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ronojoy_ria

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Posted: 18 June 2010 at 7:03am | IP Logged

"uff aaj pata nahin mere saath he aasa kun ho raha haai pahele subhe subhe dadi ke phone aa gaye ke raj jaldi ghar wapis aa jaao aur ab yeh naaye musibat is car ko bhi kya abhie kharab hona tha is jungle mein mujhe ab talav ya well kaha se milega ohhhhh goddddddd plzzzzzzz helpppppppp meeeeeeeeeeee "par bhaagwan ko sayed raj yani MR RAJ SHEKHAWAT ke prayer pe koi daya nahin aaye isliye toh unhone raj ke liye ek aur musibat ko bej de "raj aapne car se utthar ke jab talav ya well dhundhne nikalta haai tab pata nahin kaha se ek larki aapne haao mein ek chotte se bacche ko lekar bhaagte hue uske pass aate haai aur usse kahene laagte haai"plz hume baccha lijiye mere picche gundde paare haai "raj toh is larki ke baat sunke ek dam haaira ho jaata hai kunki pahele se woh do do musibat mein phassa hua tha upar se ab yeh naye musibat raj baare he rudely us larki ko kaheta haai"dekho main koi amitabh bacchan ya salman khan nahin hu jo tumhe guddu se bacchaunga tum kisi aur se madad maago waise bhi subhe se mere sarr pe musibat aa paare haai "larki raj ke baat sun ke waha se chali jaate haai raj ko us larki ko yun jaate hue dekh ke sach mein bohot bura laagta haai raj aapne mann mein sochta haai"raj yeh tune kya kiya ek toh yeh ghane jungle upar se woh larki haai kaise samal paayege aapne aapko tujhe uske madad zarur karene chaheye the tu aase kaise kisi larki ko akele chor sakte haai u should help her"raj us larki ko rokne ke liye us larki picche jaata haai raj dekhte kuch gudde us larki ko tang kar rahe the aur woh larki aapne aap ko churane ke koshsh kar rahe the raj se aur raha nahin gaya he just goes and jumps upon then goons aur raj ke beech ek aacche khasse fight suru ho jaate haai at last goons bhaag jaate haai raj dekhta haai larki darr ke maare ek tree ke picche chupe hue haai raj larki ke pass jaata haai aur kaheta haai"darro mat woh log chale gaye haai aao mere saath "

larki haairan se pucchte haai"kaha"

raj-dekho mere car kharab ho gaye haai toh aaj hume yahaan he kisi cottage mein rukhna hoga

larki raj ke baat sunke ghabra jaate haai aur raj se kahete haai"nahin hume aapke saath kahin nahin jaana "raj ab larki ke yeh baat sunke ek dam se gussa ho jaata haai aur larki se kaheta haai"what what do u think of urself mainne tumhare liye itne baare musibat gaale laagai aur tum hoke mujh par he shak kar rahe uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu raj starts waliking from there raj ko ase jaate hue dekh ke larki ko ab bohot bura laagta haai ke jisne uske madad ke usne usse ke uper shak kiya usse aasa nahin karna chaheye the she should apolize for her behaviour

larki ab raj ke pass jake khare ho jaate haai aur use kahete haai"mujhe maaff kar dijiye"raj larki ke innocense dekh ke muska deta haai

larki-sukriya aapne hume maff kiya pata nahin hume kya hogaya tha hum bohot shaminda haai

raj-its ok ab chale warna agar phir se woh gunnde aa gaye toh

larki-haan chaliye (larki muskura ke kahete haai)

raj aur woh larki chalne laagte haai

yeh haai mere naye fic do raaste ek manzil ke kahani plz aap log ko agar pasand aaye toh comment zarur kijiyega

Edited by ronojoy_ria - 01 July 2010 at 8:58am

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Shaina_b

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Posted: 18 June 2010 at 7:37am | IP Logged

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Raj is grumbling as his car has broken down in the middle of the jungle!!!!!!

When the girl asked Raj to help her, he was rude to her!!!!!

But then he feels sorry and goes after her!!!!!

Raj like a true hero fights with the goons and saves the girl!!!!!

I am sure the girl is Naina!!!!!

Raj said they have spend the night at a cottage!!!!!

The girl refused and Raj got angry and walked off!!!!!

The girl feels sorry for doubting Raj and goes after him to apologize!!!!!

Raj smiled at her innocence when she said sorry!!!!!

Raj and then girl went on their way!!!!!

Edited by Shaina_b - 24 June 2010 at 11:30pm

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Kool_Naina

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Posted: 18 June 2010 at 7:43am | IP Logged

Hey Ria
nyc starting yaar
do cont soon
plz pm me

Luv
Naina

Edited by Kool_Naina - 18 June 2010 at 8:24am

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awesome start......... Clap

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good to know u started new one.............
lets see how RN relation shapes up in this one......... Embarrassed

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Thumbs Up

Edited by Puri_2711 - 20 June 2010 at 11:29pm

Revolutionbreez

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nice start ria !

i guess that ladki is Naina..

update soon...

sania_58

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Posted: 18 June 2010 at 11:05am | IP Logged

nice start

awsome

plz continue soon

& add me in your PM list

Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 18 June 2010 at 11:15am | IP Logged

nice start

plz cont soon

PrithviSanyo1

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awesome update. loved it.
continue soon.

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