Baat Hamari Pakki Hai


Baat Hamari Pakki Hai
Baat Hamari Pakki Hai

Love beyond eternity..Shravan and Sachi updt pg85

scent_flower Goldie

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Posted: 08 July 2010 at 4:40am | IP Logged

I'm gonna write a small fan fic on Shravan and Sachi..

It starts with Shravan in his room thinking how to break up with Sachi..

He calls Tara..
Tara:Shravan,I am busy.
Shravan:Main tumse bauhot zaroori baat karna chahta hoon..please,abhi milo at Cafe hill top.
Tara:Shravan,I can't..may be some other day..
Shravan:Please,Tara maan jao..
Tara:Ok,fine..I will come.

Sachi's jijaji wants to take the sister in law's out for dinner..Everbody is going to Cafe Hill top..

Shravan was sitting on a table,waiting eagerly for Tara..He was desperate to tell her that he loves her and wants to marry her. He was excited and nervous..his right leg shacking badly and his eyes constantly on his watch and the entrance.He was hoping that nothing goes wrong this time and he is able to tell her. He was checking the ring in his was there.
'Tara ,jaldi aa jao..'..he said to himself..

Bhabhi,Sachi,Shreya,Sachi's brother and Jijaji were getting inside Taxi..
Sachi was wearing a beautiful pink anarkali suit with golden border..
Jijaji to Sachi:Sachi,main apna wallet ghar par bhool gaya..tum le aao..
Sachi:Par Jijaji,Taxi aa gayi hai..
Sachi was nervous infront of him.She had a bad feeling about this.
But she nodded and went inside.Jijaji gave an evil grin.
Sachi's elder sister:Sachi kahan ja rahi hai?
Jijaji:woh kuch bhool gayi hai,wahi lene ja rahi hai..
Sachi's elder sister:but Taxi aa gayi hai,hum wait bhi to nahi karte hain taxi waale..
Jijaji:haan,yeh toh hai..waise bhi hum sab fit nahi honge ek Taxi mein..tum log jao..main Sachi ko lekar doosri Taxi mein aata hoon..
Sachi's elder sister:par..tum?main rook jati hoon..
Jijaji:Nahi,tum se daat nahi khani mujhe ki do ladkiyon ko akele he chod diya..
Sachi's elder sister nodded and left with the others.
Sachi returned with his wallet..
She was shocked to see everybody gone.A familiar fear started gripping her and her hands started to tremble. She saw Jijaji standing alone and smiling at her.She gulped. Her first instinct was to turn back and leave..but too late Jijaji was coming towards her.
The more he moved forward the more it scared her..
She was praying for a miracle..
Jijaji stood in front of her staring at her as if he was scanning her..
She looked down nervously..
"arre Sachi beta..",came a male voice from behind.
Sachi quickly turned around and saw Mamaji coming towards her. She breathed a sigh of relief.
she smiled at him. Jijaji frowned and quickly changed the way he was staring at her.
Mamaji:Arre,beta mujhe laga tum sab chale gaye honge toh main Sachi ko chod doon..
Jijaji:Nahi papa,main Sachi ki hi wait kar raha tha..
Sachi was uncomfortable again.
Mamaji:acha,yeh toh bauhot acchi baat hai,chalo main tum dono ko chod deta hoon..
Jijaji:arre nahi papa,iski kya zaroorat hai..main le jaunga Sachi ko..
Mamaji:Nahi beta,mujhe zara us taraf kaam hai..toh main bhi tumhare saath chalta hoon..
Jijaji frowned and his eyes reflected deep anger.
SAchi thanked God silently.
In the Taxi,Sachi sat with mamaji while jijaji sat in the front seat.

In the Cafe..Tara entered..with frustration on her face.
She looked at the sky,it looked as if it was going to rain.
Shravan stared and smiled at her.
Tara:andar chalo,mujhe lagta hai baarish hone waali hai..

Behind them Sachi's family entered the Cafe..

Tara and Shravan were seated in a corner with a beautiful view of the sky...
Shravan:Tara,main tumse kuch kehna chahta hoon..
Tara:Kaho..but jaldi kaho mere paas time nahi hai
Shravan:Tara main..main....tumse ..pata nahi kabse..par..
Tara:Shravan,tum jaldi bologe..
Shravan:Tara,I..I..kaise kahoon.....
He pulled out a ring and  there a strong thunder in the sky..
He went down on his knees and looked deeply into her eyes which reflected surprise..and held her hand with one and pulled out a ring with another..
Shravan:Tara,main tumse bahot pyaar karta hoon..will you marry me?

Sachi got out of the van and looked at the sky.A small drop fell on her eyes..she wiped it and stared again at the sky.She felt strange..she felt as if the rain was telling her something..something was wrong..she shouldn't be here..And that very thought it started raining with full force and all the wind started to blow wildly..She quickly waved to Mamaji and ran inside the Cafe with one hand over her head...She was almost wet..Jijaji followed her..
She searched for her family.. and couldn't find them but she could her Jijaji staring at her with anger..
She quickly walked towards the Ladies room..and then she saw somebody familiar..
She walked towards the table and smiled..

Tara: Shravan,I'm sorry..main abhi shaadi nahi karna chahti..
She looked sympathetic and shocked..
Shravan:Par,Tara main tumse baohut pyaar karta hoon..
Tara:Shravan,pyaar to main karti hoon tumse but sirf pyaar ke sahare hum zindagi nahi jee sakte..look at yourself..tum ekdum clueless ho apne future ke baare mein..I mean how do you plan to support me? aur main apni padai poori karna chahti hoon..
Shravan:Par,Tara agar tum mujhse shaadi nahi karogi to mere ghar waale meri shaadi Sachi se kardenge..
Tara looked at him in an annoying manner.
Tara:ok,main tumse shaadi karne ke liye tayyar hoon but ek saal baad..
Shravan looked at her with a sinking feeling..
he sighed and looked at her..

Sachi's smile faded away..she stood transfixed in her place and looked at the familiar figure..She felt her heart bleeding..her head felt heavy  and a pain in her chest.

A tear fell down her cheek..

Shravan looked straight ahead of him and saw Sachi standing there with tears in her eyes.

His whole world collapsed in that second. He felt a pain in his heart when he saw her crying,he felt  a wave in his stomach and stood up.


Sachi stared with tears in her eyes..'It was over now..her life was a curse',she thought.

Tara looked at Shravan's expressions and followed his eyes.

She looked puzzled.


She kept saying but he didn't hear her.She shaked him.

Shravan came back to his senses..

Shravan looked from Sachi to Tara..

Sachi turned around and ran away from the caf. She ran out in the open,it was almost a storm'

The nature reflected how she felt..

Note: List of all parts on Page 42

Edited by scent_flower - 06 December 2010 at 7:29am

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-Sanjana- IF-Sizzlerz

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pickachu IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 08 July 2010 at 5:02am | IP Logged
Very lovely update.Plzzz write next part soon.I'm really waiting for it.

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pratsy IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 08 July 2010 at 6:10am | IP Logged do continue...

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Pumpkinn IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 July 2010 at 6:52am | IP Logged
Awesome yaar !
Loved it !
Plzz cont. soon !

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xxdevilishxx Senior Member

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Posted: 08 July 2010 at 7:22am | IP Logged
: O So good! :]
Please, do continue!
And can you PM me when you update? Thanks! :)

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.FunLuvingGirl. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 08 July 2010 at 8:08am | IP Logged
Hey this was just awesome..nicely written..continue soon..
..I'm really waiting for the next part..loved it..BTW what's your name?


-.Aphrodite.- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 July 2010 at 9:52am | IP Logged
Awesome part
please continue soon.

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