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Sinister Love (AR ff) Part 5 pg 59

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Posted: 23 June 2010 at 7:06am | IP Logged
hi am saniya. i guess u know that by nowLOL guys this is a thriller ff and i am writing thriller for the first time, so plz give honest comments if you like the concept or not. or whether you liked my writing style in thriller genre or not?

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sinister hmm. such a big word, not in letters but it's impact. what is the
first thing that comes to your mind when you think of that word-sinister? evil, threathning harm, disastrous, misfortune, dark...

even in my life that word holds a big meaning and the ONLY thing comes in my mind when i think of that word is ARMAAN...- A powerful mafia don who played mercilessly with my life and what i did in return, took revenge but what i didn't knew was that sometimes revenge backfires...

Playing with fire means inviting your own death and messing with THE armaan mallik meant the same...

But i played with fire and what i ended up falling into? A SINISTER LOVE. A love filled with sins, revenge, passion and pain...

A story of a guy who live in the world of sins and girl whose innocence reflected her personality but will she stay innocent after getting the biggest shock and betrayal of her life?

part 1

"Di what are you doing in store room alone?" riddhima asked anjali who looked at her nervously with beads of sweat on her forehead.

"n..nothing a..am nn..not doing an..anything" anjali s**ttered which made riddhima suspicious. she looked at anjali carefully from head to toe and was horrified to see her messy hair, eye liner smudged around underneath her blood shot eyes, watery nose, body drenching in perspiration and anjali was slightly shivering. her condition looked awful. riddhima got extremely worried looking at her big sister in this condition.

"DI KYA HUA? a..aap ki yeh haalat kaise hui?" riddhima shouted while shaking anjali. suddenly her eyes fell on anjali's hand which were at the back trying to hide something. riddhima quickly brought anjali's both arms at the front and she took a gulp of horror seeing the object in her big sister's palm.

"c..cocaine? HAWW" riddhima gasped as realisation dawned upon her. her sister is on drugs.

"sshhh ridzy plz don't say this anyone. promise i'll leave all this. but plz don't tell dad" anjali begged riddhima as tears were oozing out from her eyes.

"DI HAVE LOST IT? WHAT THE HECK ARE YOU SAYING, FORGET THAT WHAT HELL ARE YOU DOING? YOU'RE ON DRUGS? OH MY GOD!" riddhima shouted shaking anjali from her shoulder. riddhima took a few steps back and back touched the wall.

"no no no my sister can't do this. plz di tell me this all just a prank and JUST SAY SOMFING DAMN IT" riddhima banged her fist on the wall and just slided down. anjali was too scared and shocked to say anything as her dirty secret came out in front of her sister, so she just kept mum and cried silently. suddenly something clicked riddhima and she abrubtly stood up and went to anjali.

"how did you manage to go on drugs? you weren't like this before, then what was the need to take this poison? and who supplied you this? I WILL KILL THAT PERSON" riddhima screamed with anger. riddhima was utterly dismayed to learn that her only sister whom she adored and loved the most in the world after her mum's death is taking drugs and destroying her life.

"WHO. SUPPLIED. YOU. WITH. THESE. DRUGS?" riddhima again asked but with a glassy face and emphasized on each word. anjali saw fire and rage in her little sisters eyes which caused her voice to choke.

"a..ar..armaan..." anjali whispered as her voice broke.

"I WILL KILL THAT BAS*ARD"

lalala soooooooooo surprised and thinking sani has gone mad. abhi tak two ffs chal rahe hai and she is starting another one.LOL

don't worry, now i have vacations so i will be able to update. hehe. to be honest i am writting thriller for the first time, so if you don't like it just say it kk. trust me i need honest comments. and yes if you like the part then don't forget to press the like button

and ya agar comment nahi kiya then mein tumhara khun pi jaungiLOL
love

sani

INDEX
Intro- upar nahi dikh raha anparsLOL
part 1- uff vo bhi upar hi haiLOL
part 2- pg 13
part 3- pg 30
Part 4- pg 47
Part 5- pg 59


Edited by Sani_Rani - 28 January 2011 at 2:29pm

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Posted: 23 June 2010 at 7:22am | IP Logged

what 13 views and no comments.

is it that crap?ErmmLOL

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Posted: 23 June 2010 at 7:26am | IP Logged
this is ff sounds really interesting.. Love the title..... please do add me on me on to you pm list.. thanks- misha
P.S. - update soon

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Posted: 23 June 2010 at 7:28am | IP Logged
Haila!!!
Armaan supplying drugs?
N yes its true!
Messing with Armaan is like inviting your death LOL
Cool start!
Update everything soon LOL
Thanks for the PM
Love,
Zor ka jhatka zor se dene waali Ashu ROFL

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Posted: 23 June 2010 at 7:30am | IP Logged
great start
anjali on drugs ???
interesting
do update super fast

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Posted: 23 June 2010 at 7:35am | IP Logged
guys IF par confusing titles ke liye to mein pehle se hi famous huLOL

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Posted: 23 June 2010 at 7:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sani_Rani

lalala soooooooooo surprised and thinking sani has gone mad. abhi tak two ffs chal rahe hai and she is starting another one.LOL - I AM ACTUALLY thinking That !! Dead Dare u don update :P

don't worry, now i have vacations so i will be able to update.  - Hmmm I see..gud then..u shud not gimme mauka to complain :PLOLhehe. to be honest i am writting thriller for the first time, so if you don't like it just say it kk. trust me i need honest comments. and yes if you like the part then don't forget to press the like button

and ya agar comment nahi kiya then mein tumhara khun pi jaungiLOL - Ha Ha very funny as if pehle se nahi pee rai :P
love

sani

Ok SOOOOOOoo I  was gna eat u up for starting another FF..BUT !! Since its a Thriller I forgivge u :P

And Besides i like this story..it the first time we are reading Drug addict stuff and Don Mafia stuff
I have read Conning stuff..but this seems Guddy Gud !!

So Pleaseeee Update Sooonn <3

Love you and missed you
VaishuBig smile

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Posted: 23 June 2010 at 7:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sani_Rani

guys IF par confusing titles ke liye to mein pehle se hi famous huLOL

chal ab jaldi doosre FFs update kar........
Aur haan I meant Jaldi matlab jaldi!!!!!!

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