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Posted: 14 October 2010 at 2:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swati98

Loving the updates.And please do PM me. I wait for your PM's.
 
heyy swati!! thaanxx.. oops.. did i miss youu?? im sryy will make sure oi Pm you from next time!

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Posted: 14 October 2010 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
Heyy Guys!
Im backk with another update!
This is for the complaining sajanians...!!
Sorry mayurians.. your story will continue in the next update! major things will happen nextt
hope you like the new story line!
EnJoY!
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After some time gunjan called samrat again.. his phone was busy..

She called samrat again and again but he din recieve her call.. The she realised that she was trying through her landline so mayb samrat din know it was her!

She kept the phone and went towards her cellphone..

Just then the phone rang.. she ran and picked it up!

G: hello?

S: hii chashmish.. phone kiya thaa?

G: tumne uthaya kyun nahi?

S: woh main ghar par tha..

G: oh par aaj tumhari basketball practise thi na?

S: haan..

G: toh tum—

S: maine adhiraj ko wapas team main le liya!

G: thanks.. par main poochh rahi thi ki tum nahi gaye?

S: woh—um.. gunjan.. bas..

G: Gunjan?

S: im mean chashmish.. bas esehi..

G: Ek minute.. abhi toh tournament bhi chaloo hone waala hain! Phir tum practise pe kyun nahi ja rahe?

S: chhodo na gun—chashmish..

G: samrat tum mujhse kya chhipa rahe ho! Mujhe nahi pata tha ki ek baar main door chali jaungi toh tum jhoot bolne lagoge!

S: nahi chashmish.. maine aaj tak kabhi tumse jhooth bola hain??

G: pata nahi kyun samrat! Aaj jab tumne mujhe gunjan bulaya.. toh..

Tears started rolling down her eyes! She was missing samrat!

S: chashmish phir roh rahi ho! Chalo aasoon pochho!

G: i really miss you samrat!

S: Chashmish tumhare bina main kaise jee raha hoon sirf main hi janta hoon!

G: I love you!

S: Love you too jaan! Aur please rona band karo! Agar bauji dekhenge toh unhe kitna bura lagega!

G: Bauji.. woh toh mujhse achhe se baat tak nahi karte—

S: woh baat nahi karte ya tum unse door rehti ho..

G: samraat.. tum mujhe itni achhi tarah kaise jaante ho?

S: hmm. Toh unse baat karo! Woh tumse kitna pyaar karte hain!

G: pyaar? Agar pyaar karte toh meri baat samajhte! Mere pyaar ko samajhte!

S: chashmish phir se.. Woh.. unki tarah socho.. agar tumhari beti ki life ka sawaal hota toh tum kya karti? Usse kissi bhi larke ke saath jane deti?? N plus tum kitni lucky ho ki tumhare paas koi aisa hain jo tumhare baare main sochta hain! Mujhe dekho! Na mom mere saath hain na dad! Khud ke decisions khud hi lene parte hain!

G: samrat mujhe yaha se le jao please..!!

S: nahi chashmish! Isse hum kabhi khush nahi reh payenge! Tum hamesha sochte rahogi ki kaash maine bauji se baat ki hoti!

G: tum bhi na samrat! Tum itne achhe kyun ho/??

Gunjan started crying..

S: bye chashmish!

G: kyun?

S: tum roh rahi ho.. mujhe tumse baat nahi karni!!

G: achha baba sorry! Lo pochh liye aassonn!

S: better!

G: tumne ab tak mere sawaal ka jawab nahi diya..

S: kya sawaal?

G: Samrat.. mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hain ki tumne adhiraj ko lekar khud ko team se bahar kar diya..

S: chashmish.. woh..

G: samrat... tum.. tum aisa kaise kar sakte ho! Basketball tumhari life hain!!

S: basketball se importnat tum ho chashmish tumhari wish toh poori karni hi thi..

G: toh meri ek aur wish sunlo! Tum  basketball tournament kheloge! Samjhe! As a captain! Aur adhiraj itna bura nahi hain.. Woh—

S: Mujhe adhi raj ke baare main koi baat nahi karni! Please!

 aur yeh wish poori nahi ho sakti!

G: mujhe laga ki main tumhari life main sabse important thi..

S: tum hamesha aise kyun karti ho.. (almost giving in again!)

G: bas.. main hoon hi aisi!

S: Bohot ziddi!!!

G: Haww!! Samrat! Main ziddi nahi hoon!

S: nahi ho??? Itnii ziddi ho!!

G: jao..! bye!

S:ok.. fine fine.. meri chashmish bohot hi sweet hain!

G: aww.. how sweet!

S: theek hain ab chalo.. mujhe basketball practise main jana hain!

G: thanks! Thats like my samrat! Mwah!

S: Bye.. love you!

Click! Some one kept the phone on the other end! Gunjan heard some one keep the phone..

G: hello?

S: haan.!

G looked around.. she clicked thatt maybe bauji had heard their conversation! Shit! She had to go talk to him! He must be so angry wid her now!

S: hello? I love you too ka wait kar raha hoon!!

G: samrat bauji ne hamari saari baate sun li!

S: what?

G: haan.. main tumse baad main baat karti hoon! Bye

S: ok.. bye.!

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Gunjan went to bauji..

B: apne bauji ke baare main bohot achhi achhi baate kar rahi thi!

G: woh bauji—

B: Gunjan.. tumhe lagta hai ki main tumse pyaar nahi karta na.. sirf isliye kyunki main tumhe wapas nahi jaane de raha!

Bauji's phone rings!

B: hello

N: namaste bauji!

B: nupur beta ! kaisi ho? Toh kya tum yaha aa rahi ho?

N: woh.. bauji.. college on hain.. main –

B: koi baat nahi phir.. aur batao kaise phone kiya?

N: bauji mujhe aapse gunjan ke baare main kuchh baat karni thi..

B: haan bolo?

N: woh actually.. gunjan aur samrat ek doosre se—

B: haan..!! maine abhi inki phone par baate suni! Samrat na.. mujhe kuchh suna nahi hain uske baare main! Woh apne parents ke saath bhi nahi rehta!

N: par bauji—

B: beta agar koi aur baat hain toh bolo?

N: nahi bauji.. phir main baad main baat karti hoon.. par bas ek baat yaad rakhiyega! Yaha koi hain jo gunjan ka itna khayal rakhta hain ki gunjan ko zameen par paer rakhne ki zarwat hi nahi padhti! Koi jo shayad usse behad pyaar karta hain..

B: theek hain beta.. rakhta hoon!

............................

G: di ne kya kaha?

B: ki samrat bahut achha hain!

G looked down! Koi phayda nahi hain! Bauji ko koi phark nahi padne waala! Adhiraj ki mom ne kaha hain.. woh unki baato par zyada bharosa karenge!

B: gunjan... main tum dono se bohot pyaar karta hoon! Aur yahi koshish karunga ki tum dono hamesha sukhi raho! Tumhe koi takleef nahi ho..Mere marne ke baad bhi--

G: bauji..!!

And she hugged him! He smiled and hugged her backk!

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Precap: Mayank chooses Priya over nupur!

 

Hey guys! hope you enjoyed!

Plz give your comments! ill be waitingg!!

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Posted: 14 October 2010 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
hey dear really loved sajan' s convo i hope bauji will understand their love can't wait for next part do continue soon and thanks for pm 

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Posted: 14 October 2010 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
aaaawwwww sooooooooo beautiful manjaree.......................very well written n thanks 4fulfilling sajanians wish...........i really loved d updt..........
phone convo of sajan ws really worth reading yaa.........aaawwww poor sam took adhi in team n khud team  se bahar chala gaya.........just 4gunjan................soooo sweeeet of him............
n omg i ws like ShockedShockedShocked when bauji heard their convo...........................
u r a mind-blowing writer...........luv u Hug................
btw thnks 4pm n plz cont soon.........i kno tht next 1wud b for mayurians, bt still................u kno how greedy v sajanians r...........thode bahut sajan scenes k hope mein padh loongiLOL................
 
lots of love,
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Posted: 14 October 2010 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
AWESOME  part!!!!:D
I  just  loved  SaJan's  phone  convo!!:) 
Nupsi  is  so  nice  but  bauji  is  aarrggg!!!
cont  soon!  plz

Luv  Adya!Hug

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Posted: 14 October 2010 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
Wao yaar luvd dis updt especialy sajan convo too gud yar luvd it.
plz plz cnt soon.
luv u
vritika

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Posted: 14 October 2010 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
awesome update
really nice
loved sajan phone convo
continue soon

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Posted: 14 October 2010 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
hey manjari dis part is awesum yar muah especialy sajan convo realy luvd it plz do cont asap.

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