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Posted: 18 July 2010 at 10:57am | IP Logged
I love your FF!! It's so good! I was up till 3am last night reading it!!
I can't wait for you to continue!
Loving the storyline so far! Prem is good looking too! Lucky lucky Geet!! :D
Anyways, I'm eagerly awaiting your next update!
Take care
*~Radz~*
PS. Please could you send me a PM when you continue? Thanks!! :D

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hey, wat happened, no updates forgort abt ur ff kya??

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OK guys im sorry i have been away for so long ... but i shall continue the story from where i left off.

Part 8

Pr: Prem
M: Maan
G: Geet
A: Adi
P: Pinky


So the day goes on... M cant concentrate on his work, keeps thinking about Pr at G's house at night.
He wonders how to ask her ....

M picks up the phone and calls G

M: G Mr.Mishra ki construction aur accounts ki file lekar aana
G: ji sir

G goes to his office and hands him the files.. she was about to leave when he

M: ummm G
G:(turns around) ji sir
M: tumhe Pr kaisa laga
G: (with a weired expression) jiii
M: mera matlab hain ke uske kam karne ka dhang.. u know
G: sir woh accha kam karta hain... sabse bohot acche se pesh aata hain ... sur usse toh kisi bhi chiz ka ghussa nahi aata...
M: wow tum use itni jaldi bohot acchi tarah se jaan gayi (M felt like his heart had dropped when she was praising Pr
)
G: nahi sir woh bas ...(looked away from M)
M: aisa lagta hain ki tum dono dost ban gaye ho
G: ji sir ...
M: itni jaldi
G: woh sir kya hain na Pr ka koi is duniya mein nahi hain isiliye woh sabko apna dost bana na chahta hain...
M: tumhe kaise pata ki uska is duniya mein koi nahi hain
G: usne mujhe kal rat bataya
M: (shocked) kal raat
G: (scared) ji woh ..Pr ne humare saath dinner kiya toh usne tab bataya
M: oh dinner (relieved) thik hain ab tum jao

G leaves and thinks why M was asking so many questions. M on the other hand was relieved hearing that he was over for dinner.

A few days passed by and in these days M kept on getting jealous every time Pr was near G. He hated how he was always around her.
Office employees would always praise their jodi and M would get even more angry and jealous. He didnt know what was happening to him, he always tried not to come to office but the fact that he would get to see G every day changed that plan.

One beautiful day ... Pr, G and M were with Mr.Chopra in their conference room and G was presenting for the project. As usual M was looking at G and smiling.. but G was smiling every time she looked at Pr.
All of sudden G started feeling dizzy.. . both Pr and M saw that G was about to faint ... both ran but Pr got there first and got hold of G, who has fainted. M was heart broken seeing G in some one else's arms
..he had that sinking feeling in his heart .. he remembered all the times he saved her, and felt that he's the one who's suppose to help her not Pr. But he came out of his thought and told Pr to take her to the hospital.
M drove Pr, who had G in his arms, to the hospital... dropped them there and then left.

After a while in the hospital G had finally woken up. Pr came to her room.

Pr: G tum thik ho
G: ha
Doctor: ab yeh bilkul thik hain ... lekin apko apna dhyan rakhna hoga woh bhi iss halat mein ...
Pr: iss halat mein matlab (looking confused)
G: Pr woh ...
Doctor: ji apko nahi pata ... she is one month pregnent

Pr is shocked ...G is sad and looks at Pr.. the doctor goes from their room

Pr: tum pregnant ho ... par aise kaise ho sakta hain

G calms him down and tells him the whole story ... after hearing this Pr gets tears in his eyes and is speechless.

Pr: tumne mujhe bataya kyun nahi ... kya tum mujhe apna dost nahi manti
G:  aisi baat nahi hain Pr... mein apni waje se kisi ko bhi dukh nahi dena chahti aur issi liye meine abtak P ko bhi nahi bataya.
Pr: G kuch mahino mein toh sabko waise bhi pata chalne wala hain ... toh chuppa ne ki kya zaroorat hain ...
G: actually mein kuch mahino mein yeh sheher chodkar kahi aur jane wali hoon ...
Pr: oh .... thik hain jaisi tumhari marzi... jab tak tum yaha ho mein tumhara khayal rakhoonga...

Doctor gives Pr some medications and all the thing she should eat and shouldn't eat.  

Both of them leave... Pr drops G home.

On the other hand M is at home worried thinking about G...

M: kyun mein G ke saath nahi ruka ..kyun mein waha se chala aaya ... pata nahi yeh kya ho raha hain mujhe ... (starts pacing around the room) mujhe check karna chahiye...

M picks up his cell and calls G's home ....P picks up.. M hangs up the phone and thinks...

M: nahi ... mein usse phone nahi kar sakta

M calls the hospital can inquired about her and finds out that she left with Pr a few hours ago and that she is just fine. But he doesnt find out about her pregnancy.

At G's home...G is standing near a window looking at the stars.

G: M sir kyun nahi aaye hospital mein ...atleast dekh na chahiye tha ki mein thik hoon ya nahi ....kaise admi hain apne employee ki koi phikar nahi hain ..... lekin mein kyun soch rahi hoon unke bare mein, kyun mein chahti thi ke woh hospital mein mere saath ho.

The screen splits into two
....showing G and M thinking about each other and questioning themselves .

Sorry guys i wanted to continue but in need to get some sleep ... i shall update soon....

Let me know what u guys think
DURGA1191








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loveeeeeeeed it a/w for the update

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Posted: 03 August 2010 at 3:58am | IP Logged
lovely update!!!

update sooN!!!

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Posted: 03 August 2010 at 4:36am | IP Logged
Hey lovely update..

continue soon...

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Posted: 03 August 2010 at 6:16am | IP Logged
great update
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
i cant wait to read ur nxt update
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 03 August 2010 at 6:31am | IP Logged
ur ff is unique yar,
i wish u r gonna b more regular now

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