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FF: Geet and Maan Love 16, pg 18 (Page 4)

Durga1191 Senior Member

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Posted: 06 July 2010 at 1:46pm | IP Logged
hey guys i just wanted to let u guys know a few things:

1) my username has changed; u guys probably noticed
2) im a bit busy so i wont have that much time to post my stories but ill always try..

Durga1191 Senior Member

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Posted: 07 July 2010 at 9:10pm | IP Logged
Hi guys sorry for being so late.... i was confused at what i should write but ne ways here we go...

Recap: Maan has called Geet at the office to finish the project.

Ok so everything that was showed on TV that happened in the office at night b/w maan and geet happenes. An the thing that happens in the morning without Sasha and Tasha...also someone else from the office circulates their picture.... then everything that happened in todays episode (7th july 2010)  except for Tasha and Sasha ... No precap as well...

Prem: Pr
Adi: A
Pinky: P
Maan: M
Geet: G

   Prem Malhotra

Starts with a normal day. Today is an interview day for Sasha's post.
G goes inside a room with A and M to take everyones interview....almost everyones interview was done only two ppl were left.
Thats when Pr enters the screen with the song "I hate luv storys" from the movie I hate luv storys... then he enters the office
All the girls heart goes "double dhak dhak" LOLespecially P's

Pr opens the door and goes inside ... the first person he sees is G. Pr comes near the table where everyone was and introduces himself.

Pr: (shakes A, M, and G's hand) hi my name is Prem... Prem Malhotra
M: have a seat
Pr: thank you

M and A ask most of the questions to Pr; G is silent which makes Pr look at her more ... this makes M very uncomfortable Embarrassed

after about 20-30 min Pr comes out of the room. Then the other 3 come out...
When G comes outside P pulls her to the side...

P: G woh kaun tha
G: Confusedkaun
P: woh jo abhi bahar aya
G: A, aur sir hi toh bahar aaye
P: arre yaar ... tu sach mein paagal hain ... mein toh uss ki baat kar rahi hoon jo tumhare pehle bahar aaya
G: kaun Prem
P: Prem ... haye uska naam prem hain
G: han toh
P: toh Embarrassed!!!!!! arre tune dekha nahi lekin meine dekha ... kya hot chiz hain yaar ... agar woh samosa ya kachori hota toh mein usse ek hi bite mein kha leti
G: P tuh yeh kya keh rahi hain
P: G teri ankhe thik hain na ... arre yaar kitna handsome ladka hain yaar...mera dil toh Dhak Dhak hua woh bhi double bar.... agar woh hire hota hain na toh mein usse DDD bulaoongi
G: yeh DDD kya hain ??????
P: Dhak Dhak Dil
G: LOL tuh sach mein pagal hain P...  pehle tu sar ko DD bula ti thi aur ab isse
P: arre Pr ke samne DD toh kuch bhi nahi hain ..... I think I'm in LOVEThumbs Up
G: Chal chod ...ghar chalte hain
P: kya yaar G....

The next day:-
A comes to M's office to discuss who gets Sasha's position...

M: haan A toh kya lagta hain tumhe, kaun hain jise tumne choose kiya hain
A: ssssirrrr ...uummm Prem Malhotra

M gets a bit angry

M: kyun
A: uummm sssiirrr uuussseee zzzzyyyyaaaaaddddaa eeeexxxxxppeerience hain aur woh tttrrained bhi hhhain
M: ok toh tum usse appoint kar lo
A: oooook sir

A goes to G's office

A: G ek appointment letter type karo Mr.Prem Malhotra ke naam par ...unhe Sasha ki position mil gayee hain
G: unhe mili hain yeh job
A: haan MK ne unhe hi choose kiya hain
G: thik hain A sir main abhi kar deti hoon
A: aur unhe phone kar ke bata de na ... aur unhe kal se job par aane ke liye keh dena
G: ok sir

G calls Pr.... he picks up the phone

Pr: hello
G: ji kya mein Prem Malhotra se baat kar sakti hoon
Pr: yes speaking
G: mein Khurana's ke office se baat kar rahi hoon ...
Pr: Khurana's  jaha meine kal interview diya tha
G: ji mein MK ki secretary Geet baat kar rahi hoon.... apko yeh job gayee hain aur aap kal se join kar sakte hain..
Pr: ohhh great thank you ...waise aap wohi hain na joh kal interview le rahi thi
G:  ji
Pr: ahhhh ...nice  talking to you again
G: (smiles) thank you ... hum apko kal milenge... aath baje
Pr: ji ... mein time par pohoch jaaoonga

Both hang up and smile very cutely ....

Ok sorry guys gotta go ... too much work .... ill post very soon ... also let me know what you think PLZ.... and tell me if u like the guy i chose ....Sorry guys if u read this FF before all i did was change the guy. the first one didnt seem right

Edited by Durga1191 - 12 July 2010 at 10:51pm

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Durga1191 Senior Member

Joined: 21 December 2006
Posts: 585

Posted: 08 July 2010 at 1:57am | IP Logged
Ok so, ill continue

Recap: A new entry in the show, Prem Malhotra for Sasha's position. Maan offers him the position and Geet calls him to let him know that he got the job.

Next day Pr comes to the office before time.... P sees him coming and her heart goes DD...
A comes to Pr...

A: hello Mr.Malhotra
Pr: please sir aap mujhe sirf prem hi bulaiye
A: ok Pr... yeh raha tumhara appointment letter.

Then A takes him to his office... they both then come to the reception to give him some more information about the office and MK.
Just then G enters ....Pr keeps looking at her...G notices him looking at her.

G: hello... aap sach mein time par agaye
Pr: well mein time ka puntual hoon
G: yeh acchi baat hain... aur iss office mein time ka puntual hona bohot zaroori hain warna MK apko bohaut sunayenge.
Pr: wow... aisa lagta hain ke aap bohot experienced hain.
G: haan
P: aur ek baat yaha MK ko ek aur naam se bula te hain ...DD
Pr: DD ...matlab
P: Dhak Dhak

Everyone laughs ....

P: waise Pr agar mein tumhe DDD bulaoon toh koi problem toh nahi hain na
Pr: let me guess DDD matlab Dhak Dhak Dhak
P: LOL nahi Dhak dhak dil
Pr: ok..... mujhe koi bhi problem nahi hain ...

just then M enters and sees all of them laughing...also sees that Pr is near G.

P: Shocked G....DD aa gaye
G: ohh ok mein chalti hoon
Pr: yeah mein bhi chalta hoon ... kaam ke taraf bhi toh dekhna hoga

Pr and G walk away and are walking in a hallway kind of place when Pr stops....

G: kya hua
Pr: ummm..... yeh shayad jaldi hain lekin... mujhse dosti karogee LOL
G: hmmmm dekhenge...... thode din ruk jayiye phir soch ke bata doongi
Pr: ok , mein wait karoonga... well mein chalta hoon

G watches him walk away and smiles the background kal ho na ho: heartbeat instrument is playing (link for that tune
M sees all this from a corner and looks jealous but he doesnt know its jealousy yet

(Sorry guys i wanted to make this a bit interesting but i couldnt think of anything)

Later that day.... during lunch time Pr comes to G's office.

Pr: G ... ummm aap khana khaya
G: nahi ... kyun
Pr: mein A aur P ko lunch par bahar le ja rahe hoon , aap chalengi
G: ummmm
Pr: pleaseEmbarrassed

Pr comes near her chair and gives her that puppy dog look with his lovely eyes

G: thik hain lekin ek shart par ... aap mujhe "aap" nahi kehenge ...aisa lagta hain ke main koi pachas sath sal ki koi boodhi hoon
Pr: hmmmm manzoor hain

They leave for lunch and as usual M sees this from his office, and doesnt seem that pleased.


ok sorry again way too late for me gotta go to bed... bye.... i shall post the next part tomorrow

let me know what u guys think? what i should add? adn if it met all the standards?

Edited by Durga1191 - 12 July 2010 at 10:52pm

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yamnovbloom Goldie

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Posted: 08 July 2010 at 4:21am | IP Logged
continue soon yaar
anufa Goldie

Joined: 29 June 2010
Posts: 2142

Posted: 08 July 2010 at 4:24am | IP Logged
luved both parts....

continue soon!!!Thumbs Up

can u plz ad me in ur pm list!Embarrassed
Soulmate_Sana IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 04 September 2009
Posts: 19481

Posted: 08 July 2010 at 10:51am | IP Logged
lovely update dear
_Monu_ IF-Dazzler

Joined: 29 November 2008
Posts: 4754

Posted: 08 July 2010 at 4:46pm | IP Logged
hiiii thanx 4 the link
loved this ff too
from 1st to last!!
u hav written maneet scenes amazingly
loved all of them!!
so now maan is geetting jealous
i think he will keep irritating by geet n prem
n that DDD dhak dhak dil wooowww
pinky is really
ok conts soon
see yaaa
sweet_gurl93 Goldie

Joined: 25 February 2009
Posts: 1969

Posted: 09 July 2010 at 6:20pm | IP Logged
hey great ff, its interesting, lol and i see that you made a new it to make Maan jealous? and realise his love for Geet? lol
anyway cant wait for more
do continue soon
btw, can you please add me to your pm list? thanks
Maheen xx

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