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Posted: 26 June 2010 at 1:41am | IP Logged
heyyyyyy hazra
really nice concept
do continue soon
n thanx for pm

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Posted: 26 June 2010 at 1:07pm | IP Logged
so cute concept
thanks for the pm
cont soon

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Awesome CS countinue soon and add me to your PM list pls


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Posted: 27 June 2010 at 10:15am | IP Logged

hi guys..updated 1st part of my new ff milenge milenge..i hope u like it..dont forget to comment..read n njoy..

so this story wil start from their childhood days...8 january 2009(monday)..at mayank's home...they r not very rich people..
m-chalo gunjan..bohot der ho gayi hai..hame school jaana hai...
g-bhaiya...mai to ready hu..chaliye..Smile
m-gunjan..teri wajah se mai hamesha late ho jaata hu aur fir vo nupur mujhe chidhane lagti hai..
g-aree bhaiya..ab chaliye na..baadme daat lena...
m-chal..
mm-beta..tum dono sambhal kar jaana...
g-maa..bhaiya hai na mere sath..ap zaada tension mat lo maa..Smile
m-ab chale gunjan..
g-ha bhaiya chaliye..Smile
gunjan and mayank go by walking to school as it is not so far...other side..at samrat's house..they r very rich..house of bhusan family..nupur is sleeping..samrat went to nupur's room..
s-didi..uthiye na..kitna soyegi ap..
n-chal jaa yaha se..sone de mujhe..Sleepy
s-par didi..
n-chal jaa yaha se..Sleepy
s-ab mujhe mamma ko hi bulana padega apko uthane ke liye..apki wajah se mai bhi late ho jata hu..
samrat went in kitchen..
s-mamma..didi to uth hi nahi rahi hai...di ko uthaye na..varna mujhe der ho jaegi..mai to ready bhi hu..Unhappy
sm-ye nupur na..chal..
they both went in nupur's room..her mom went to her..
sm-chalo nupur beta..utho...
n-mamma thodi der...Sleepy
sm-tumhari thodi der kabhi khatam nahi hogi..chalo utho abhi..common fast nupur...
s-didi..agar ap school jaldi nahi pohchogi to mayank apko chidhane lagega fir to ap...Smile(he is teasing nupur so that she wake up)
nupur suddenly woke up...
n-vo kya mujhe chaidaega...mai abhi taiyar hoti hu..Angry
she went in washroom..
sm-samrat..ye mayank to vahi haina jiske sath nupur hamesha jagda karti hai??
s-ha mamma..vaise hamesha galti didi ki hi hoti hai..vo bechara mayank to...
then samrat saw nupur..she was giving an angry look to samrat..
s-didi ap..
n-tujhe mai nahi chodugi...bechara mayank..AngryAngry
samrat started to run and nupur was running after him to catch him...
n-ruk ja..mai tujhe nahi chodugi..bohot daya aa rahi hai tujhe mayank par...Angry
then samrat fell down..
s-ouch..oou..
she went to him...
n-samrat..samrat tu thick to haina...tu bhi na..bilkul pagal hai..mai tujhe maar thodi dalugi..bohot dard ho raha hai kya..Unhappy(she got tensed)
s to himself-didi to kitni pareshan ho gayi..lagta hai vo sach samaj gayi..ab mazaa ayegi..Smile
he started to overreact..
s-bohot dard ho raha hai didi..Unhappy
n-kya..tu...chal mere sath..Unhappy
s-didi..ek baat bolu..Unhappy
n-kya??
s-mai to...mai to mazak kar raha tha...hehehe..Smile
and he started to run again..
s-ap to bevkuf ban gayi didi...Smile
n-of ho..tu kitna pagal hai...bilkul buddhu hai tu..Unhappy
s-buddhu to ap ho..maine apko bevkuf bana diya...Smile
sm-ab tum dono jagda ho karte rahoge..
n-mamma ye..Angry
sm-bas nupur..ab jao aur jaldi se ready ho jao..
nupur went in her room..after sometime..mayank and gunjan reach school...
m-gunjan..mai apni class mai jaa raha hu..tu bhi apni class mai jaa..
g-thick hai bhaiya..Smile
mayank and gunjan went in their own class...mayank entered the class..
m to himself-acha hua vo nupur nahi ayi hai..varna fir se jagdaa shuru kar deti..
he sits on his bench..then teacher came..all stood up to wish her good morning...
t-good morning students..sit down..
all sit down..then she started to take attendence...
t-where is nupur??
student-teacher...vo abhi tak ayi nahi hai..
t-this girl wil never improve..everytime late..Angry
then after sometime..at samrat's house..nupur got ready..
s-ab to chaliye didi...apki wajah se mai bhi late ho jata hu..Unhappy
n-to chal na idiot..
samrat was giving an angry look to nupur..
n-ab itna gusse se mat dekh..chup chap chal..Angry
they both went outside and sits in car..
n-chalo driver aur ha jaldi gaadi chalana..ham vaise bhi late ho gaye hai..
dr-thick hai nupur beta..
they reached school..nupur went in her class..
n-may i come in teacher...
t-time kya hua hai nupur...
n-teacher i m sorry..vo raaste mai na traffic bohot thi..Unhappy
t-i dont want any reason...ab bohot ho gaya..i wil not allow u to enter the class..u may leave..Angry
n-teacher..agli baar pakka mai jaldi aaogi..Unhappy
t-no...ab mai tumhe chance nahi dugi...now u leave from here..
n-par teacher..Unhappy
nupur saw mayank..mayank was smiling inside..
n to herself-has le bachu..tujhe to mai baadme dekh lugi..Angry
hey guys..here ends my 1st part..i m very nervous..i dont know u wil like or not...pls guys..need ur comments..love u all..
hazra


Edited by hazraluvsalman - 16 October 2011 at 11:29am

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Posted: 27 June 2010 at 12:38pm | IP Logged

yeh spamming bhi na

main reserve nahi kar payi
 
koi baat nahi direct comment deti hoon
 
this update was amazing
 
i really love your ff
 
 
sanu and majan were so cute
 
update soon
 
luv mahima
 
p.s- hope in this ff mayank falls for nupur first, unlike your other ffs, anyways vice-versa will also be amazing

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Posted: 27 June 2010 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
wow
truly amazing part
i just loved it
awesome
thanks for the pm

love
pooja

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amazing part

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