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Maaneet- A new dimension to the love (Ch 30 Pg.74) (Page 6)

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Posted: 01 July 2010 at 3:18pm | IP Logged
Nice update! So, there's a new twist.......Geet's unresponsiveness......her Goodbye.......his thinking about it........can't wait to read the next part........it sounds damn interesting! Do continue soon!

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Posted: 01 July 2010 at 10:37pm | IP Logged
good one dear
i am glad geet is thinking
do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 02 July 2010 at 4:09am | IP Logged
damn cool
superb
great part
update soon
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Posted: 02 July 2010 at 7:13am | IP Logged
awesome ff
plz add me in to ur pm list
i love ur writting
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Posted: 02 July 2010 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
My Note:

Sorry, people, to disappoint you all, but I won't be able to update the next parts of story....going out of town....

But here's an interesting thing that you can do till then(besides watching Maaneet's hilarious scenesWink)....
Smile

in the next post, is a part of the story that i've been working upon....
It's a bit suspense-filled-romance- (or viceversa).....

Read that part and try figuring out for yourself, what i'm gonna write next.....WinkWinkWink

I know u will njoy doing that bit, plus it'll also give me inputs to write the story.... Smile


i'll  be updating ASAP
I'll miss the forum, and everyone of you.....


BYEEEEETongueTongueTongue




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Posted: 02 July 2010 at 1:23pm | IP Logged


Rains have a tremendous ability to bring about the ever changing emotions of a person into expressions.

 

While Geet was still getting wet in the rain, drenching every bit of her body and soul, feeling the cold water that was lashing against her skin. But the sudden turn of events that had interrupted her life gave her greater pain, breaking every bit of hope, heart and dreams that was left in her.

 

Meanwhile, someone was really happy to see the dark and misty weather. Enjoying the beauty that it had brought to Delhi.

 

In the faraway resort of Delhi, someone had the reason to celebrate. Stretching the hand out from the shaded hut that isolated them from the rest of resort and the world, she felt the cold drops on her skin, took the water into her hands and playfully threw it on him.

 

"Hey, Yaar…What are you doing? You have drenched me. This is not fair." He complained in his husky voice, cleaning his misty spectacles. He went towards her and said,"Take this now".

And splashed water on her face.

 

Immediately both started laughing and splashing water on each other. They both ran here and there and finally he got hold of her. Both smirked. He put his arms around her shoulder and said with love, "thanks Naintara, for helping me out of all this. The way you saved me from all this mess, no one else could. You are simply wonderful, dear. I LOVE YOU, MY WIFE."

 

Giving her honey sweet smile, she said,"hume toh ye sab karna hi tha…aapke liye….kyunki aap sirf Naintara ke Dev hai, sirf humare, aur vo Gee…."

 

But before she could complete her sentence, Dev stopped her midway, "Shhhhh......No, NT, not today, don't spoil your mood today."

"comeon, let's dance, to the music of rain"

 

Both danced and danced for very long and their devilsh laughter echoed in the atmosphere as if screaming out the atrocities that they had imposed on the innocent-small-town-bubbly-girl Geet.

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Posted: 02 July 2010 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
That part was short but sweet......lolz......surprisingly I like Dev and Naintara together.......be it their fights or lovey-dovey scenes........lolz......can't wait to read the next part.......do continue soon!

Have fun!Wink

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nice part...short but nice...

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