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PART 2
RECAP: T and S get fired, M says sorry to g. M asks G to temporarily work in S's position. G asks M to have lunch with her and M agrees.

G: sir aap baith jayee ye main khana parosti hoon Wink.

M sits in front of her... G is serving food in a plate and M is just cutely staring at her and trying not smile. Everyone from office are just staring at what is happening. Just then D comes and goes to the staff who are outside G's office.

D: yeh kya ho raha... aap sab ko koi kaam nahi hain, agar M ko pata chal gaya na toh...

A: ma'am woh... hum MK ko hi dekh rahe hain.
D: kya... Shocked

D looks inside G's office and sees M with her having lunch.

D: aap sub jayee yahan se ... aur kam kijiye ... dusre kya kar rahe hain isse aap sab kya.

D: (looks on at the two and is imagining them in a shadi ka joda and all) yeh kya ho raha hain .... lekin jo bhi ho raha hain accha ho raha hain ... (just then she notices that G is serving him Bheendi and Karele ki sabzi) ahhh oh no M ko toh yeh sabzi bilkul pasand nahi hain ... he bhagwan G toh aaj gayee.

G gives him sabzi and roti.... M just keeps looking at her. He takes the plate and eats it while he is staring at her eat. D is shocked to see M eating the sabzi.


D: hainnnnn... ek din mein doh doh chamatkar... zaroor aj sooraj pachim se uga hoga...

D goes into M's office and sits there. M finishes eating, still staring (atleast partially).


M: ummmmm yeh khana tum ne banaya
G: (gets a bit scared) ha sir, kyun accha nahi hain Disapprove...
M: nahi aisi koi baath nahi hain ... woh khana bohot accha bana hain ...

G smiles ... M leaves and goes into his office and sees D there.


M: aap yaha
D: kyun main iss office mein nahi aa sakti ... mein toh yaha apko lunch pe le jane ayee hoon ... mein ne socha app ghar pe toh humare saath beth kar nahi khate toh shayad aap yaha humare saath khayenge.

M: D aap ko pata hain ke mujhe kisi ke saath beth kar khana accha nahi lagta toh phir bhi aap yaha aa gayee.... waise bhi maine khana kha liya hain.
D: accha kya khaya aapne ...
M: ummmmm woh bhindi aur karele ki sabzi .... (he then realizes what he just said and thinks that i hate these two vegetables)

D: kyaaaaa aap ne yeh dono khaye... lekin aap ko toh pasand nahi hain na...

M: D agar app ka ho gaya ho toh kya mein kuch kaam kar loo

D: waise aap kuch zyada office aane laga gaye hain ... usually toh aap ek hafte mein ek ya dor baar hi office jate the.
M: D please mujhe kaam kar na hain

M picks up the phone and call G and asks her to come in his cabin he wants to give dictation. G comes and sits down.

G: hello ma'am
D: hello, kaisi ho
G: ji thik hoon
D: yeh MK tumhe zyada taklif toh nahi de raha
M: D Angry
D: what? main toh sirf pooch rahi thi
G: ji nahi zyada nahi
D: good ... accha M aaj raat ko aap humare saath khana khayenge
M: D maine kitni baar apse kaha hain mein sab ke saath bethkar khana nahi khaoonga. So please aap jayee aur mujhe mera kaam karne dijiye
D: thik hain.... ek chiz mangi thi woh bhi tum iss boodhi dadi ki poori nahi kar paye. Ja rahi hoon main

D leaves and outside thinks that aap aj humare saath khana toh zaroor khayenge ... kyunki woh ladki aap ko kahe gi issiliye.... yeh ladki tumhe zaroor sodhare gi.

In M's office... M is giving G dictation ... he keeps on looking at her writing ... after the dictation when G is about to leave, she stops

G: sir aap se ek baat ka hoon
M: haan kaho
G: aapne apki D ka man rakhna chaiye tha ... aur woh toh sirf aapko khana khane ke liye hi keh rahi thi ...
M: G tumhe meri zindagi main dakhal dene ki koi zaroorat nahi hain
G: sorry sir lekin ....
M: G
G: bas ek aur baat.... bohot khush kismat hote hain woh log jinke paas ek pyar karne wala parivar hota hain , joh unki fikar karta hain aur jinke saath beth kar khana kha sakte hain. ... kyunki kuch logo ko aisa parivar naseeb hi nahi hota..

G is like having flash backs of her life and her family ... she has tears in her eyes ...M is also thinking about how her family treated and tried to kill her ... G snaps out and leaves his office. M starts to think and gives a small smile Embarrassed and thinks about what D said to him.

M: kyun main aj kal roz office aa raha hoon aur aaj tak maine kisi ke saath khana nahi khaya aur aj maine G ke saath beth kar khana khaya aur maine bhindi aur karele sabzi khayi... woh sabzi jis se mujhe nafrat hain ... yeh sab kya ho raha hain , kyun ho raha hain LOLEmbarrassedConfused

At night M comes home and sees that D is waiting for him at the dining table. He remembers what G said to him and goes and haves dinner with D. D is absolutely astonished and happy that M is finally changing.

at G's house

P: G kya toone DD ko thank you kaha
G: haan aaj soobhe hi kaha
P: arre yaar tujhe osse kuch dena chaiye tha take unhe pata chale ki tu sach main thank you bol ba cha hi ye...

The next day G brings flowers and all the things happen that happened in todays episode (30th june) besides the fact that S and T are not there.

M:Ab main dekh ta hoon ki yeh kab tak chup rehti hain.

G in her office is talking to herself.

G: hm khadoos kahinka ... pata nahi apne aap ko kya samajh ta hain ... lekin main bhi kum nahi hoon tab tak nahi bolongi jab tak woh woh mujhse acchi tarah se baat nahi karte.

M: (in his office, on the phone) Mr.Chopra maine aap ko iss liye phone kiya kyunki kal jo humari meeting hain woh aaj hogi ... yaha thodi si problem aa gayi hain (looks at G) toh woh meeting aaj ek ghante main karni hogi.
M: toh miss. G main bhi dekh ta hoon ki tum kab tak mere samne chup baitho gi.

M goes to G's office.

M: G aaj ek ghante main Mr.Chopra ke saath humari meeting hain aur tumhe presentation dena hain samjhi.

M leaves and G is all shocked with her mouth open

G: (thinking) yeh iss ne jan booch ke kiya hain take main bol sakoon ... hmn ab main kya karoon ... ah ha... idea, A meri help kare ga.
G goes to A
G: A meri baath soono ...Mr.Chopra aaj yaha meeting ke liye aa rahe hain aur meri tabyat kuch thik nahi hain toh kya tum meri jaga presentation de sakte ho.
A: sure G no problem.
G: thank you

A leaves and G thinks

G: accha hain, ab na mujhe woh presentation dena hoga aur na unke samne baath karni hogi, aur main apna check up bhi kar sakoongi.

In the meeting everyone is waiting for G.

M: ab tum kya karo gi G, tumhe toh presentation toh dena hoga.

Just then A comes

A: Sorry gentle men aaj Miss.G presentation nahi de payengi... onki tabyat thik nahi thi issilye unhone mujhe kaha hain presentation de ne ke liye

M is shocked and angry that she has taken it so far.

M: (thinking) yeh tum ne accha nahi kiya G... maine tumse aisa kya kehdiya ki tum baat hi karogi. Kahi yeh bahana toh nahi take tumhe mere samne baat na karni ho.

After the presentation M goes to A and congratulates him

M: kya G sach main bimar hain?
A: han woh kuch hi der pehle hospital gayee thi... keh rahi thi ki usse apna check up karwana hain...
M: kya kis hospital main gayee hain woh
A: uhh "City Hospital"
M: hm thik hain ... tum ne achha presentation diya
A: Thank you sir

M goes to his office and thinks

M: woh toh sach main bimar hain aur main uss par ghussa ho raha hoon ... mujhe check karna chahiye ki woh think hain ya nahi... lekin main kyun karu , uski zindagi hain... nahi main nahi jaoonga.

Just then Dev calls M and asks him if he could pick him up. He's at city hospital to pick up naintara's report but his car had broken down. M agrees.

M: acchi baat hain ab main G ko bhi dekh loonga ki woh thik hain ya nahi.

Outside the hospital G is leaving and Dev is also outside... Dev see's G and thinks what is she doing in Delhi? but then thinks that maybe he's seeing things... what could G be doing in Delhi her family wont even let her leave the house why would they let her come to Delhi...

M comes and see's Dev and aks him to sit in the car...

M: Dev tum gadi main betho main abhi ata hoon... mujhe kuch kaam hain hopital main. (M goes to the receptionist). Ummm excuse me kya aap janti hain ki Miss.G kaha hain.

Receptionist: uh ek minute let me check ... ji woh yaha apna check up gynacologist se karne ayee thi lekin woh bas kuch der pehle hi nikal gayee.

M: kya aap bata sakti hain ke oonhe kya hua hain ..

Receptionist: Im sorry sir lekin hum apko humare patient ke bare main koi information nahi deh sakte.

M: ok thank you

M sits in the car and goes away... through out the car ride M is thinking about G and if she is ok ... Dev on the other hand is watching his brother and smiling. ....

At home M gets a call from the clients and he talks about G and how he loves her idea. Dev is thinking that what is happening to him .. why is he hearing G's name?



Ok guys thats it for now ... probably in a little while i will post the next part and if i cant then the next day .... i have tried to make it join with the actual episodes as well... todays is not that well done so im sorry.




Edited by Durga1191 - 12 July 2010 at 10:49pm

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this was really nice

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awesomeness. keep it up! :)

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Ok so im really borded so ill just continue the story .... it might be a bit wiered cause i dont know how to start it... do let me know if u liked it

PART 3

PD: Pinky's dad

RECAP: M and G have lunch together, D and the staff are astonished. D makes fun of M. G tells M to have dinner with his grandmother. And the same episode as 30th june 2010.


At M's house , M kept on thinking about G and wondering if she is ok.

M: kyun main G ke bare main itna soch raha hoon . Nahi mujhe oose door rehna hoga warna woh ladki mujhe pagal kar de gi.

The next day, M comes to office and sees that G isnt there.

M: yeh G ab tak kyun nahi ayee
he goes to P who as usual was eating something
M: G kaha hain.
P: woh sir usko bukhar aur khasi hain issi liye usne aaj ka din off liya hain.
M; (becomes sad) thik hain ...
M leaves and goes to his office and bangs on the desk.
M: G sach main bimar hain, lekin mujhe itna bura kyun lag raha hain ...
M picks up the phone and tells P to cancel all the appointments for today. He leaves the office and heads to G's home.
M knocks onto G's door.
G: lagta hain uncle aa gaye hain dawayi lekar.
G keeps on coughing and is walking slowly to the door. She opens the door and see's M.
G is firstly shocked and is about to say something but holds back and keeps quite.
M: tum phir mujhe darwaze ke bahar rukwaogi.
G turns side ways indicating to him to  come inside
M gets angry and goes inside.... G gets paper and pen and writes instead of talking to him.
G: writes ; aap yahan kya kar rahe hain
M: woh main...tumse ... (M is trying to make some excuse) han main tumse woh Mr.Chopra ke project ke bare main kuch discuss karne aya tha.... tum office main nahi thi toh mujhe laga ki tum ghar par hi hogi.
G: (thinking) kaisa insaan hain usse dikhayee nahi deta ki main bimaar hoon .. baas chala aaya project discuss karne ... hmn mushtanda kahin kaa LOL
M: G kaha kho gayee.. hum project discuss karle ... take main jaldi jaa saku
G;(thinking) kya pagal admi hain ... chodo mujhe kya jitni jaldi woh yaha se jayega utni hi jaldi main kuch bol paoongi.
M: (thinking) main itni jaldi nahi jaoonga G ... jab tak tum mujhse baat nahi karogi main yahan se nahi jaoonga..

G starts coughing... M gets worried, asks her if she is ok and is about to go touch her shoulder but just then P's dad comes in.

PD; G beta tum thik ho... chalo andar chalo tumhe aram ki zaroorat hain na.... chalo

He takes her inside and makes her rest on the bed.
PD: ab tum yaha se bilkul bhi nahi hilo gi ... main tumhare liye dawayee laya hoon ... (he gives her the tablet) ...
G; thank you uncle ...
PD: umm beta mujhe ab jana hoga ... main tumhare saath rehna chahta tha lekin kaam hi itna zaroori hain ke mujhe jana pad raha hain ... main 3 baje tak aa jaoonga tab tak tum apna khayal rakhna.
G: (holds his hand) umcle aap mera kitna khayal rakhte hain ...Cry
PD: beta jab beti bimar hoti hain toh pita ko uska khayal toh rakhna hota hain na.. Clap... accha toh main aata hoon

PD comes outside and sees M there

PD: tum DD ho na
M: (all wiered) ji DD... nahi main Maan Khurana
PD: haan DD.. yahan par toh sab tumhe DD hi bulate hain
M: (DD yeh DD kya hain)..
PD: tum yaha, tumhe toh office main hona chahiye na
M: woh mujhe G se kuch kaam tha isiliye
PD: woh zara bimar hain...aur mujhe kaam par jana hain ... toh ..(he gets an idea) kya tum yaha rukh sakte ho jab tak main wapas na aajaoon
M: aap mujhe rukne keliye keh rahe hain
PD: betaji jaha tak maine aap ke bare main suna hain.. aap uss type ke insaan toh nahi ho LOLBig smiletoh mujhe pura wishwas hain ke aap G ka khayal rakhenge..
M: (thinking) yeh G mere bare main pata nahi kya boora bhala bolti hain ... aaj toh main isse nahi chodoonaga  .
M: ok jab tak aap wapas nahi aate main yahi par rahoonga...
PD: thankyou betaji Smile

PD leaves, M closes the door

M: achhi baat hain ab main oos G ka yeh maun wrath toodwa kar hi rahoonga... ApproveLOL

G in her room puts her hand on her stomach and is thinking

G; mujhe apna zyada khayal rakhna hoga ... mere bacche ko mujhe safe rakhna hain ... Embarrassed... mujhe maaf karna beta mujhe aapna dhyan rakhna chahiye tha take tumhe koi taklif na ho...

M  in the living room is thinking and pacing around

M: kya karoon.. andar jaoon yah na jaoon , andar gaya toh kitna awkeward lage ga ... kya karoon G se baat jo karwani hain ... warna woh pagal ladki puri zindagi mujhe baat nahi karegi ... yeh main kya soch raha hoon mujhe pharak nahi padna chahiye ki woh mujhse baat kare ya na kare... lekin mujhe itna bura kyun lag raha hain .... jab se usne mujhse baat karna band kiya hain mujhe itna unconfortable kyun feel ho raha hain ... yeh ladki sach main pagal hain aur mujhe ek din pagal khane bhej kar hi rahe gi

OK GUYS SO MUCH FOR TODAY ... Tongue THANX FOR READING ... PLZ DO COMMENT (IF U GUYS HAVE ANY COMMENTS OR SUGGESTIONS PLZ LET ME KNOW) Big smile



Edited by Durga1191 - 12 July 2010 at 10:50pm

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Guys the 3rd post has been completed... i have edited the story... i just wanted to let u guys know so that there isnt any confusion .

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wow gr8 update yaar.....continue pls.............
pls pm me abt next update

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