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Posted: 17 June 2010 at 2:00pm | IP Logged
Hii Guys..Hug though I have already written some ffs in different forums... but its all new for me.. in this forum. Well this isnt a ff...its just an OS ..as in a ONE SHOT... after todays last scene...my heart was actually wanting to see something similar!! So thought of sharing it wid u friends. Hope u all will like itEmbarrassedEmbarrassed Haan... and yeah.. I have tried to maintain Krishna's language in this OS... but since am till not that fluent in his language...so may b..there are some mistakes.. Please excuse..me for that TongueTongue N please do put in ur comments...I would love to noe..what u guys felt about itSmileSmile



She walked out of her house….the words still kept echoing in her mind. She controlled herself… but her eyes were brimming with hot tears. The fact that it was her father had clearly distanced her from her own family just tormented her. " Iss ghar ka khayal rakhne ke liye…main abhi bhi ZINDA hoon" kept ringing in her ears. Her steps were heavy…. She walked slowly…until she faced the man..standing infront of her with curious eyes.

Pra: Krishna… tum yahaan kya ker rahe ho? Mainne kaha tha na….ki main akele hi…(she cudn't c'mplete her sentence….. she hated to believe the fact that her father now even thinks of hiding facts from her… she had thought it was only Krishna…but it was her as well..)

Kri: Aab..eeo liyo… hum tumre baatein sunne nai na aaye the… humoo.to bas…tum akeli.. raat ko thi…to aaiye gaiye tumoo lene…

Pratigya walked slowly…followed by Krishna. She kept rewinding the last few minutes of her life. Krishna could clearly see that something terrible had happened to his wife…. Despite being highly curious.. today he was not interested to know what had happened… he just wanted his wife to be happy … !!!

Krishna looked at her… her face revealed the kind of war that was going within her…he just wanted to relieve her off all these burdens… after all Krishna Thakur Singh's wife is not supposed to bear all these pains…
Walking upto her… he smiled at her …trying to grab her attention.

Kri: Umm… uoo.. Pratigwa… humoo…kuch..poochna tha tumko..!!!!
Pra: ( fearing he would be asking about her conversation with her mom-dad… said with a feeble voice) Hmmm…

Kri: wo..tumoo..bhagna .. daurna…. aata hain ???
Pra: (turning her face to him completely) HUHHHHH????

Kri: Liyo…aab ee mein…aisee..dekhne laiyak ka hain… hum toh bas…pocch liye.. ki tumoo..bhagna…daurna… aataaa ..haibo ki nai !!!!

Pra: Dekho Krishna… yeh sab fizool baatein kerna ka..mera zara bhi mood nahi hain…
Kri: Ee…liyo…aa ee fizzol…ka baat kaise ho gaya… ( in a low voice) aab agar tumoo aata nai…hain..tum …koi baat nahi… hum to bas… asehi..pooch liye…

Pra: Dekho… (in a self defending tone) aise baat nahi hain..ki aata nahi…per.. yuhi…achanak…
Kri: Tu.. tumoo..ataa..hain… zor se bhaag paati ho//???
Pra: Kyun nahi payenge…???
Kri: (smiling) ee…aab bolne se ka hota hain…bhaag ke dikao…to maane…
Pra: Krishna… tum pagal to nai ho gaye ho?? Raat ke isswaqt… tum mujhe… *CRAZY*(sighed)
Kri: Dekho..uu angrezi..mein…kuch nai bolo…aree…pati hain hum tumre…. Daur ne bol nai sakte ka?
Pra: Uff… tum wapas aapna pati pati shuru ker diye… aur…pati ho toh..kya… kuch bhii bol sakte ho…???
Kri: Kahe… kahe nai bol sakte?
Pra: Aab…dekho…pagal mat bano…Krishna… chalo…chalte hain…

Kri: aiye..liyo… hum pagal..ban rahe hai… aab…tum padhe likhe log wu kahaan jate ho…geem…uu mein…jab ek machiniya per bhaagne ko bolti hain…sab to khush ho kar bhaagte hain… aur hum..tumre pati ne bola..to hum pagal hoi gayi…

Pra: Hey…bhagwann…
Kri: Aur…waise bhi…thora bhaga daura nahi karoogi….na to oo… moti… haan…moti ho jaogi….bilkul..humri…uu ghanti wali ki tarah….
Pra: Aise nahi bolte… who humse bari hain na…
Kri: Toh…(following Pratigya's irritated look) accha… theek hain.. hum to ..bas bol rahe the…ki…moti..hoigi tio kaisi lagogi… motiii… Krishna Singh ki bibi….(he giggled away)

Pra: Toh… kya tumbhi chod doge mujhe tab?

The words escaped from her mouth out of nowhere… she didn't know if she actually wanted to say this or not… or that the words just slipped through her lips… but the fact that Krishna laughing at her being his wife… ever… just had a burning effect on her… she didn't want to analize why she was having such feelings…but … she was affected… although she knew that he was just joking… but !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Pratigya sighed as he looked at him… his smile had actually disappeared… and he looked at her intently…
Pra: Who…Krishna…main to bas…asehi…(she could sense that he was a bit upset by her words… she didn't know…but she felt bad…)
Kri: (turning his face to the other side) Bataiye rahe…hum tumse… chahe..kuchhu ho jaye… hum,..tumoo…chorkee…kahin nahi jayenge….samjhiyo…


Suddenly…Krishna…herad a voice behind him…." KRISHNAA……HUMEIN PAKDOOOO"

Krishna almost tunred abruptly…just to see… his wife running .…waving at him.. and asking him to join her too.. Krishna observed her… she was laughing… n enjoying…without any further thoughts… he just started the race…promising himself never to let the child in his wife get die…..

Pratigya was thoroughly enjoying… she was running…rather racing!! The cold wind brushed off her face… n she could feel the chill. For the moment , her mind felt light… asif she has forgotten…all her worries… her tensions!!! She just realized that situations have compelled her to behave much older than her age!!!!
Pratigya could feel the racing ground below her feet… she closed her eyes for a moment to rewind back her college days..it seemed that she could hear… all the clappings n cheerings for her….PRATIGYA…. PRATIGYA…. EAST OR WEST…PRATIGYA IS THE BEST …. She smiled away thinking of those days…. She used to be one of the best one in sports.. Her mind drifted back to the day when she was declared as the champion in the Intercollege Competition…. She remembered the face of her sport teacher…. He always wanted her to continue with sports…he had dreamt of her going at much higher levels…!!

Krishna could not deny the fact that his wife was quite fast… n it was indeed becoming difficult for him to keep up with her…he increases his speed… n later thought of taking the shorter route…. Coz being a Thakur…it was impossible for him to lose to his wife…… he muttered under his breath.. Krishna Singh ki sherni bibi…


Krishna had reached their open sky home just few minutes earlier to Pratigya… both were breathing fast… but Pratigya was still lost !!!! Pratigya mind was busy constrasting her present and past life…. once the best student…is now a lady…who had been married forcefully… who had been thrown out by her inlaws… n the one whom her own family even had rejected !!!! The very thought of the incident brought tears in her eyes… with heavy breaths… the tear drops fell on her cheeks… n even before she could realize… she found herself being supported against a strong chest. She knew it was Krishna…but for the first time… she found herself secured in his arms. She felt protected as she felt his warm touch…stroking her head…trying to comfort her. She closed her eyes…n silent tears fell down her cheeks....her mind was too busy realizing or analyzing her feelings for Krishna… but one thing she couldn't deny… he was protective… caring and loving to her… n may b she has just stared realizing that!!!!!!!!!!!


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Posted: 17 June 2010 at 2:35pm | IP Logged
superb! very well written
n don't worry, not many members are active at this hour of the day..

looking forward for more such OSs....

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Posted: 17 June 2010 at 2:41pm | IP Logged
that was really nice i hope that something like that happens but pretty sure wont happen soo soon good job tho

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Posted: 17 June 2010 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dkmystery

superb! very well written
n don't worry, not many members are active at this hour of the day..

looking forward for more such OSs....


Smile Thanks ...dats relli sweet of u Smile

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Posted: 17 June 2010 at 2:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by paaal

Originally posted by dkmystery

superb! very well written
n don't worry, not many members are active at this hour of the day..

looking forward for more such OSs....


Smile Thanks ...dats relli sweet of u Smile

Keep it up mate! Smile

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Posted: 17 June 2010 at 2:45pm | IP Logged
LOL good job....beta don't worry ppl hardly reply to any topic

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Posted: 17 June 2010 at 2:46pm | IP Logged
Thanks khusboo and jaani ... glad that u guys liked it Smile

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