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FF: Geet and Maan Love 16, pg 18 (Page 5)

Durga1191 Senior Member

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Posted: 12 July 2010 at 10:28pm | IP Logged
Ok guys its been long ...sorry ...


Recap: Prem asks geet to join him, Adi and pinky for lunch. Geet agrees...

Pr: prem
A: adi
M: maan
G: geet
D: dev

It starts off with everyone having lunch, they talk for a while and then decide to leave because they dont want to get yelled at by MK. They are walking back to the office (this is on the side of the road); G sees a couple with their child and after seeing them she dosses off to her past and starts walking ahead of everyoneShocked. G starts walking like close to the middle of the road thinking about Dev and her child, she doesnt see a car coming towards herShocked. She was about to get hit when Pr pulls her out of the wayClap.

Pr: (all scared holding onto G's waist) G, tumhara dhyan kaha hain.

G comes out of her past and looks at Pr who is holding her waist Big smileand then remembers how she was about to get hit by a car and how Pr saved her. she pulls his hand away from her waist.

G: woh mein kuch soch rahi thi .. aur mera dhyan nahi gaya... (she pauses for a while, looks around) waise thank you tumne meri jaan bachayee
Pr: koi baat nahi ... umm ek baat poochu
G: haanConfused
Pr: kya tum apne past ke bare mein soch rahi thi
G: (with a shocked look) ummmm woh... haan
Pr: dont worry mein tumhare past ke bare mein nahi poochongaEmbarrassed ... jab tumhe lage ke hum acche dost bagaye hain tab tum chaho toh bata sakti ho.

A and P come to Pr and G

A: G tuuuuummm thik ho
G: haan mein thik hoon
P: G tujhe road par chalne ki bimari toh nahi ho gayee na Ouch... woh jo serial mein sare actors karte hain waisi bimariLOL
G: yeh sab chodo hume office jana chahiye warna tumhre DD ghussa karenge Angry
P: haan Shocked

they get back to the office and back to work....
The day ends and G is about to go home. Pr was passing by G's office when he stops and goes to G.

G: arre Pr, tum abhi tak ghar nahi gaye
Pr: woh mein abhi ja raha tha phir meine dekha ke tum abhi tak ghar nahi gayee
G: mein bhi abhi nikal rahi thi
Pr: umm aao mein tumhe drop kar deta hoon
G: nahi nahi mein chali jaoongi , roz toh jati hoon ...
Pr: haan roz toh jati ho lekin aaj mere saath chalo ... agar tum yeh soch rahi ho ke mein aisa waisa ladka hoon toh tum galat zamajh rahi ho.. phir bhi agar chaho toh koi knife lekar aa sakti ho, u know just in case.
G: (smiles) nahi aisi baat nahi hain , mein kisi pe bojh nahi banna chahti
Pr: dont worry koi bhi problem nahi hain.
G: lekin mein toh P ke saath ghar jati hoon
Pr: thik hain usse bhi saath lete hain

Pr and G come to P

G: P chal chalte hain Pr hume ghar lekar ja raha hain
P: haye DDD kya baat hain.. thank you
Pr: (smiles) no problem

So the three of them leave together and are going towards Pr's car when P remembers that she forgot her phone at the reception. P goes inside to get her phone; Pr and G wait for her near his car. MK comes out and the sees the two of them together talking and laughing, and gets maha jealous.

M: yeh Pr G ke saath itna kyun hota hain. Aur G iss waqt Pr ke saath kyun hain aur abb tak ghar kyun nahi gayee. Lekin mein yeh kyun soch raha hoon, mujhe itna bura kayun ag raha hain ke G Pr ke saath hain. Yeh kya ho raha hain.

P comes running towards Pr and G. They get into his car; G sits in the front beside Pr and P in the back, and they drive off. M sees this and starts to wonder.

M: yeh G Pr ke saath kaha ja rahi hain, woh bhi itni raat ko. (starts thinking but then gets his angry man expression back) Mujhe kya , woh kuch bhi kare; mujhe kuch pharak nahi padata.

M gets home and the entire time thinks about what G was doing with Pr? Why she went in his car? He tries to avoid thinking about it but then ends up wondering.
M then goes into the shirtless state where he is fighting in the spotlight and thinks about G and wonders if she is ok.
M gets frustrated. He picks up his cellphone and calls G's home. The first time he calls P picks, he quickly cuts the phone; the second time he calls P's dad picks, he again cuts the phone. He waits for a while and then calls, this time G picks up. M doesnt say anything just keeps litening to her talk... G starts to get annoyed and...

G: Hello kaun bol raha hain... (after a few seconds) agar baat nahi karni thi toh phone kyun kiya... Khotte,oolloo...
Pr: arre tum kisko galiya de rahi ho .. chalo phone rakho

G bangs the phone. M on the other hand is shocked to hear Pr's voice and wonders what he was doing at G's place. He gets angry and throws the phone across the room. Just then D comes and sees the broken phone..

D: kya hua bro, aap itne ghusse mein kyun hain
M: (angrily) kuch nahi...
D: kuch toh baat hain, aap ne apna phone todh diya .. matlab kuch toh baat hain
M: (looks at him angrily) tumhe samjh mein nahi aata.. koi baat nahi hain...

M leaves in anger, leaving D wondering about his behaviour.

On the other hand, in G's house

Pr: ( is near the door and is about to leave) Thanx P, G . Mujhe khane par invite kiya.
G: koi baat nahi, tumne aaj mujhe bachaya aur hume ghar tak choda toh humra bhi toh koi farz banta hain na.
P: haan G bilkul sahi keh rahi hain ...
Pr: waise ab kya hum dost ban gaye hain ya nahi
G: (smiles and waits for a few seconds , thinks; brings forth her hand) Kya mujhse dosti karoge
Pr: (smiles and shakes her hand) haan

Pr leaves.

P: (to G) kitna cute aur accha hain Pr...
G: haan. Ab tu puri raat uski baat kare gi ya sone bhi jayegi. Chal ja so ja , baad mein uski baat karna
P: (agrees and goes to sleep)

The next day, G comes to the office  and is wearing white.
M comes to his office and through the glass wall see's G in the white dress. He is amazed at how beautiful she looks in White .. he stares at her for gud 5 min. Just then Pr enters G's office and gives G 4 different flowers ( a lilly, rose, tulip and an orchid).

G: (takes the flowers) yeh kisliye
Pr: humari nayi dosti ke liye ...
G: lekin iski koi zaroorat nahi thi
Pr: lekin mujhe laga iski zaroorat thi.... meine P ko bhi diya hain.
G: tum kya apne sare dosto ko phool dete ho
Pr: (sweet smile) haan... woh kya hain na meri koi family nahi hain aur usually mein akela hi khata hoon. Aur kal P, Uncle aur tumhare saath khana kha kar mujhe bohot accha laga issi liye mein yeh phool lekar agaya.

G gets up and places the flowers in a vase.

G: yeh bohot acche hain... (turns around to look at him) thank you
Pr: tum mujhe har baat ke liye thank you bola band karo... accha mein chalta hoon warna boss naraz ho jayenge.
G: ek aur baat kabhi boss ko flowers mat dena
Pr: (confused) kyun?
G: woh unhe phool pasand nahi hain
Pr: what? phool pasand anhi hain ... kaisa aadmi...

Pr comes close to her.... they are like a few inches away from each other. M is watching it all from his office and is fuming, its like he is going to kill Pr at that instant.

Pr: ek baat batao MK ko kuch pasand bhi hain ya nahi? jab dekho ghusse mein dikhte hain, sabse angrily baat karte hain, kaam ke siwa unhe kuch dikhta hain.. pata nahi aur kya kya.
G: aisa nahi hain (she didnt feel gud that Pr was criticising him), woh bohot acche hain. Sabki madat karte hain, sahi salha dete hain. Bas unhe sirf kuch chize pasand nahi, aisa toh nahi hain ke har insan ko sab kuch pasand ho na chahiye. Mein manti hoon ke woh todhe se rukhe hain aur sab par ghussa karte lekin woh andar se bohot acche hain.

Pr is amazed at all the things she was saying about M.

Pr: accha baba thik hain , woh bohot acche hain ... mein chalta hoon

G is left alone to think about what she just said to Pr. She kept on wondering ehy she was defending M.
M on the other hand was going to blow up seeing G and Pr so close together but then thought why he was gettign so angry? M got back to his work and kept on sneaking looks at G and the same for G.

Ok so far its gud for me ... ill write later ... plz do comment guys Hug.  Thank you



Edited by Durga1191 - 12 July 2010 at 10:53pm

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Soulmate_Sana IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 July 2010 at 1:20am | IP Logged
hey mionblowing update
really like it
keep writting
do continue it soon
anufa Goldie

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Posted: 13 July 2010 at 3:13am | IP Logged
jealous maan....Cool

but i want more of maan n geet!!!!

update sooN!!Thumbs Up
SaritaMSK IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 July 2010 at 9:10am | IP Logged
lovely update, do add me in ur pm list.Smile
sweet_gurl93 Goldie

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Posted: 13 July 2010 at 2:07pm | IP Logged
hey great part
lol its funny to read maan all jealous
anyway cant wait for more
do continue soon
Maheen xx
ameena_sneha Groupbie

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Posted: 13 July 2010 at 2:23pm | IP Logged
very nice dear
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sweet cherry IF-Rockerz
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sweet cherry

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Posted: 16 July 2010 at 9:38am | IP Logged
omg i jst read ur ff nd i love it ClapTongue
plzz update soon
nd plzz add me to ur pm
i hope der sum love cumin soon between geet and maan
-afsha- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 July 2010 at 10:28am | IP Logged
Nice FF
Liked it
Atlast Sasha n Tasha's truth revealed
Update soon n Add me to ur pm list

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