Good going story, take ur time fully to reunite Maaneet as even seperation have it's own taste, the way couples got crushed in these situation makes it real, i dont have any objectin with maan ..what ever he is doing is according to his condition....it's obvious he will favour his brother rather than Geet mostly after resignation & lost cheak...."a new dimention to love" was my 1st FF ever to read....ur story description is just awasome
Keep it up...meanwill i was wondering where ur story got disappeared
My humble request, when ever u write ur story paste it in small parts continously like paste one para later edit in it....this will make ur FF active for long time & more of us would be able to read it....as u also would be knowing dat Geet forum is most active forum so it takes 2-3 hours to send back a post on 4or5 page & i mosty scearch upto 2nd page only......This time also i was finding out some post so got to know dat u have updated it
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