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Posted: 02 July 2010 at 8:46am | IP Logged
good stories but they are late   


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Posted: 02 July 2010 at 8:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tgodse

good stories but they are late   


 
Yeah I know...and that's why this person has been disqualified. And the story has been placed outside.
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Posted: 02 July 2010 at 9:15am | IP Logged
Review for this story-Very good work by the writer,looks like hardwork put in,story went completely in flow all scenes connected to each other very nicely,Abhijeet and Daya's character portrayal was beautiful,I would love to see such a case onscreen,very interesting and ACP sir kka bhi character bahut achca pakda.
Hats off to ur spirit even after u knew u wouldn't be rated you gave us such a lovely story to read,waise tumhara story agar competition mein hotha toh competiton aur bhi mushkil ho jaati anyways keep it up would love to read more from you Clap Thumbs Up

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Posted: 07 July 2010 at 10:53pm | IP Logged

Interesting, very interesting attempt. I love the first scene with the khabri and how Daya Sir ensures that Abhi Sir is safe from the blast, could actually see these scenes in front of my eyes. But how did the Minister know about plan two when the terrorist leader did not even mention about the backup plan to his own people. That was the only thing that bothered me. But it was very interesting nonetheless. Loved how Trio were portrayed especially Abhi Sir, his constant internal questioning and reasoning was too good. Thats how I also feel he thinks.



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