Fan Fictions


Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

ArSh l Tum Mile: Drop in message/Pg 56 (Page 10)

Pebblez Goldie

BollyCurry Buzzer
Joined: 08 June 2008
Posts: 1798

Posted: 10 July 2010 at 10:00am | IP Logged
Update update update :D

U-No-Poo IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 15 June 2007
Posts: 23481

Posted: 10 July 2010 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
@armaanakakaran: Thanks! :)
@Nahida - where's the comment gal? :P
@desire_20 - thankies! yep, he needs to be more vocal and quit being the prince charming ;)
@Pranz di - Heloooo! sorry di for not informing you, I didn't think you'd be interested :( sorry!
yep, ArSh share this weird comfort level, it's like their togertherness or comfort is not dependant on words, it's beyond them! thanks for commenting di! :D

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


U-No-Poo IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 15 June 2007
Posts: 23481

Posted: 10 July 2010 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pebblez

:D yayyyy neetz, you updated! God, WHAT wouldn't I give to have Armaan in the show exactly as he is here...sadness is powerful, and karan would have pulled it off SO well, i can almost see it *sighs* the terrace scene was yet again, so bravely put and so outright, it was almost as if you took it out of everyone's subconscious imagination/....somewhere, all of us have wanted things to be this way, but never been able to express is as fully as u have :D so hats off lady, um proud of youu! :) great going, update jaldi ker na!

And No, please dont add me to the PM list, i will check for myself :) pms really annoy me :P

Great work again Neetz!

Heloz kiran! Big smile 
I swear! I want armaan to be exactly like this. but the CVs are hell bent on potraying him as the ultimate 'qurbaani' hero who smiles through his problems. it's like DMG is not a youth show anymore, it's a newer version of our 90's and 80's ki romantic films Ermm - where everything is so visibly (and painfully) cliched.
Thankyou so much! Hug you see, I'm an expert mind reader and a psychic. Tongue
Okies, no pms for you! :D
U-No-Poo IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 15 June 2007
Posts: 23481

Posted: 10 July 2010 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
@JAZZ_ACUA - Thankyou! :)
@Vaish - yep, sid needs to come out of the hiding and have a look at a brutal fact. his relationship with ridhima would be better off if he's aware of her past.
mods locked my thread in the dmg section! :(
@nidha - thankyou so much!
@twilightmystery - thanks :D
@ruky786 - yep, madno is a beautiful song! I've had it on repeat for the past 2 days :P

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


U-No-Poo IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 15 June 2007
Posts: 23481

Posted: 10 July 2010 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Hannah.


This was (don't want to swear) but it was effing AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Tell me if you want me to edit that hehe LOL)
No way I want you to edit that! Wink LOL Let the true feelings out babe :P

It was like the reader  was swimming in this cocktail of emotions..... and then we FINALLY........ got a snippet of an Armaan who we can see WILL be able to move on. And his moving on MAKES SENSE and is LOGICAL!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thankyou so much! Yep, his moving on seems logical and justified. He realizes the fact that Ridhima is not his anymore, and it's not her that's holding him back, it's her memories. He just has to let go of those Smile

Maybe this would be a turning point in his life.....Armaan broke away from his gaze, suddenly finding the last step very interesting, 'I will', he said after a long pause.

Yes... hopefully Armaan will be able to find happiness...

Tbh Neetz, I am sick of Riddhimas character... she gave AR some very nice memories... but she very callously (I feel), tore those same memories apart... she broke away from him without thinking how the consequences would play on him... Such a life.... As much as I love AR, I don't like the current Riddhima.
I agree! I hate the current Ridhima. She's self centered, insensitive, hypocritical and basically just repulsive. I cannot stand her at all! She dumped armaan like a sack of potatoes, and the worse part is, that she doesnt regret it.

I have always taken liking to SidMaan, and you are right in your FF, it is high time that the fact  AR once shared a relationship was not ignored, and not hidden under rocks as if it never existed. I think for them to move on they actually need to work through it and not just give roses which actually meant de nada :| And yee Sid deserves the truth...
Yep. Giving roses or singing songs does not help a relationship as much as a simple cofrontational conversation does. that's what Sidhima need. Not sid fumbling around like a teenage kid and ridhima giving him the angry looks. Working on their relationship? I don't think so. they're going round and round in circles (which is also frustrating the audience LOL)

ArSh scene was beautifully penned. It was like they neednt speak they just understood one another. I am glad that Shilpa is aware that AR shared a relationship, hopefully this way there will be no secrets in their relationship.
I hope not, because ArSh in my fic are not going be the insecure couple that AR were. they're going to be stronger and steadier Big smile

I am very excited to read about Shilpa's character!!! Lets see how this breast cancer storyline shapes out... I am guessing we will probably find out some secrets about Shilpa... but my last prediction was incorrect... I was guessing that Sid would see ArSh on the terrace hehe... I was WRONG hehe...
yep, the breast cancer story is very important to my fic, it'll shed light on alot of hidden aspects of shilpa's character Big smile well, I'm quite unpredictable you know Wink

The inspiration song was tressss bonitaaaaaaa <3 I think ima put it on my iPOD. DO IT NOW! it's beautiful Embarrassed

1Qs- Are SR gonna play a part in this FF? Or are they BG characters?  Just bg characters, but well developed nonetheless :)

Beautiful update as ALWAYS :)

Hannah Banana Hug
Thankyou for commenting hannah banana! Hug

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


funkybratz IF-Dazzler

Joined: 14 July 2009
Posts: 3965

Posted: 10 July 2010 at 3:30pm | IP Logged
sorry!!!! neetz
*clap* *hugs* *clap* *hugs*
i know i didnt commented on the last two parts but they were superb....!!!!
really loved it
soo he told her abt his
and i m soo happy that even armaan told sid that he had an argument with ridhima
hidding thing related to ridhima could have been trouble for them in future...
and well i love dthe way they stayed hugging each other...and omg she felt something wow
love is on the way??? i guess *curious*lolz
neetz...loved it really and thank for the pm
want an update please
love maleehaBig smile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


HeAvEnS Goldie

Joined: 01 October 2007
Posts: 2423

Posted: 10 July 2010 at 7:22pm | IP Logged
haayyye CZ that was wonderfull i hope
they CV just read that follow that story
line of urs
it is amazing
loved it to core
that finaaly Armaan told her about the past
and sid about the argument love it yeahhhhhhhhhh
tjat was lovelly
waiting for the next part
please update soon
Love Heaven

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Prasanthi IF-Rockerz

Joined: 24 June 2008
Posts: 5361

Posted: 13 July 2010 at 3:40am | IP Logged

Since you had thought I may not be interested on reading this, now I am here to pester you to update soon. Big smile

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
TR FF : Tum Mile Tho Jeena Aagaya...#2 ch25

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 16 17

Author: lovelytaarey   Replies: 129   Views: 27748

lovelytaarey 129 27748 23 November 2014 at 10:14am by taareycrazyfan
~Vo Mile The~ RT-MC Last Part : Part 27 Pg 147

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 140 141

Author: Amor.   Replies: 1121   Views: 97419

Amor. 1121 97419 06 April 2014 at 3:01am by ridzzi
AriyaSS:Wo pehli baar jab hum mile..OS pg 65 jun10

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 62 63

Author: _TaNi_   Replies: 499   Views: 49218

_TaNi_ 499 49218 20 February 2014 at 10:36pm by FLOREY
ArshiTS: Woh Peheli Bar Jab Hum Mile Epilogue Pg30

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 28 29

Author: -.Pari.-   Replies: 230   Views: 36414

-.Pari.- 230 36414 03 January 2014 at 4:42am by cherrybloom1
new arsh fic-{~ArSh married!!!~}COMPLETED!

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 36 37

Author: OkThanksBye   Replies: 293   Views: 108352

OkThanksBye 293 108352 25 January 2013 at 8:49pm by amandadsouza95

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index