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Posted: 01 July 2010 at 5:34pm | IP Logged
Ok so lets continue...im going to like always try to accommodate todays episode in my stories as well.

PART 4
M: kya karoon kaise andar jaoon.

Just then G starts coughing, and M goes running inside.

M: tum think ho
G: (thinking) haye yeh ab tak yahee hain

G nods her head to tell him that she is ok

G still doesnt say anything and M is all angry again but calms down.

M: thik hain , agar tumhe kuch chahiye toh main bahar hoon... arre haan tum kaise mujhe bulaogi tumne toh mujhse na bolna ka pran jo liya hain (sarcatically Confused) ... toh main ek kaam karta hoon main yahi betha hoon take tumhe mujhse bat karne ki zaroorat nahi hain (naughty MEmbarrassed)
G: (thinking) kaisa aadmi hain ek parayee ladki ke kamre main betha hain ... chodo mujhe kya woh kuch bhi kare main unse baat nahi karne waali.

In a few minutes G falls asleep. M on the other hand stares at her sleep, but then he also falls asleep.
then in a couple of hours G has a dream of Brij chasing her to kill her...
G starts talking in her sleep which causes M to wake up.

G: nahi brijveerji maine kuch nahi kiya ...mujhe mat maro maine kuch nahi kiya

Tears start coming from G's eyes when she is sleeping.

M: G ko aaj bhi woh sab sapne mein dikhta hain.

M sees that G is crying, he goes to her. He looks at her with a very cute face.
He reaches out to wipe her tears but then stops himself ..... after a few seconds he goes ahead and wipes her tears. Then he notices that she has a very high fever.

M: G ko toh bohot tez bukhar hain, ab kya karoon.

He goes to the kitchen fills a bowl with icy water, brings it back to her room. Then he takes out his hanky and dips it in the water and places it on her forhead to cool her down Embarrassed(awwwwwww go M). He takes the blanket and places it till her shoulders. For about an hour and a half he keeps on placing the cold cloth on her forehead, and remembers all the moments with her. (the song "Sun zara" from the movie LUCKY is playing in the background). After a while M falls asleep.
Later at around 11:30 am G wakes up
G feels her forehead and finds a cloth. She then sees that M is beside her asleep.

G: (thinking) sir ne mere sar pe thandi patti rakhi... lekin....

G stops and feels thirsty so she slowly gets up trying not to make any sudden movements and tries not make any noise because of her payal. She is close to the door but bumps into a table and M gets up, goes towards G.

M: G ... kya kar rahi ho, tumhe bukhar hain wapas jao aur aram karo.

G still is quite and doesn't say a word. M goes and brings a paper and pen and gives it to G. She writes that she got up to get water.

M: tum leto main pani lekar aata hoon

They both look at each other , while "Mahi is going on in the background".
M leaves to get water; G goes and sits on the bed and smiles. She looks at the clock and ...

G: ahhh 12 bajne ko aye mujhe toh khana khane ke baad dawayee leni hain.....mujhe khana bana na padega.

M comes and gives her water. She drinks it and writes on the paper that she needs to make lunch so that she can take her medicine.

M: ummm ... lekin tumhe toh abhi bhi bukhar hain ...

G reaches towards the paper but M takes it from her and yells

M: stop it G enough bohot ho gaya... itni si baat ke liye tum itna bada natak kar rahi ho. Accha thik hain "im sorry again" , ab thik hain

G just stares at him for a while. M gets angry and is about to leave her room when G says

G: umm woh ... mera bhi kuch zyada ho gaya, ...toh... Sorry.

M turns and looks at G.

M: umm agar tumhe khana khana hain toh main bahar se mangwa sakta hoon
G: nahi main bana loongi . Zyada waqt nahi lage ga.
M: Maine kaha na main mangwa leta hoon. Ab zidh mat karo.
G: (thinking) hm kya mood badal ta hain inka ... ek pal bohot acche se pesh aate hain toh ek pal main ghussa ho jate hain.

M orders lunch. G and M have lunch together (awwwww....), both of them were sneaking looks at each other. G then takes her medicine and falls asleep on the couch. M picks her up and places her on her bed and sits on the chair beside her bed.
Time passes by quickly. The time is 3:15pm and G's uncle comes home and sees that G is sleeping and M is also sleeping.

PD: dono kitne acche dikhte hain ek saath.

Just then P comes home and also sees M at home in G's room sleeping

P: haaa... DD yahan , woh bhi G ke kamre main..... wow kitne cute dikhte hain sote hue
PD: P jao aap unhe uthaiye
P: kya main , nahi nahi . Agar mujhpar ghussa ho gaye toh
PD: ab woh apke boss hain toh uthana toh apko hi hoga.

P slowly goes towards M (there is funny music going on in the background) ... she slowly taps on his shoulders. M gets scared and wakes up.

P: sorry sir
M: uhh no problem... oh lagtahe app ke dad wapas aa gaye hain.
P: ji sir
M: umm G ne dopehar ki dawayee le li hain.
P: main usse uthau sir.
M: nahi usse aram ki zaroorat hain, usse sone do. Aur han agar uski tabyat thik ho toh usse keh dijiye ga ki office aa jaye bohot kaam pada hain.
P: ji sir

M leaves, and looking at G one last time.
After M leaves G wakes up

P: oye G tu uth gayee.
G: P ... sir kaha gaye
P: woh toh bas abhi abhi gaye
G: accha
P: kya baat hain yaar, tu na sach mein MK ki history ki book change karwane wali hain. Aj tak MK ne kisi bhi emplyee ka hal chal nahi poocha aur tere liye toh direct ghar par aa gaye.. Wah G aap ko mera salam.
G: tu bhi na P kuch bhi bolti hain. Woh yaha toh project discuss karne ayye the, lekin unki kismat buri nikli... main bimar jo pad gayee
P: lekin G...
G: jane ne dena, DD ke bare main zyada mat bola kar..
P: Achha thik hain ... main chal ti hoon tu aram kar.

The next day, M comes to office as usual and first goes to G's office.

M: G mere office mein aao mujhe dictation deni hain.
G: ji sir

G goes to his office, M gives her dictation. When he was done G is about to leave but turns around.

G: sir
M: kya hain G
G: woh ... THANK YOU..
M: kis chiz keliye
G: woh kal apne mere sar par thandi patti rakhi thi take mera bukhar utar jaye , isliye.
M: hm ok ... bas itna hi
G: ji .. ji
M: toh tum yaha kyun khadi ho, jao apna kam karo.

After this, everything that happened at night in todays episode (1st july) happenes,

G reaches M's office before M.

G: dekha mujhe adhe ghante main ane ko kehta hain aur khud hi late ho ta hain. Kaise rehte honge sab is sanki insaan ke saath.


OK SORRY GUYS I WANTED TO CONTINUE FROM HERE ON BUT I HAVE OTHER THINGS TO DO.
LET ME KNOW WHAT U THINK.

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OK GUYS ILL BE BACK IN A FEW AND THEN ILL CONTINUE THE STORY 

 


Edited by Durga1191 - 12 July 2010 at 10:51pm

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Posted: 05 July 2010 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
Hey guys... Im really sorry but i'm unable to think of something to continue the story .... i have tried to think but nothing seems to hit me right now... so until Maan and geet get out of the "locked in a office situation" i wont be able to write anything...

VERY SORRY Cry

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