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Posted: 13 years ago

nain zor zor se rone laagte haai raj ko naina ko aase rote hue dekh ke pata nahin kun bohot bura laagta haai woh naina ke pass jaata haai aur aapna haath naina khandhe par rakhne he baala hota haai ke tabhie koi darwaja par knock karta haai knock ke awaz sunke raj aapna haatrh picche kar leeta haai aur jaake darwaja kholta haai raj dekhta dawajae par ek bell boy haath mein ek tray leekar khara haai raj toh yeh dekh kar haairan hoke bell boy se pucchta haai"yeh sab kya hai mainne toh koi order nahin kiya tha"raj ke baat sunke bell boy raj se kaheta haai"jee sahab woh manager sahab ne khud he aap aur aapke patni ke liye yeh bej diye haai aur kaha haai agar aap logo aur chaheye hoga toh baata dena "bell boy ke muh se "patni"shabd sunke raj ek dam shocked ho jaata haai par phir samajh jaata haai ke woh log sayed naina ko uske patni samajh rahe haai isliye aur kuch bolke bell boy ko kamre ke ander ane deta haai bell boy kamre ke ander aata haai aur khanne ka tray table par rakhe chala jaata haai bell boy ke jaane bad  raj ke mann mein bar bar bell boy ke kahe hue "patni"shabd guj ne laagta haai usse samajh mein nahin aata haai ke jo woh soch raha kya woh sahi haai kya usse aapne problem ke liye kissi aur se itne baare help maagna sahi hoga raj se aur sehe nahin hota woh ab tai kar ta haai chehe kuch bhi he should try once so baare he heemat leekar raj naina se kaheta haai"naina agar main tumse kuch kahuga toh kya tum maanoge"

 
 
 
naina raj ke taraf haairani se dekhte hue kaheta haai"kya?"
 
 
 
 
 
raj-naina main jaanta hu ke yeh sunke bad tumhe bohot ajeeb laagega lekin kya tum kuch dino ke liye mere patni banoge ?
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
raj ke muh se yeh baat sunke naina ek dam shocked ho jaate "yeh yeh aap kya bol rahe haai aap jaante haai ke mere shaadi ho chuke haai aur phir bhi aapne chee aasa socha bhi kaise sakte haai aapne mujhe mujhe aapke saath yahaan ek pal bhi nahin rukhna haai main jaa rahe hu(naina aapne beti ko leekar jaane baale hote haai when raj says"tum jaana chahate ho naa toh sok se jaao lekin usse pahele zara yeh soch lo ke kya tum akele un gundo se aapne beti ko baccha sakte ho kunki bar bar main nahin aayunga tumhe aur tumhare beti ko bacchane ke liye raj ke yeh baat sunke naina rukh jaate haai aur raj ke taraf dekh ke kahete haai"boliye hume kya karna hoga?"
 
 
 
 
 
 
raj-tumhe  mere patni banne ka natak karna hoga mere ghar mein
 
 
 
 
 
naina-par
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
raj-naina mujhe pata haai ke tumhe bohot ajeeb laag raha haai sab kuch sunke tumhare mann mein bohot saree sawaal bhji utth rahe haai honge main tum sab baatauga
 
 

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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice ff
Raj ne Naina ko gundo se bachaya aur Raj aur Naina ki mulakat ho gayee........πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Naina is married and she has a daughter😲😲😲
Aur uske sasural walen usko marna chahte hai property ke liye but where is her husband?πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•
Raj ne Naina ko apni patni banne ka natak karne ko kyon kaha? Ye kuch samaj main nahi aaya.........
Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hiiiiii dear

awesome update
Raj ne Naina se uski patni banne ko kaha aur woh ready bhi ho gayi par Raj ne aisa kyun kaha?????????????
do cont soon

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Naina
Edited by Kool_Naina - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Raj naina ko apni patni hone ka natak karne ko kaha. Naina yeh baat sun kar hairan ho jati hai aur pehle toh aisa karne ke liye mana kar deti hai. Par phir who maan jati hai.
Par Raj ne naina ko aisa kyun kaha?
please continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

nice ud

raj ne naina ko us ki wife ban ne ka natak karne k liye kyoun kaha...???

cont soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Naina starts crying and Raj feels bad to see her cry like this!!!!!😭 πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­

Raj Naina ke kandhe par haath rakhne hi waala tha ke darwaze par koi knock karte hai!!!!   

The manager had thought Naina to be Raj's wife and this sets Raj thinking!!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”

Raj asked Naina to be his wife for a few days!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š

Naina is shocked to hear this!!!!!!😲 πŸ˜² πŸ˜² πŸ˜² πŸ˜²

She doesn't want to stay there and prepares to go away with her daughter!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

But she stopped when Raj reminded her about the goons!!!!!😳 πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³

Naina agreed to pretend to be Raj's wife!!!!!!    πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š

But why did Raj ask Naina to pretend to be his wife??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Raj said he will tell her the reason for all this!!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š


 

Edited by Shaina_b - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
great parts dear
raj naina se pucha aur wo mangaye
kya baat hai
waiting for th eupdate
cont soonnnnnnn
tc
ammu
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Posted: 13 years ago
Heyy Ria, i am soo sorry i disappoint u each time....but really Ria i am very busy nowadays....i am hardly following any fic rite now....pardon me but really its not in my hand....
 
Nevertheless, The fic is getting really interesting and full of suspense....Naina ka husband kaun hai????....and how can he just let his wife and daughter die......hey, aisa toh nahi hai that Naina is a widow????....that will be painful.....b/w rite now i think i have missed something....tell me is their a baby girl wid naina too while she was running???
 
And then something abt Raj is also fishy??? he is asking a married woman wid a daughter to act as his wife.....and that too its just their first meet.....!!!....there must be something really troubling for which he is doing sooo.....
 
Anyways continue soon....and thanx alot for the PM....
Love,
Rajita... 
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Ria........How r u?
I am very sorry for the late comment but I didnt notice the update.
The update  was awesome....but y raj said naina to be his wife?????
Please update soon.
Luv Preet.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice, lovely update.
continue soon.