Posted:
13 years ago
Ok Here is My Review i am going to write it in very frank way Please don't Mind ---
Poem 1 It was a very well written Poem... Poet use all personal likings about Actor and Character in a poem and this is what making is well presented... But just felt bit dragging and rhythm Problem quite a few times... Moreover, Instead of Daya and ACP, agar Dayanand aur Satam Sir ki baat hoti jyada, It would be much better... Because it is about Aditiya.. Baki not saying much It Was a Fantastic try and I liked it ... Love the title 👏 👏 Kudos to Poet to use feelings as a Poem 👏
Poem 2 I liked the title.. very well doing justice to Poem... Loved your Rhythm...First part for personality of Aditiya and second about wishes.. very well planned Work... Very well used of some Urdu words ..I liked it ....Keep Up This Work 👏 👏 Kudos to Poet for arrange everything with rhythm and for well presented work
Poem 3 It is beautiful and so cute one..I would loved it agar yeh Abhijeet nahi Aditiya Sir ke bare main hoti.. I think Poet might mistaken by Actor and Character ... Nowhere discussed about Aditiya As it is his Birthday... Liked the poem but concept was wrong (personally felt) .. respect to fact Poet tried to write and wrote in a beautiful way, Kudos to Poet ..Liked it.. Would have Loved it agar Abhijeet Sir ka Birthday hota but still a Superb Work.. 👏 👏
Poem 4 This one is Rhythmic a bit emotional one for me... described some really good facts.. Very well planned in two parts and full justice with both parts.. Poets presented some personal feelings as well..agar yar app aise Frayad kroge, Bhagwaan will for sure bless Aditiya Sir with all happinesses in life.. Loved that You used Dayanand Shetty instead of Daya.. Good thinking .. felt great that you also thought about his family and covered all the personals and professional areas with duya's ...Very well done.. Keep it up..Kudos to writer to mentioned all the factors in emotional way about personal and professional Life of Aditiya Sir 👏 👏
Poem 5 Hmmm Poem in English ... Very well Explained all the factors personal and professional.. I was trying to translate this poem in hindi 😆 and it comes out in beautiful way....felt rhythm problem on some occasion but it is really a good work hehe Abhi-Daya together yaha wishes main bhi dil ki baat keh he di Poet ne...Nice presented personal emotions.. very well done kudos to writer 👏 👏
Poem 6 I liked the Title ... rhythm was good... I loved 1st stanza So true it is!!! but agar 2-3 aur stanza hote ton kya baat thi!! never the less Kudos to this Poet 👏 👏
I have tried to be bit open up and frank to poets with my review please koi bhi bura mat manana.. if anyone has felt that i said something wrong somewhere mujhe PM karna ..I will clear my point.. But kehna padhega it is really a superb work and judges will have to do work hard in order to choose winners .. Everyone is a winner here.. 👏 👏
Moreover, it was review about more than 1 stanza poems .i.e Big Ones .. will come later with smaller and cuter ones .. Would love to See Other Reviews Edited by bhinder.kamboj - 13 years ago