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aangelis
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... newayz plz do add me to ur pm list
it was veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy small part. am a very
greedy creature but just loved it. loved the way ur shaping the
story. it's wicked.
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feel free to criticize. 
Part 3:
"Wow, you suck at gardening Muskaan. Look at that flower. It's already dead," Riddhima mocked, "What's the point of staying in the garden for so long? It's not like you can do anything."
"Riddhima, I may not have a green thumb, but I enjoy what I do. I'm sure you would love to garden if you were to join me," Muskaan patiently replied.
"Hmph. Me, and garden with you. Dream on sister. I have better things to do with my life," Riddhima said angrily.
"As you wish," Muskaan sighed.
Meanwhile, Rahul and Armaan were seeing this exchange between the two sisters.
"She's horrible," Rahul replied.
Armaan nodded his head. He agreed that what Riddhima said was not the proper way in which to talk to one's sister but behind those angry words, he saw pain in her green eyes.
"Oh my god. I'm going crazy. Why am I analyzing her?!" Armaan asked himself.
"Come on. Let's go inside," Rahul said.
As the two made their way to the front door, they caught the attention of Riddhima. She stared at the two fine looking men walking their way. "Probably suitors for Muskaan," she said.
"Excuse me. Is this Shashank Gupta's residence?" Armaan asked politely.
"Maybe. Depends on what you're here for. Who the bloody hell are you and what the hell do u want?" Riddhima asked as she narrowed her eyes.
"Well miss, I think I shall like to speak to Mr. Gupta about what I'm here for. I don't feel the need to tell you anything," Armaan replied.
"You imb****le. What do you mean you don't need to tell me anything? For your kind information, Shashank Gupta is my father and I have every right to know why two losers like yourselves came to meet my father," Riddhima said angrily.
"I'm thinking that this is Mr. Gupta's residence in that case. Come on Rahul. Let's proceed into the house," Armaan said as he turned his back on Riddhima.
"OUCH!" Armaan cried after he felt a strong punch on the back of his head, "What the bloody hell do you think you're doing?!"
"Do you not have any brains? I'm hitting you. What do you think I'm doing you idiot?!" Riddhima said with a sugary smile on her lips.
Armaan laughed. "Sorry sweetheart. But don't worry. You're going to be hitting on me soon enough. Let's go Rahul.
Armaan made his way into Gupta Mansion with an astonished Rahul behind him as well as a fuming Riddhima.
"Just you wait. You haven't seen what Riddhima Gupta is really made of," she said to herself as she eyed her target. "You'll regret ever stepping into Gupta Mansion."
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i've always luved the armaan rahul friend jodi myself. and i ssly need to work on making these parts longer. The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:
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Armaan laughed. "Sorry sweetheart. But don't worry. You're going to be hitting on me soon enough. Let's go Rahul.
Armaan's reply was awesome!!! 
N hmm Riddhima is surely the "dragon" as Rahul had mentioned who also knows a bit of martial arts
Hey plz post bigger parts
Thanks for the PM
Update soon
Take care
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