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Posted: 23 June 2010 at 12:37am | IP Logged
Very well written........keep it up....

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Posted: 23 June 2010 at 1:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by visrom

Daya: Haan Freddy... hum dono kitchen mein the, sabke liye soup bana rahe the


The thought of Daya and Vivek making soup for everyone is so funny LOL... but yeah, really nice story visrom and everyone else who contributed did a great job too Thumbs Up


Edited by zerry123 - 23 June 2010 at 2:37am

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Posted: 23 June 2010 at 1:56pm | IP Logged

Hey Jiya, where is the ending part of your story? You should add the idea of making Yamini ghost and fall in love with Vivek.
I am waiting for your story.

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Posted: 10 July 2010 at 2:17am | IP Logged

Nice. I had missed this one earlier. Freddie Sir ka bhi jawab nahin. I love the last lineLOL. Such easy simple narration, I enjoyed it.



Edited by prabha. - 10 July 2010 at 2:17am

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Posted: 12 July 2010 at 9:57am | IP Logged
Was reading the stories all over again Smile Really! Writers here are even gud at horror stuff!! Actually horror features these days really suck! d olden golden are really gud... Btw very strange! I dreamt I was a ghost haunting some people! And it a funny, feel-gud dream, not d usual gory stuff but a cute one LOL No Offense!

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Posted: 22 September 2010 at 9:52am | IP Logged
nice story visrom

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Posted: 22 September 2010 at 10:02am | IP Logged
Yeh thread achanak kahan se aa gaya???LOL
 
I enjoyed writing this one, really. Big smile

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Posted: 22 September 2010 at 10:05am | IP Logged
CID_Aahat = Chiller & Thriller ........

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