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Posted: 24 June 2010 at 8:15am | IP Logged
LIKE YOU SNEHA DI .I TOO WANT FREDIX TO BE BACK IN C.I.D. I HAVE ALSO WRITEN A POEM ON C.I.D BUT I THINK IT IS NOT TO GOOD  TO BE DISPLAYED.LOL
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Posted: 24 June 2010 at 8:18am | IP Logged
Every thing is good re no 1 is great poet here we are all learning something from each other shayad hume bhi tumse seekhne ka mauka mil jayee so dont waste tym jus upload it
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Posted: 25 June 2010 at 1:48am | IP Logged
di enhanced version's also great !!!
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Posted: 25 June 2010 at 1:51am | IP Logged

HEY SNEHA GR8 WORK..NEW VERSION IS VEY GOODClap..PLEASE CRATE MORE POEMS

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Posted: 25 June 2010 at 2:05am | IP Logged
new version is excellent. Quite realistic and rhyming is great in this version




Edited by sunnyp1414 - 25 June 2010 at 3:26am
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Posted: 27 June 2010 at 12:27am | IP Logged
Poorane saathi Sudhakar aur Freddy

Waise To Daya-Abhi Ki Jodi Bani Hai Ek Misaal
Par Bhoolo Nahin Ek Aur Jodi Ne Kya Tha Kamaal
Post Se Dono The Sub Inspector
Humare Pyare Fredericks Aur Sudhakar

Dil-O-Jaan Se Karte Apna Kaam
Orders Maante Bina Soche Kya Hoga Anjaam
Surag Koi Chhoot Na Jaaye
Mujrim Kabhi Bach Na Paaye

Dono Rehte Hardum Saath
Ek Doosre Ka Batate Haath
Chaahe Jaise Bhi Hon Halath
In Doston Ki Thi Alag Hi Baat

Phir Ek Din Gum Hua Sudhakar
Apne Dost Ko Akela Chodkar
Freddie Karte Honge Apne Dost Ko Yaad
Tab Aaya Vivek Unka Dene Saath

Pehle Usne Kiya Unhen Bada Pareshan
Par Izzat Karta Hai Aur Deta Hai Dhyan
Inki Jodi Bhi Ab Hai Jami
Phir Bhi Mahsoos Hoti Hai Sudhakar Ki Kami


THIS TIME ITS TRIBUTE TO TWO FRIENDS BY TWO FRIENDS, HOPE YOU GUYS NOT ONLY READ BUT LOVE IT
CLICK LIKE IF YOU ENJOY IT

Edited by sneha_fighter - 27 June 2010 at 12:32am

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Posted: 27 June 2010 at 12:35am | IP Logged
that's wat need standing ovations... Clap just loved it dii...jitni bhi tareef karo kam hain...you are like a professional killer ek he aisa zor se var karte ho ke jakattttttt.. Wink i really loved Vivek part here...rather than Tasha in your previous one..i dono why...but it was a real show stopping in a highly crowded traffic without seeing red light... Clap Clap you made my day ..thanks for creating this ... Wink

Edited by bhinder.kamboj - 27 June 2010 at 12:35am
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wow!! this z soo niceeee

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