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Chiinnu

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Posted: 22 June 2010 at 5:58am | IP Logged
sorry abt my hindi
visrom y r u so late in posting it? i was expecting


suddenly the dead man appears infront of them. daya , abhi ,vivek and fredy in shock. aahat trio tries to get an image through camera ,but darkness only......
vivek: ye kya hein?
the zombi came near to them and touches abhijits neck.....daya and fredy tries to block him but they cant. a hathapayi between trio takes place.....
suddenly sachin appears
sachin:me aagaya
aahat members seems more terified
vivek: koi bat nahi yamuna. main hoon na
sachin shots the zombie.
1.....2......3
but zombie turns back and catches sachin.....
fredy : bhago ye to wo lash hain.....aatma hain
daya: is bar muje bhi aisa lagta hain
abhi tries to say some thing but cant tell any thing because of throat congession. aahat people put the camera in and escapes from there.
sachin cries for help
bachao.....bachao.....ye aatma muje.......
the zombie smiles at sachin...and slowly move towards his neck. the zombie oozes blood from him.

abhi , daya and fredy comes out side. they look each other
fredi: me ne kehliya na . aatma such me hain
abhi: freddie wo aatma nahin, insan dha....aatma kisi ka gardan kaise pakat sakte ?
daya: vo aatma ho ya na ho, hame use pakatna  hein...chalo



Edited by chinnu_manikyam - 22 June 2010 at 7:15am

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i will write next scene..

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Fredy: sir..Sachin aur vivek shayad andar hi raha gaye

Abhi: kya?..chalo unhe leke aate hein..
Daya: ha boss?\
Fredy: chaliye sir?
Daya: anhi fredy aatma se dar nahi lagata tumhe?
Fredy: sir...vivek aur sachin ki jaan khatare mein hein..muze kuch bhi ho jaye...lekin un dono ko bachana hoga? us aatama ki to mein aisi ki taisi kar dunga chaliye..
(daya thoda rukar...smile)
Daya: fredy..tu..na...chalo boss
(tino andar jaate  hi lagate hein tab vaha sachin aur Vivek bhagate aahe hein...sachn bahut ghayal hein)
Abhi: Tum dono thik to ho?
Vivek aur sachin: Ha sir
Daya: ye kya laga hein tumhari shirt par?...ghas aur mitti?
Vivek: wo zombi ne jab hamara gala pakada tha tab meine dekha tha usake uper bhi aisi hi mitti aur ghas tha...abhijeet sir aapake shirt pe bhi aisi hi ghas hein..
ABhi: ye mitti yahi ki lagati hein...lekin ghas yaha ghas kaha hein?
Vivek: sir es ghar ke pichese jungle shuru hota hein lagata hein ki esi jungle se hi ye ghas aayi hogi
Daya: to der kyo karate ho,..chalo boss hum jakar dekhate hein
(Tab vaha Yamini,Harsh aur Raghava vaha aate hein)
 

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Posted: 22 June 2010 at 7:13am | IP Logged
abhijit phone mein: ha sir ham doond rahe hein, kuch mila nahim
daya: abhijit
suddenly a bat flews away from their side and in the darkness abhijit and daya fell bown
abhi: daya tum teek ho
daya: ha, vo ek bat thi
abhi(whispers): tume kya lagta hein? ye log sach bhol raha he to?
daya: pata nahi....kya kya ho raha hein, ye bahut taryanak case hein mere poore carrier me


Edited by chinnu_manikyam - 22 June 2010 at 7:45am

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Posted: 22 June 2010 at 7:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chinnu_manikyam

abhijit phone mein: ha doctor tharika......me hum abhi.....aap ghana ghaya? aaj kya thi?
daya: boss , agar tum kona kona nahim dekh liya to aatma tume khalunga
abhi: koi baat nahim dr. tharika......kya kaha aapne......kuch nahi yaham......aatma? wo bus mazak......

I will write next.

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Abhi: Tum tino yaha...firse....chale jao yaha se...kyo aaye hamare piche piche..
Yamini: Sir please ..ha,ari baat to sunie...ye eak aatama hein..
Abhi: bas karo..bahut ho gaya...tum hame pagal samjhate ho kya....etane padhe likhe dikhate ho...lekin aatma bhoot pe vishwas rakhate hon..hannn!
Harsh: lekin..sir
Daya: samjhe nahi ab tak...hame aatama aur bhooto par vishwas nahi hein...please tum log jao..
(harsh fredy ke tarf dekhakar)
Harsh: Sir..aap to hamari baat samjhiye...hum sach kehe rahe hein..hmara vishwas kar kariye.
Fredy: sir..science bhi kaheti hein..ki duniya mein aisi chize hein jisaka science ke pass koi explaination nahi hein...shayd ye sach kahate hoge?
Daya: Fredy tum bhi enke ha mein ha miane lage..hum CID officers hein ..hum kisis aatma vatama par vishwas nahi sakate.
Yamini: sir aap hum par chahe vishwas na rakhe..par hum tino aapa sabko chodake jayenge nahi..
Raghav: ha sir...aap apana kam karenge...hum apana kaam karenge..
Daya(to abhi):boss ye log aise manane vaale nahi hein..chhod enhe aur dekho  jo ghas tumhare aur sachin ke shirt pe thi wo yaha kaha se aai hein kya?
abhi: yes boss..(sab edhar udhar dhundhane lagte hein..unke saath Yamini,Raghav aur Harsh bhi hein)
 

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Posted: 22 June 2010 at 7:33am | IP Logged
Achanak Dr. tarika kahanse aa gayi beech mein? unka toh is case se koi sambandh nehi hai!Confused

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Posted: 22 June 2010 at 7:34am | IP Logged
inside , it was dark and cold like a lions cave.............
they can hear the disturbing sounds and loud roars
suddenly
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harsh: ouch....
daya: kya hua
harsh: ye darwaza....ye ek sadaran darwaza nahim....ye is aatma logom ka duniya hein
abhi: sab bakwas hein
yamini:darwaza mat todiye, its too dangerous
abhi: daya darwaza totdo
yamini:darwaza mat todiye, daya .....mere bat suno
abhi: daya darwaza totdo
yamini: no
abhi:yes



yamini: no
abhi:yes



daya:ek minute ,ek minute

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