One Shot: Maan and Geet on the dancefloor - Page 2

awesome Ash.. u described their feelings beautifully... waiting for more..

wow really beutifully written!!! 😊

awsm, wud u b writin more????

Beautifully written. I love the imagery you have put through out the story =).

Ash!

This was fabulously written! Beautifully described! Loved every bit of it. Written with a mesmering flow of words. Maaneet were adorable!

Hope you come up with something again, soon!

Tia

Nicely written ash..... but somehow i tend to compare it with actual scene.... i found that more interesting.....

Originally posted by: deniac

Nicely written ash..... but somehow i tend to compare it with actual scene.... i found that more interesting.....

well ur dance sequence description is almost like the actual dance.....

sorry after being in den n cristicising episodes...i hv become a bit critical.....

 

but well written.....

No problem darling. BTW wrote this before the actual scene aired....  😆😆😆
Thank you.

hey Ash .... I never read this OS earlier I just got the link from some other FF .... wow it was fantastic 👏..... the description was apt and sensuous at the same time .... I really loved it .🤗... please PM me whenever u write such scenes

thanks in advance
Love

Sweets! This is brilliant and so enticing! Love it!