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Posted: 22 June 2010 at 12:17am | IP Logged

This side They enter.

Abhijeet (to Daya): Daya ye kaun hai.

Daya: inki gadi kharab hogayi. Bas rata yahan bitane aye hai.

While 3 of them crossing from main hall Suddenly Abhijeet notices.

Abhijeet: ruko. Tumne is lash ko hath lagay.

Harsh: nahi sir.

Abhijeet: ye lash apni jagah se kaise hili.  (shows the sign they made with white line. Yet they have to pick that body and body is not at exactly same place)

Freddy: kya. Lash apne aap udh ke chali.

Yamini: nahi sir humne kuch nahi kiya. hum to bas us taraf.

Daya: us taraf kya. Kya hai wahan.

Raghav: kuch nahi. Humme laga us kamre mein saman rakh te hai. Aur sir yahan jane ka rasta hall se hi hai.

Suddenly light  comes and Freddy sees knife in Bag of Harash. And light goes again.

Freddy: sir chaku is ke pas hai.

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Posted: 22 June 2010 at 12:28am | IP Logged
Harsh- mere pass mere pass kaha hain?
Freddy:- isse kehte hain chor ki darhi main tinka maine ton itna he kaha tha ke chor uske pass hain? tum kyo bole? chalo apna bag dekhao?
Abhi:- arrey waah freddy ajj yaha ACP sir nahi hain ton serious hogye hain?
freddy:- voh chodo ins. abhijeet iska bag check karo?
Daya:- tumne abhijeet ko naam se bulayea freddy??
Abhi:- vivek tum iss ladhke ke bag ki talashi lo, main freddy se baat karta ho tab tak?
Freddy:- ruko vivek..iski talashi mat lo ..jane do in logo ko yah ase..bhaga do inko
Harsh:- 1 min abhijeet Sir app meri baat sunege?
Harsh:- mujhe lagta hain ke appke officer main attma agayi hain
Abhi:- abhi kya????? bakwas kar rahe ho ..attma vattma kuch nahi hota..freddy ko ton adat hain mazak karne ki..
Raghav:- kya appka yeh officer attmayo ki batein karta hain or un se darta hain?? kyonki attmaye ussi ko apna nishana banati hain jise unke liye dara pana assan ho..
Daya:- 1 min 1 min tum log itna kaise jante ho? aur yeh kya bakki ja rahe ho?

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Posted: 22 June 2010 at 12:37am | IP Logged
Abhjeet: kya esake bag mein chau? kaha hein ye tumhari bag dikhana to jara?
(harsh apani bag dikhata hein lekin vajha se chaku gaab hota hein)
Fredy kaha hein chaku..hannn...? lagata hein fir se pina shuru kar diya hein? jao aur wo chaku dhundo? aur vivek kaha hein..tm ko meine chaku dhundhaneko kaha tha na?
Fredy:ha sir vahi...uper aur eak lash hein....vivek vaha hi khada hein us lash ke pas.
Daya: kya aur eak lash...dikhao kaha hein?
abhi: ha chalo dikhao...
fredy: chalye sir..vaha uper
(sab vaha chale jate hein...unake saath Yamini ,Raghav aur harsh chalane lagate hein)
he aap log kaha chal rahe hein?
Yamini: nahi wo sir
Abhi: kya sir...tum sab yaha ruko..hm upr jake aate hein..aur ha fir se es lash ko haath mat lagana.
Yamini: ok..sir.
(fredy,daya aur abhi vaha se chale jaate hein)
harsh hame enako batana hoga..ki enki jaan khatre mein hein..
Harsh: nahi Yamini abhi nahi...wo hamp pe vishwas nahi karenge...wo CID vale hein.
Raghav: ha yamini...Harsh thik kahe raha hein...hame mauka dekhakar hi unase baat karani chahiye.
(Fredy ,Abhi aur Daya uper ke kamare mein aate hein...lekin vaha vivek aur lash gayab hein)
Daya: Fred..kaha hein lash?
Fredy: sir yaha hi thi?
Abhi: Aur Vivek kaha gya?
Fredy: yaha hi mein use chodkar chala gaya tha?
Abhi: Tum bola rahe hon lash aur vivek dono yaha the...to ab kaha gaye..hannn? fredy tu hos hosh mein to ho?
Fredy: sir mein sach kaheta hun lasha uar vivek dono yaha the....mein unko yha hi chod gaya tha? pata nahi gayab kaise ho gaye dono?
Daya: thik hein dhundo dono ko aaju baaju mein.
 
(sab ethar ushar dhundhane lagate hein)

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Posted: 22 June 2010 at 12:40am | IP Logged
Ok, everyone...when I am free, I'll read all your posts and pick out bits from everyone and post my full story...i need your help becase I have 0 knowledge about Aahat.
Pls continue....

Edited by visrom - 22 June 2010 at 12:41am
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Posted: 22 June 2010 at 12:40am | IP Logged
Really good going!!!! i actually made a nice long continuation from d first post but d entire thing got deleted!!! But wow yaar, visrom, jiya, sunny, bhinder- u r better writers than d aahat writers!!!
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Posted: 22 June 2010 at 12:47am | IP Logged
bhinder.kamboj  u continue next scene
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Posted: 22 June 2010 at 12:54am | IP Logged
p.n.:
plz yaha story mein confusion na ho esliye aap pahel scene padhiye ar aage ki story start ki jiye...aur advance mein bolie who will write next sceneSmile
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Posted: 22 June 2010 at 12:55am | IP Logged
It think we have overlap here. Its nice visrom you take bits from here and complete story.

 For other writers it will be nice if person writing could just post. I am writing when complete delete this line and post your own story over there. SO that every other member could know this person is writing and wait till he writes and then next who want to write put up same line I am writing and deletes this line and write story. This way less chances of overlap


Edited by sunnyp1414 - 22 June 2010 at 12:58am

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