nupur
s daughter
lovley update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
lovely update janu
beautifully thought
update the nxt part soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
keep it up
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
Wonderful update
just loved it
waiting for mayur meeting
update soon
thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20

awesome update lov

tnx4 d pm n update soon plz