Mayank-Nupur FF ~Come closer to me~ The End-pg17 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome one mansi
it was full of mayurish......
loved the nok-jok
continue soon
waiting forother parts
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb mansi.....
i liked your ff....
do continue soooooooooooon...............
n thanks for posting it to me.....
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Posted: 13 years ago
mansi it was superb ......... i had a smile on my face throughout reading it ..........it is typically mayurish ........... loved it soo much ...... i was imagining all this happening ...... plz continue sooncant wait to read the next two parts ...............
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely ff mansi nice start

do cont soon
Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely FF Mansi..
Thnx for the PM..
Do cont soon..

~Hina~
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bhavana92

awesome Mansi!👏
aww! the fights n other moments b/w MayUr were totally MayUrish n cute....😍
thanx 4 making this attempt in bringing back the golden MayUr days Mansi....🤗
i'm still smiling goofily! lol!😃
do cont. soon n PM me hun....



Awww..Im so glad i could make you smile! 😳 thanku!
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing os!!!
really loved it
do write more....
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was amazing...do pm me wen u update it 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice FF
Liked it
Mayur really fghts a lot but love their nok jhoks
Amar n Ashtha ne dono ko neeche bhej diya
the sleepy nok jhok was really sweet
Plz pm next time u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
 
 
                                           PART-2
Next morning '
 
Nupur got up first. Her head rested on Mayank's chest and her hands were around him. Realizing where she was, she quickly moved away. Yawning she saw that Aastha and Amar were still sleeping. Today they were all going to some resort for a weekend. Finally she was getting a break. Both she and Mayank had taken some time off for the trip. She felt her back ache from sleeping down. What kids she thought. She actually giggled thinking about last night. All had been a mess. But then as usual , Mayank was a sweet-heart. She hugged him and ruffled his hair.

Nupur- 'Mayank..tum mujhe itna pareshan kyun karte ho? Hamesha mujhse ladte ho..buddhu. By god akar mujhe chance mile to main'..' She stopped. 'Chodo.' She was about to get up , when she was pulled down.

Mayank- 'Chance mile to??'

Nupur- 'Tum jage huye the Mayank??' She asked shocked.

Mayank- 'Tum mujhse baat karo aur main na sunu..aisa kabhi ho sakta hai?'

Nupur- 'To ye baat hai? Hmm'acha ab mujhe chodo mujhe neeche jaana hai. Sab uth gaye honge..'

Mayank- 'Nupur time dekho ..sirf 7 baaje hai..mat jao na please..' Holding her hand.

Nupur- 'By god Mayank..chodo..'

Mayank- 'Ek hi shart pe..pehle tum kaho ke tumne mujhe maaf kar diya..'

Nupur- Remembering she was angry. She got up. 'Nahin maaf karungi.'

Mayank- 'Nupur please'I promise ke next month tum jahan bologi hum wahi jayenge. Pakka. Please aise mere saath mat lado na..Tum kitni achi ho '.'

Nupur- 'Bas-bas jyada maska marne ki zaroorat nahin hai. Maine maaf kar diya..khush? Main neeche ja rahe hun ab. Bye.' She took the bed-sheet off her.

Mayank- 'Wow..kya tum meri Nupur ho? Yakeen nahin hota..tumne mujhe itni jaldi maaf kar diya..Nupur you are great!' He said all this , tugging her arm.

Nupur- 'Mayank please mujhe jaane do..ab chodo bhi!' Acting irritated.

Mayank hugged her tight , resting his head on her shoulder and slept. 'Bas 5 min..good night.'

Nupur sighed. 'Mayank tum bhi na!'

Mayank opened his eyes and smiled. He traced his finger to her cheek. He gave a small peck on her cheek.

Nupur- 'Mayank please'hum kamre main akele nahin hai.' She whispered her body shivering.

Mayank- 'Ssssshhhh'' He moved further and played with her loose strands.

Meanwhile Aastha suddenly got up. 'Good morning. Yeh kya ho raha hai subah subah?' She giggled and drifted off to sleep again.

Mayank and Nupur nearly got an attack. Nupur felt so awkward , she hit Mayank a couple of times and went of from there.

Mayank- 'Arre Nupur..main to bas. Shit. Hamesha sab galat ho jaata hai.'

Sometime later- In the car park.

Mayank was in the car when Aastha and Amar came.

Aastha- 'Hi bhaiya'' She said in one of the cutest voice.

Mayank- 'Aastha Amar..tum dono yahan kya kar rahe ho??' He said shockingly coming out of the car and taking them behind it.

Amar- 'Acha..jaise hi kaam ho gaya hume bhul gaye??'

Mayank- 'Main..main kuch nahin bhula hun. Samjhe tum dono.' Looking here and there.

Aastha- 'To nikalo mere 500 rupee.'

Amar- 'Haan aur mere bhi..'

Mayank- 'Main tujhe kyun du?? Tere wajah se pura plan flop ho jaata idiot. Tujhe kisne kaha tha upar aane ko?'

Amar- 'Dekho bhaiya'chup chap paise dedo varna theek nahin hoga.'

Mayank- Looking here and there to see nobody comes. He took out his wallet and gave them a 500 rupee note. 'Yeh lo divide kar dena.' And he started walking.

Both the kids pulled his hand. 'Hello bhaiya..mat karo ye sab..acha nahin hoga.' Amar said warning him.

Mayank- 'Kaise cousins ho? Bhai ko aise koi loota ta hai kya?' Innocent face. They both nodded their heads. 'Matlab tum dono nahin manoge?'

They both shook their heads. He sighed and made innocent faces..but the kids didn't budge. He finally took out another 500 Rs. Note and gave it to them.

Mayank- 'Ab tum dono chup rehna..samjhe?'

Aastha and Amar- 'Okay..' They smiled their widest grins. 'Waise Bhab's ne maaf kar diya na?' Aatha asked.

Mayank ' Smiling. 'Haan. Thank God. Plan to successful huya.'

Some minutes later-

Mayank- 'Maa sab pack ho gaya??' He said closing the car deck.

Mom- 'Haan beta..yeh Nupur ne acha idea de diya..ek car main luggage aur ek main hum sab.'

Nupur smiled. 'Thanks ma.'

Mom- 'Acha to hum sab who badi waali gadi main jaate hai..tum aur Amar who luggage waali gadi se aa jana..Theek hai na Mayu? Chalo Nupur chalte hain.'

Mayank and Nupur looked at each other.

Amar- 'Lets go bro..'

Mayank ' 'Ma..main soch raha tha..ke umm..Nupur mere saath aate to better hota na?' He stammered.

Mom- 'Kyun???' Purposely teasing him.

Mayank- 'Ma..aap bhi na.' Hand behind his head. Blushing.

Ma- All grins. 'Acha theek hai. Nupur tum aur Mayank chale jao. Bye.'

Nupur hugged her. 'Thanks ma. You're the best mother.' She whispered before leaving.

Mayank and Nupur left first in the car towards Lonavla.

In the car-
Mayank- 'Mere ma kitni achi hai na..??' He said smiling.

Nupur- 'Hamare ma''

Mayank- 'Haan..wohi baba.'

Nupur- 'By god Mayank tum bhi na'pata hai mujhe to vishwas hi nahin hota..hum dono finally kahin ja rahe hain. Who bhi tum kam chod ke. Superb! Gunjan ko jaroor bataunge!' She giggled.

Mayank- 'Ab to vishwas karlo mere ma..please.' He laughed too.

Nupur staring'doing the vari-vari. 'Hayee..Mayank tum has rahe ho? Tumhe kisi ki nazar na lage.'

Mayank- 'Okay Nupur ab bas..tum sirf drive enjoy karo.'

She smiled..and rested her head on his shoulders for the whole amazing drive.

Mayank and Nupur reached the Lonavla resort much later. They had booked a lot of rooms and being first they had the choice of which one they wanted. And so they decided and moved in with their bag.

Mayank sitting on the comfortable bed. 'God..kitna tiring tha yeh drive..pata nahin ma wagar kaha hai..unka phone bhi nahin lag raha hai.'

Nupur sat in front of the mirror combing her hair. 'Haan..woh bhi bas aate hi honge..dont worry.' She replied.

Then Mayank got a call from his mom that their car had a problem and they had just stayed in that area till it got repaired..and now it was too late to come to Lonavala..so they would come the next morning.

Mayank's smile..was uncontrollable. He and Nupur alone. For one FULL night..in such a beautiful destination filled with the dark sky- shining stars and beautiful moon.

Nupur- 'Kya hua Mayank? Tum itna muskurare kyun ho?' She got up walking towards him.

Mayank smiled again. He pulled her down so she could sit next to him and suddenly started humming. 'Hum tum..ek kamre main band ho..aur chaabi kho jaye?' He made her lie down and lied down next to her.

Pushing him. 'Mayank..tum ye kya kar rahe ho? Chodo mujhe..'

Mayank explained everything to her.

Nupur- Getting up. 'Kya?? Aise kaise ho sakta hai? Tum ruko..main abhi ma ko call karte hun.' Picking up Mayank's cell.

Mayank pulled her down. 'Paagal ho gaye ho kya Nupur? Tum bhi na'kitni unromantic ho aur mujhe kehte ho..' He grinned.

Nupur- 'Hmm..par woh main'bas'' Putting a strand of hair behind and looking down.

Mayank- 'Mere saath akele dar lag raha hai kya?' He asked in a smiling yet serious voice.

Nupur- 'By god Mayank tum to jaise koi film ki villain ki tarah baat kar rahe ho..' She said getting up. 'Main to bas yeh soch rahe the..ke woh sab bechare wahan phase huye hain..aur kuch nahin.'

Getting up and hugging her from behind. 'Relax..Ma hai na..woh sab sambhalege..tum uski bilkul tension mat lo.'

Nupur- 'Hmmm..theek hai.'

They stayed in the same position for sometime, when he finally turned her so she faced him.

Mayank- 'I cant believe ke hum finally akele hai..' Moving close in a seductive voice. He kissed her neck. He moved up and kissed her cheek..and moving till her fore-head. Nupur stood there still..eyes closed. He touched his fore-head with hers and looked at her. She was the same..standing still waiting for a response. He tightened his grip and pulled her closer.

Nupur- 'Mayank mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai..' She said in her softest voice..which was very unlikely Nupur. He waited. 'Hmmm..woh..main..mujhe''

Mayank- 'Kya?' He too softly replied almost touching her lips.

Nupur- 'Hmmm..' She took a deep breath. 'Mujhe '.bhook lage hai.'

Mayank was taken aback for a split second. He left her. They stared at each other for a minute and burst out laughing.

Mayank- 'Nupur..tum bhi na'.' Laughing looking down..hand over his forehead.

Nupur- 'Aur nahin to kya..itni traveling ki..bhook nahin lagegi kya?' She replied still laughing. 'Tumhare shakal dekhne layak thi..by god Mayank!!'

Mayank- 'Acha? To mera mazak udaya ja raha hai?' Catching her hand.

Nupur- 'Jaise tum samjho Mayu!! Ab mujhe chodo..main change karke aate hun..phir hum dinner ke liye chalte hai..by god sach main pet main chuhe daud rahe hai.'

Mayank- 'Mera naam Mayank hai!!' He said seriously. He hated being called like this.

Nupur- 'Jo bhi hai..' Walking towards her bag and taking her clothes she walked to the changing room.

Mayank- 'Arre kahan jaa rahe ho??' Rushing towards her before the door closed.

Nupur- 'Kahan na change karne..bye.' Closing the door.

Mayank- Stopping the door. 'Main bhi aa jaun???' He replied naughtily.

Nupur ' 'Kis khushi main?'

Mayank- 'Arre tumhe help karne aur kya? Picturen nahin dekhte kya? Hero hamesha apni heroine ko help karta hai dress change karne main.' Making excuses innocently.

Nupur- Cupping his cheeks. 'Mayank..woh tabhi hota hai jab heroine ke haath main mehendi lagi rehte hai. Aur mere to haath main nahin na? So sorry.' And with this she slammed the door.

Mayank stood there smiling.

Nupur came out minutes later dressed in a beautiful pink sleeve-less top and a pretty black skirt. Her eyes had a bit of mascara lined to it and some strawberry gloss with it. Natural and beautiful. Hair was left loose and moved to the left side.

Nupur- Posing. 'Kaise lag rahe hun main?'

He was dumb-struck seen her..she looked different and simply gorgeous!

Mayank- He walked towards her.  'Nupur tumhe sach main bhook lagi hai kya??' He asked her jokingly.

Nupur- Laughing. 'Haan..ab chalo!' Pushing him towards the door.

They went to the resort restaurant where they were shown to a beautiful cornered candle-lit table. Mayank took out a chair for Nupur and later sat down too.

Mayank- 'So Nupur madam kya khayegi?'

Nupur- 'Ummm'.Salad??'

Mayank- 'What?? Salad?? Tumne salad khane ke liye mujhe yahan tak laye? Nupur!'

Nupur- 'C'mon Mayank..maine tumhe kaha tha na..ke main dieting kar rahe hun. Agar tumhare biwi haathi ki tarah moti ho gaye to? Acha nahin lagega na..??' She replied seriously.

Mayank stared at her for a second and then started laughing. 'Nupur..tum bhi na''

He called the waiter and ordered for a cheese pizza and noodles; Nupur's favourites.

Nupur- 'Mayank'.paagal ho gaye ho kya? Ek din main hi 2 kgs put on ho jayega!!' She said angrily.

Mayank turned a deaf ear and ordered for something to drink. Before the food the drinks came. Mayank had ordered aerated drinks for them.

They were getting bored. 'Mayank chalo na hum ek game khelte hai.'

Mayank- 'Game?'

Nupur- 'Haan..ke sabse pehle drink kaun khatam karta hai'!!'

Mayank- 'Nupur please..mujhe tumhare yeh childish games nahin khelna.'

Nupur- 'Mayank sadu jaise behave mat karo. Okay main 5 tak ginti hun'theek hai?'

He gave in uninterested. 'Okay.'

Nupur counted till 5 and they started. Mayank made a face and stopped in the middle; but Nupur gulped down the whole thing.

Mayank snatched the glass from her hand. 'Nupur ye mat piyo..' But too late. She was almost at the end. Nupur started behaving weirdly. The drinks effects started getting on her'Mayank got so angry..he got up to scream at the waiter who got the wrong drinks. As he went..

Nupur- 'Mayank'..Mayu..ka..kahan ja rahe ho??' She said in a shrill voice. When he didn't notice , she made a weird face. She saw that his glass was still on the table. 'Yeh Mayank bhi na..sab kuch waste karta hai..verrrrrry bad. Par koi baat nahin ..main uski biwi hun..main finish kar dete hun!' She took his glass also and finished it off. She started giggling all of a sudden.

Mayank who witnessed all this was in a complete shock. 'Nupur!' He made a face and snatched the glass.

Nupur- Getting up. She traced her finger on his cheek. 'Hayee..mera sweety Mayank.' She put her arms around him.

Mayank- Getting embarssed . ' Nupur stop.' Everyone was looking at them.

She made a face and left him and started walking. 'Main chali main chali dekho pyaar ki gaali..' Sad tune. 'Koi roke na koi main chali main chali..' She hummed in a sad voice.

Mayank- 'Nupur chalo kamre main chalo..please tamasha mat khada karo..' He begged pulling her hand..also looking at the people around.

Nupur stopped walking. She pointed a finger at him. 'Tum kamre main mere saath kya karoge???'

Mayank rolled his eyes. 'Kuch bhi nahin karunga..I ..I promise.' He whispered.

Nupur- 'Toh main tumhare saath NAHIN chalunge..' She giggled. 'Main chali..main chali..' She started humming again.

Catching her again. 'Acha..tum jo bologi main wohi karunga..ab please mere baat mano Nupur.'

Nupur- Thinking. 'Mayank..yahan par beach hai na?'

Mayank- 'Haan..kyun?'

Nupur- 'Mujhe wahan lekar chalo..abhi ka abhi.'

Mayank sighed.

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Please do comment!😳 And one more thing..I do have a feeling this might extend to 4 parts..and extra part maybe.. 😳
 
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Edited by -Mansi- - 13 years ago