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Hi Everyone! This is me, Naina again. Before anything else, I want to thank all of you for welcoming me to the forum. I really do appreciate it :) A lot of people told me to continue writing, and deepa101 sent me the idea of writing my version of PR, and to where I would take the story. I was initially going to update it next week, but the story seems to be actually moving now, so I wrote a really really short part right now to see how many of you would like it.
This would start kind of yesterday's episode end, but Baba's at the hospital and yeah....
Pavitra Rishta (My Version)
Manav was pacing the hospital floor, back and forth, and back and forth, waiting for the doctor to finish his checkup of Baba and tell them what was happening. Archana sat on one of the chairs, holding Savita Aai, who was sobbing uncontrollably, thinking about what would happen to her husband, the man whom she fought with everyday, but also loved unconditionally.
"Aai. It's ok. Nothing will happen. Baba will be all right" consoled Archana, rubbing her hand on Aai's back, trying to stop her tears.
Sravani sat on the other side of Savita Aai, glaring at Archana, thinking What is she even doing here? She promised she wouldn't come here. Humph. I knew she would never leave me in peace.
"Archana. Get away from here. You have no ties with this family. I'll take care of Aai and Manav and Baba, so you can just leave" said Sravani suddenly, pulling Archana's hand away from Savita Aai's back and pushing it away.
Fury blazed in the always tranquil Manav, as he grasped Sravani's hand tightly. "Don't you dare speak to her like that. She is not doing you any harm, right? So just leave her alone."
Sravani looked at Manav shocked, surprised that he would even raise his voice at her. "Manav. Why are you still supporting her. You both are divorced. Do you understand? DIVORCED!" screamed Sravani, enough to draw attention from the entire hospital
A sudden slap on her cheek shut her up, and she looked up to see Savita Aai standing in front of her, fury raging in her eyes. "Bus. Stop it. Sravani go home right now. Here I am worrying about Baba, and you're still worrying about Archana. Go. Just get out now."
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Do tell me how you all like it, and if I should continue. This won't be too long considering I'm not like the CV's who are out to drag the story. And, this will focus solely on the Archana, Sravani and the Deshmukh family. The extra plots with Vershu and Vaishu and Ajit will not be included. I think. (mainly cause i dont pay attention to them anymore, so i have no idea whats going on with their stories 😆 )
So yeah, comment and let me know if you like it :)
This would start kind of yesterday's episode end, but Baba's at the hospital and yeah....
Pavitra Rishta (My Version)
Manav was pacing the hospital floor, back and forth, and back and forth, waiting for the doctor to finish his checkup of Baba and tell them what was happening. Archana sat on one of the chairs, holding Savita Aai, who was sobbing uncontrollably, thinking about what would happen to her husband, the man whom she fought with everyday, but also loved unconditionally.
"Aai. It's ok. Nothing will happen. Baba will be all right" consoled Archana, rubbing her hand on Aai's back, trying to stop her tears.
Sravani sat on the other side of Savita Aai, glaring at Archana, thinking What is she even doing here? She promised she wouldn't come here. Humph. I knew she would never leave me in peace.
"Archana. Get away from here. You have no ties with this family. I'll take care of Aai and Manav and Baba, so you can just leave" said Sravani suddenly, pulling Archana's hand away from Savita Aai's back and pushing it away.
Fury blazed in the always tranquil Manav, as he grasped Sravani's hand tightly. "Don't you dare speak to her like that. She is not doing you any harm, right? So just leave her alone."
Sravani looked at Manav shocked, surprised that he would even raise his voice at her. "Manav. Why are you still supporting her. You both are divorced. Do you understand? DIVORCED!" screamed Sravani, enough to draw attention from the entire hospital
A sudden slap on her cheek shut her up, and she looked up to see Savita Aai standing in front of her, fury raging in her eyes. "Bus. Stop it. Sravani go home right now. Here I am worrying about Baba, and you're still worrying about Archana. Go. Just get out now."
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Do tell me how you all like it, and if I should continue. This won't be too long considering I'm not like the CV's who are out to drag the story. And, this will focus solely on the Archana, Sravani and the Deshmukh family. The extra plots with Vershu and Vaishu and Ajit will not be included. I think. (mainly cause i dont pay attention to them anymore, so i have no idea whats going on with their stories 😆 )
So yeah, comment and let me know if you like it :)
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