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Posted: 30 June 2010 at 8:21am | IP Logged
nice update... Hope they agree for a truce..

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Chapter-6

Geet was dedicated at her work, she was doing the final review of file so that Maan can't give even a single comment after that.

 

Just then wind started blowing out of nowhere blowing Geet's hair over her face and flipping the pages of file. Before Geet could react Maan was enchanted into her beauty, he stepped a little closer to her and took the file out of her hands with which she was struggling to keep the pages straight.

 

Till then she had not noticed Maan in her cabin and was shocked to see him. Before Geet opened her mouth, Maan took his hand forward and placed her blowing locks  behind her left ear. Geet was electrified with his touch and closed her eyes for sometime. Maan was gazing her lovingly, as if she's going to disappear the next moment. Finally he broke the silence and said,


Maan:Geet, enough work for today..Go home now.

Geet opened her eyes breaking from her trance. She replied back

Geet: Sir, the file is complete if you care to have one last look ,my work will be finished.

 

Maan was in no mood to discuss work but for Geet's sake opened up the file and was thrilled by the brilliance of her work. He couldn't manage to speak out something. The project was done very beautifully and he couldn't decide whether to look at the project or Geet and found himself  staring her more than the project itself.

 

He soon broke from his trance and realized why he was here. "Geet, it's quiet late. You should now leave.", Maan said in a hoarse voice that wasn't his exactly and his eyes were away from her all this while, to avoid losing himself again.

 

Geet was a bit confused and then said,"ok, so i hope my resignation is accepted and I shall not come to work tomorrow".

 

Now it was Maan's turn to get confused , he stood frozen there.

 

Without waiting for his reply Geet left the cabin and walked through corridor, when she felt her empty stomach and was about to faint again but controlled herself and held onto the walls tightly. She din't have any strength left in her to walk even an inch further. She felt herself completely drained. It was just the hatred for Khurana family that kept her conscious.

 

Meanwhile, Maan jerked awake from his own stupor and went to the corridor to see her almost fainted.

"Geet", Maan cried out reaching to hold her for support.

Maan: Geet are you okay. I must drop you home. Come, let's go!

 

Maan saw that Geet hadn't budge from her place, he then looked back at her and added as an afterthought,

"Geet, you must get something to eat, you are very weak. Come, rest in the cabin, I'll bring you something to eat."

 

As he said the last words he noticed that he was holding Geet's arm, and she gradually held his hand with her free hand and ungripped his hold. She then looking directly into his eyes said, "No need to worry Mr. Maan Singh Khurana, I am perfectly alright and I can take care of myself"

 

Maan was amused to see sudden change in her behaviour, which got him more worried about her and he held both her arms with his hands, he was just inches apart from Geet, "Geet, try to understand, it's very late and wheather has just worsened. Besides, you haven't had anything today, it's harmful for not just yours but your child's health. Geet, for your child's sake only, eat something and let me drop you home. You need rest, Geet"

 

At this point Geet's expression changed and she placed her hand oh her abdomen so as to feel the life that's breathing in her.

 

It gave her some sort of confidence and she shot back at Maan, "Me n my baby, why are you worried about it? Why are you bothering yourself with my health? Why showing this false concern? What's the relation between you and me-Boss and Secretary...huh....where you give orders and I am forced to follow them meekly? With what right, you are stopping me right now? Your work is complete and that's what you must be concerned about."

 

 

This caused excrutiating pain to Maan not from inside but outside. He loosened his grip on her arms and Geet gathered the courage to move out from it and once again continued walking towards exit.

 

Maan turned his back to her to hide the tear that just escaped from his eyes. He couldn't think of what he was to do now, he was too dumbfounded by what Geet has just said. He felt his inside empty as if he wasn't a living person but a wooden puppet. Just then his mouth said something that even he hadn't imagined,

Heart"Coz I love you Geet"Heart He said loudly.

 

Geet stopped with a jolt at the exit gate. Was she day dreaming or Maan had just said that? She turned herself suddenly to face Maan, who before giving her a chance to react continued, "Coz I was attracted to you the day I saw you, coz I was lost in your beauty, sweetness and innocence, coz you are the one who made me think beyond just business and money, coz I can't see you in pain..."HeartHeart

 

He slowly turned himself and saw Geet near him again lost into his eyes and suddenly she wrapped both her arms around Maan's body and hugged him, as if he would disappear any moment. Maan, unable to control his emotions reciprocated the hug and held her really close to him.

 

Geet's empty stomach now groaned, but she din't need words to say this, Maan had sensed it and said, "Come on Geet, Now you must have something to eat." Saying this he lifted Geet in his arms and took her to his cabin and gently laid her on the sofa. He then gave her the tiffin that his Dadi Maa had given him saying that he doesn't eat properly. He remembered about his Dadi and then opened the tiffin to let her eat to her fill.

 

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Maaneet today shared wonderful moments together. It was in those moments they realized how much important one is for the other. Their love was pure and genuine to the fact that Geet no longer held him responsible for his brother's deeds and Maan as such din't care about her past.


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But there was more to the truth then Maaneet had ever imagined. After surviving one major upheaval in their life, will they be able to sail through the toughest of weathers still awaiting them, and end up being together.

 

 

 



Edited by JhankaaR000 - 11 July 2010 at 5:16am

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Well, this was my take on the story.

Hope, you guys liked it.

I was overwhelmed with your responses.

I never thought about writing and I ended up doing the same.WinkWinkWink

Thanx, it was  because of your responses that gave me the encouragement.

Right now, I rely on your responses.

From the last part of the story, their love is again going to transform into a kaleidoscope of different emotions each

Arising from the other and still completely different.

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Before working on this part of story, I wish to take consent from all of

You (MaanEet fans).

Do give me the enthusiasm to write further.

I assure you, I would work harder for next part but it all depends on your

views, perspective, comments and replies.

 

What do you guys say,

"Should I continue with the story?"

Or you think it's a very lame story and I'll be better off doing something else.

Nevertheless I will enjoy reading already posted FF's!!

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You people are genuinely creative....HATS OFF TO ALL

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Earnestly waiting for your feedback and responses!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 30 June 2010 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
wao  too good itne jhatke  aik sath

1. maan confess his love for geet
2. maneet hug
3. maan lift geet in his arms
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Posted: 30 June 2010 at 1:53pm | IP Logged
Wow! That was fabulous! The confession, the hug, the lifting part......loved every bit of it! Finally, Maneet are together......great! Please continue writing this FF......it's really too good.......would love to see what turn their life will take next......and how they sail through the storms holding onto each other......Wink.....am looking forward to reading the next part soon.

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Posted: 30 June 2010 at 4:24pm | IP Logged
wow!! that was great!!! the confession!!!aaah Day Dreaming i had tears in my eyes!!! its really very good!!! plz do continue!!! i love reading it!!!

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amazing work!!!

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@ JhankaaR000 .great update yaar.....maan confessing his love nd geets hug.......
gr8 work .keep it up.
pls pm me abt d next update

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