My Untouched Desire (Maaneet) pt 18 pg 87 (Page 87)
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hope u reconsider ur decision n write again...
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please don't leave Pooja... love this fiction of yours...
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Chapter - 18
Exactly after one week
since the day Maan had gone with Geet to St Stefens, a fest was being
held in the college. There was an atmosphere of festivities all around.
People were having fun with their partners and friends. All his friends
were also very busy. The colours in the vicinity highlighted the
colourlessness in Maan's life. He wanted to just run away from there,
but being the Editor of the college newspaper, he had to be present
there, the Principal had especially asked him to cater to the guests. He
was now awaiting the chief guest, when his eyes met a shocking view. He
saw Geet come out of a car, and from the driver's seat, descended
Aditya. Geet was dressed in a suit, in light colours of purple and
silver. She looked beautiful to his eyes, as always. He smiled a little,
recalling the first day she'd come to the college. But that smile
disappeared as soon as he saw Aditya placing his hands on her shoulder,
while Geet heard to whatever he spoke, with her head downcast. Maan saw
unhappiness all over her face, even from such a distance. He wanted to
go and cuddle her, to hold her. But as he thought all this, he saw Dev
and Tara push past him, and go to Geet. Geet saw them and muttered a
small hi. Both of them started talking to Aditya. After a few minutes,
Maan also went to join them. He heard Aditya speaking,
"Kal
Principal sir ka phone aaya, aur fest ke baare mein bataya. Unhone kaha
ki Geet ka yaha hona zaruri tha, to main khud iseh chhodne aa gaya, bas.
Anyways, Geet, please apna dhyaan rakhna, and always remember i love
you, no matter what", he planted a small kiss on her forehead, and left
from there. After bading Aditya, did Geet realize that Maan was present
there. She looked at him with questions in her eyes, while Maan tried to
avoid looking at her. From the corner of his eye, he saw Tara pull Geet
along with her and go inside the college.
During the fest, Maan
tried to avoid Tara and Dev, because he knew they would be with Geet. A
mere sight of either of them forced him to change his direction. But
he'd realized one fact, Geet was aware that he'd been avoiding her. He'd
spotted her looking at him many times, and the look she gave him, was
what didn't let him turn his gaze from her. She looked hurt by his
indifference, he hadn't gone to meet her, despite the fact that all her
college mates had gone to see her atleast once since the time the news
had spread like a jungle fire that Geet was back in college. But the
inevitable fell on him, when the on-the-spot singing cum karaoke
competition began. Everyone was present there, the principal, the chief
guest, and everyone. His presence was also mandatory. And as luck had
its own way, he was standing right next to Tara, next to whom stood Geet
and then Dev. Maan was thankful to Tara for standing in between them,
but he was aware of Geet trying to look at him from the sides. The
contestants were supposed to go on the stage, and select a song from the
bowl that had a few slips of songs. The lyrics of the song would them
come written on the board in front of them. The challenge was that the
song was being played in a lower volume, in the background, and the
contestant had to keep his pace along with the lyrics on the board, as
well as the background. If he or she missed the pace at even a single
point, the whole sync of the song was lost. As of yet, none of them had
been able to complete a full song, but the crowd was having lots of fun
here. More and more people came, and kept singing, some of them even
returning to improve the second time. Maan saw Tara leave the crowd with
Geet and Dev, and heaved a sigh of relief. But his relief was short
lived, as he saw Tara behind the stage, pushing Geet on the stage. He
realized that Tara was forcing her to go and sing, but Geet was
constantly refusing. When Dev spoke something, Geet went to the stage
without another refusal. She came to stand in the middle of the stage,
as she didn't raise her eyes. Finally, she lifted her eyes, only to rest
them on his. She looked at him, and didn't break the eye-lock.
"Hey
friends, I am Geet Handa. The song, whichever I sing, is dedicated to a
friend, someone who has recently become a very close friend of mine. I
just hope that after today, everything between us is sorted, all the
misunderstandings, all the fights. This one is for you Maan Khurana,
hope you like it", Geet said, and moved towards the bowl, which Tara had
brought for her. She picked up a slip, and after reading the song, Tara
snapped the slip from her, pocketing it, and wishing her luck, went off
the stage. Geet went to whisper the song in the ear of the person on
the stage, who was managing the lyrics, and the music. She then came to
stand near the mike, and placing her hands on the mike, she took a deep
breath and closed her eyes.
Maan was left aghast, when Geet had
taken his name. but his shock subsided with the cheering of the crowd,
as he heard whistling and hooting of the people. The way her eyes bore
into his, showed her determination, that she wasn't about to give up so
easily. He saw the confidence on her face when she took a long breath,
and closed her eyes, before she started singing. The whole crowd turned
silent, waiting for her to start.
I still hear your voice when you sleep next to me
I still feel your touch in my dreams
Forgive me my weakness, but I don't know why
Without you it's hard to survive
She opened her eyes as she sang the last word, looking once again at him, and captivating him in the magic of her voice.
'Cause everytime we touch, I get this feeling
And everytime we kiss, I swear I could fly
Can't you feel my heart beat fast?
I want this to last
I need you by my side
Maan
recalled the kiss they'd shared in the jungle, the love that he'd seen
in her eyes that day, flashed back in her eyes once again. She looked
only towards him, as she moved her hands with the music standing on one
place itself.
'Cause everytime we touch, I feel the static
And everytime we kiss, I reach for the sky
Can't you hear my heart beat so?
I can't let you go
I want you in my life
All
the moments that they'd spent together came back to his mind. It was
true, he had always felt that static whenever their skin had come in
contact. He had felt that magic whenever she was close to him.
Your arms are my castle, your heart is my sky
They wipe away tears that I cry
The good and the bad times, we've been through them all
You make me rise when I fall
Geet
hugged herself as if feeling the security of his arms around her.
Images of Mallika and Aditya swam in front of Maan's eyes, and he
realized of all that they'd gone through.
'Cause everytime we touch, I get this feeling
And everytime we kiss I swear I could fly
Can't you feel my heart beat fast?
I want this to last
I need you by my side
She
lifted her hand, and pointed towards him. Maan felt her take out all
that she'd stored in her heart in one go. He saw how she tried to
convince him of her love, of their love, of how they could come through
everything.
'Cause everytime we touch, I feel the static
And everytime we kiss, I reach for the sky
Can't you hear my heart beat so?
I can't let you go
I want you in my life
'Cause everytime we touch, I get this feeling
And everytime we kiss, I swear I could fly
Can't you feel my heart beat fast?
I want this to last
I need you by my side
Geet
finished the song, and the whole throng rose in excitement to cheer
her. She had not only managed to complete the song, but that too without
even once staring at the lyrics board, or listening to the song being
played. The crowd went mad in appreciation, and Geet was caught hold by
everyone, to show their appraisal. But she had eyes only for one man,
who was right now looking at her intently. She saw his eyes flare when
either of the guys tried to touch her, even if it was just a handshake.
She saw the rise and fall of his emotions, and smiled a bit seeing that.
Just when she'd let herself out of everyone's hold, and headed him, he
came out of a sudden trance, and rushed off from there. Geet tried to
follow him, but she was left behind as the crowd made it difficult for
her to move.
Maan had realized that the moment of confrontation
wasn't very far now, so he headed to the green room, where the dancers
of the next act were getting ready. He knew this was his last chance to
fix everything. He abruptly opened the door, and walked in searching
something frantically. The girls all around gave him weird looks, but
didn't say anything, because it was Maan Khurana after all. Finally he
found what he was looking for. Correction! He found whom he was looking
for.
"Mallika!"
He shouted through his breathless words,
startling everyone. Mallika was settled in front of a mirror putting her
last touch-ups. She turned at his voice, and gave a defiant look.
"I
haven't done anything now, if someone did say something, I don't care,
am innocent", she spoke, a bit scared of his expressions.
"I want to talk to you, come out for five minutes", he spoke, now a bit calmly. She still gave him the confused look.
"Five
minutes, that's all I want. Have to talk something very important", at
this, she followed him outside, as he closed the door. They now stood in
the corridor, where a curious Mallika faced a more anxious Maan. After a
few seconds of silence, he finally spoke up.
"I need a favour", he let out, and saw Mallika stand there wide mouthed, in surprise.
"What?", it was the only word she could pronounce right now.
"Look,
itna excited hone ki zarurat nahi hai, and will you stop shouting
please. Everybody around is looking at us", he spoke softly, as he bent a
little towards her.
"Yeah i will", she spoke loudly, but saw him
glaring at her, and lowered her volume as she whispered, "Sorry! Haan,
so where were we, am i right in listening that you wanted a favour, and
that too, from me? The great Maan Khurana, is asking for help, from me,
from Mallika, jise tumne khudse door rehne ki advice di thi? Oh my
freaking God! I so can't believe this is happening. You know us din jis
tarah se tumne mujhe dekha tha, you had me scared out of my wits. I am a
transfer student, and i wanted to spend the 2 weeks of my life, having
fun. But after your warning, i only wanted peace, so i have tried my
best to avoid you", she started coming near him, and moved her finger on
his face, "But looks like you've finally given into your desire for me.
I am glad Maan, we can still have fun. I could be your girl-friend as
long as am here. I have enough time...", he snapped her finger from his
face as he spoke in a low, but determined voice.
"I don't want
you to be my girl-friend. I just want you to pretend to be one, and that
too, just for a short time, maybe just once"
Mallika looked at him with disbelief.
"Oh
Maan! Why are you doing it to yourself, to us? Don't you remember those
beautiful times we've spent together... all those memories, have you
forgotten...", she continued, but was silenced by his words.
"I
remember everything, I've forgotten nothing, nothing at all, our good
times together. But with that, i also remember the betrayal Mallika,
your betrayal, which left me shattered. I was hurt, and it was bad. I
never questioned you, but tell me now, was it fair?", he held her
shoulders and shook her, "If you didn't love me, then why all the
pretense? What did you gain in all that? You think i can't see, your
eyes reflect the hollowness of your life", Mallika lowered her eyes at
this, "You may have all the luxuries you'd asked for, but inside you,
deep down, there is a hollowness, which i can easily read. What have you
done to yourself Mallika, and why?", he left her with a little force,
and turned, his one hand taking support from the pillar, while his other
hand clutching his head in frustration, and anger. After a brief
silence, he heard her speak.
"Kya karna hai mujhe?", Maan turned
to look at her pale face, which had shed a few silent tears. He was
about to speak something, when he heard another voice.
"Maan?"
He turned his head in the direction of the voice, and saw Geet glance at him curiously.
"Geet!",
Maan had wanted to speak, but it was Mallika's voice that had come out.
She seemed surprised to see Geet standing there. As much as Mallika had
known about Geet, it was that she was a simple, yet talented girl. She
was college's favorite girl, and rode the list of popularity given her
good nature. Reserved as she was, she'd won the hearts of almost
everyone. It was difficult to hate her. But what had Geet to do, being
here at this time? Was it something related to Maan? Her question was
soon answered.
"Geet, i think you should go, tumhe yahaan se jana
chahiye", Maan said in a little loud voice. Geet kept observing the two
of them, as she came closer.
"But Maan, i wanted to talk to you...", she spoke, and stopped midway.
"Stop
it Geet!", he said loudly, and everybody around stopped to witness the
scene. Geet backed off a little, scared of his temper.
"Just a
few minutes ago, you embarrassed me in front of the whole college. Of
all the people, you had to choose me. I mean c'mon man, we're not even
friends. Haven't i told you so, we cannot be friends. Understand? Why
can't you get this simple thing down your throat, we just can't become
friends. Wahaan sabke beech embarrassment kam thi kya, jo yahaan tak
mera peechha karte karte aa gayi?", he spoke in an accusatory tone.
"Par Maan...", Geet tried to speak.
"Chalo
let's leave that. But tell me one thing, how am i supposed to explain
all of it to my girl-friend?", saying this, he went and put his arm
around Mallika's waist, while Geet mouthed the word 'girl-friend' in
surprise.
"Yes, how am i supposed to explain it to her, to
Mallika, that whatever you did there, was utter foolishness. I was no
ways involved in it. She doesn't believe me, and we're having this major
fight right now. What am i supposed to do, to make her believe my
innocence, so that she believes that i lo... er i love her, and no one
else. Now do you want to hear more, or are you leaving?", he finally
finished, as Mallika turned her face to look at him in wonder.
Geet
said nothing after this, while some students who'd stopped to hear the
commotion fled away to spread the news of Maan's fight with Geet, and
that he was back with Mallika. Geet turned her gaze to look Mallika in
the eye. She held her gaze for long. In the meantime, Maan tightened his
hold on Mallika's waist, to relax after his performance. When he looked
up, he saw Geet looking at Mallika. He cleared his throat to get Geet's
attention, and got it, he did. She looked at him for a brief second,
before she turned and went away. Maan let out the sigh he didn't know
he'd been holding.
"So?", Mallika spoke after Geet had left, and Maan immediately removed his hand when he heard her speak.
"So, so what?", he counter-asked her, avoiding her eyes that questioned him.
"So Mr Maan Khurana, so ye ki you really really love her, a lot, right?", Mallika said, and he raised his eyes in disbelief.
"I
remember now, it was her, Geet, that day, in the music room, when i had
almost kissed you. Am i right?", she asked, and Maan gave a slight nod
of his head, "To baaki ki story tum bataoge, ya mujhe khud hie guess
karni hogi?", she again asked.
"Story? What story? There's no story to be told...", saying this, he started moving away.
"She
didn't believe you Maan, she didn't believe in us", Mallika's words
stopped him dead in the track. He came back to her, and shook her by her
shoulders, again.
"What do you mean?"
"What i mean, is
that she didn't believe in your drama, not even for a single second. She
knew it was all a pretense, and that i was no girl-friend of yours...",
she removed his hands.
"But how could she... I don't get it... how... how do you know this", he ruffled his hair.
"Have
you ever seen her eyes? Oh, what am i asking, obviously you might have.
By the way, how many times have you lost yourself in her eyes?", Maan
glared at her, and she mumbled a sorry. "Her eyes, they are very
expressive, they actually...", she stopped speaking when she heard him.
"speak,
they tell you everything, the gateway to her heart, her eyes are. But
only when she wants them to be, or at times when i catch her off guard.
She can control what her eyes tell everyone, but with me, she lets her
eyes do the talk, sometimes voluntarily, and sometimes involuntarily.
Those big, huge captivating eyes of hers..."
"Ehem ehem", Mallika snapped a finger in front of his lost face, as she coughed fakely.
"So
like i was saying before you were lost, she told me, that she didn't
believe one word, not one of them, of what you'd said. She looked at me
in the eye, and i knew she warned me to stay away. I guess she did it
voluntarily this time"
"Par Mallika..."
"Nai Maan, I've
met her, and trust me, she was beyond sweet to me. But today, i saw the
look, that conveyed a message. She told me to stay away from you, or
i'll see the worse of her. And honestly, am too scared not to listen to
her. I could tell, she can have me chopped me in a flash of a second",
Mallika told him.
"Don't worry, i am sure you're just imagining it all. Geet would never...",
"Don't
underestimate her Maan, she was serious. She loves you, a lot. It takes
a great deal of confidence not to believe in what all you just said.
She had perfect confidence on your love for her..."
"But i don't love her..."
"Whom
are you trying to fool Maan? When you were trying to convince Geet that
you loved me, you weren't able to use those words without hesitating
once. But when you had to use the words for her, it all came out in a
flow, right? Oh Maan, why can't you see it? You both love each other
like crazy, then why can't you admit it", Mallika spoke, clearly
frustrated.
"It's complicated Mallika...", Maan sighed. Mallika placed a hand on his shoulder, as she consoled him.
"I
don't know ki tum dono ke beech kya problem hai Maan, but i'll just
pray that wahi ho, jo tum dono ke liye best hai. I gotta go now, my
performance is next", she said. Maan nodded at her.
"Thanks Mallika, for everything"
"Maan,
i am sorry about the past. But honestly, i'll never forget the time i
spent with you. Thank you for that. I'll always keep you both in my
prayers. And one more thing, Geet is great and beautiful, no doubt, but
she sings beautifully too, very enchanting", Mallika smiled and walked
off, leaving a thoughtful Maan.
"Geet, did you really not believe
in what i said? Mallika says she can read my love in my eyes, then why
couldn't you, that day, when you saw me with her, and that day, in the
car, when i'd wanted to explain the truth to you, and that time, when we
were together in the jungle? Why couldn't you realize it all then?
Perhaps it wouldn't have been too late then..."
"Bhai, ab bhi kuch late nai hua hai!", he turned around shocked, as he heard Tara's voice.
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Thanks for the update. That was simply awesome. Hope k sab kuch thik ho jaye jaldi se..
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Breath taking update..
The song and confidence of geet in maan...simply superb..
Mallika read what maan cudn't read frm geet's eyes..
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