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Lovely concept...

Looking forward to your ff..

Do continue soon...

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rads14

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awesome concept..!!
really loved it..
pm me when u update
cont soon

maloo19

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wonderful concept

plz cont soon

MyInspirationz

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beautiful concept Sarsika.... continue soon..

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Heyyy sariska
nice cs n concept
do start soon
thanx for pm

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nice

do continue

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add me to yaar
lovely concept

sariska_mnarti

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thnx a lot for ur lovely comments!!!!!!!!love ya all!!!!

here comes the update.i know its small but next update will be big!!!!!

Intro:
Note:before u read this update let me tell u tht mayur r senior
doctors,age 27.both work in sanjeevani in mumbai and had come to delhi
as their families were here.

"Yeh shaadi samparn hui,aaj se aap pati patni hain"
The marriage was over and now nupur and mayank were tied in the sacred
bond of marriage.
At night:
Nupur was waiting for mayank to come.she was standing near the
window.suddenly she heard the door opening.mayank entered and saw
nupur and was mesmerized by her beauty but then he realized tht he has
to take revenge.
M(in mind)-tumhaari behen ne Jo mere saath kiyaa uska har ek badla
tumse loonga nupur.tumhari zindagi ko nark bana doonga.wait and
watch.here comes mayank sharma.

He comes towards her and turns her around harshly leaving her shocked.
M-listen tum jao aur change karke chupchap so jao kyunki mujhe zyada
khich-khich karne wale log bilkul bhi pasand nahin hai samjhi
Nupur was on the verge of tears.
M(angrily)-ab aise roti Surat karke mujhe mat dekho aur yeh kabhi
samajhne ki bhool mat karna ki main tumse pyaar karta hoon samjhi.ab
jaao aur chupchap sofa par so Jana.main nahin chahta ki tum mere bed
mein so.ab aise Khadi khadi Kya dekh rahi ho jaao.
And he falls on HIS bed and sleeps leaving a sad nupur behind.she
strts crying badly as she had never expected mayank to be like
this.she went to the washroom and changed and came and slept on the
sofa without any blanket.soon she was fast asleep while crying.she was
wearing a silk nightdress.mayank saw this and purposely he decreased
the AC temperature to 16 degrees.nupur started badly shivering as she
is not used to such cold ac.but she did not have a blanket too.she
slept shivering.

Next day:

Nupur gets up and gets ready.after she gets ready she sees mayank who
is peacefully sleeping on the bed.
N(in mind)-itna pyaara sa chehra hai aapka par aap aise kyun hain?she
turns towards the mirror,Kya meri zindagi mein Yahi hona tha???

To Kya nupur ki zindagi humesha aise hi rahegi????will she ever be
able to get mayank's love??will samrat cause problems in mayur's
life???to know this wait for the next update.

Precap:
"hi I'm dr.samrat shergill,soon to join sanjeevani in Mumbai"
"hi dr.nupur bhu....i mean sharma,senior doctor in sanjeevani,so ab
hum ek saath kaam karenge isn't tht gr8????"
will samrat cause problems in mayur's
life???to know this wait for the next update.

So guys here was my intro
Do comment
Will try to update soon
Sariska

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