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NOTE :Before anyone start reading'.i m avi'its my first OS'.but while writing it got very long so I broken it into two parts'.and now I posted first part of it'.pls I request u all to read it patiently.
(the scene is at morena)
Baujis health was not good these days and one day bauji got heart attack'..al incuding bui ,I and mayank were at morena 'all were tensed.
Doctor came out of room checking bauji'doc came and said'don't give him any stress as it can be dangerous for bauji'.thr is something which is bothering him'.pls keep him happy as much as possible and with tht doc left'.mayank also gone with him.
Bui and gunjan goes inside the room.
Gunjan goes and hugs bauji and starts crying.
B: are gunjan kya hua???????? Mai to bilkul thik hu'..aise ro mat'.muzhe bhi rulaagi kya?????? Tuzhe malum hai na mai tere aaakho mai aasoo nah dekh sakta'.to rona band kar'.aur ghabara mat'mai thik hu.
Gunjan wipes her tears when bui tells her to bring water for bauji to take his medicines.
Gunjan goes tovtake medicine and bui asks gunjan dad.
BI: bhai aapko aisi konasi chinta satai ja rahi hai'apko apni sehat ka bilkul lihaj nahi hai.
B: sushma nupur ke jane ke baad mai bohot tut gaya hu''.ab uss baat ko 3 saal ho gaye hai'fir bhi aaj bhi nupur ke jane ka gum kam nahi hua'aur isi vajah se meri tabiyat thik nahi rehati'ab muzhe gunjan ki chinta lagi rehti hai.
Bi: gunjan ab bohot samazdar ladki'usne apna khud ke lia nokari bhi dhund li hai'..wo ab apna khayal ache se rakh sakti hai'aap bas aapna khayal rakho.
B: kaise sushma??? Nupur ki shaadi kin halat mai hui'tum to janati hona'.maine usse wo pyar nahi diya jiski wo hakdar thi'muzhe laga mayank nupur ke lia acha ladka nahi'magar mai galat tha'.mayank ne saabit kar diya ki wo nupur se saccha pyar karta hai'.aur issiliye'.3 saal ho gaye magar usne dusri shaadi nahi ki.
bI: ha yeh to aapne sahi kaha bhai'mayank bohot hi acha ladka hai'.humne uske bare mai bohot hi bura socha magar wo bohot acha nikala'aur wo nupur se bhi bohot pyar karta hai.
B: muzhe ab gunjan ki chinta hai'muzhe pata hai ki mere paas ab jyada samay nahi'isiliye mai marne se pehale gunjan ki shaadi dekhna chahata hu'.magar nupur ke jane ke baad gunjan ne apne aap ko sab se dur kar diya'usne Mumbai chod key aha morena mai apni study puri ki aur job bhi dhund li'aur aapne aap ko kaam mai duba lia hai'agar aisa hi chala to gunjan kabhi bhi shaadi nahi karegi.
Bi: agar aap izazat de to mere nazar mai gunjan ke lia ek acha ladka hai.
B: ha kaho kaun hai who????
Bi: kyu na hum gunjan ki shad mayank se karade????????
B: ye tum kya keh rahi ho shushma.
Bi: mai sahi keh rahi hu'aapko aur muzhe pata hai ki mayank kitna acha ladka hai'nupur ke jane ke baad wo bilkul akela pad gaya hai'..aur gunjan bhi usse bohot respect deti hai'aur wo uska bohot hi acha dost hai'.muzhe to lagata hai mayank gunjan ko bohot khush rakhega.
B: hmmm tm thik keh rahi ho'mai mayank se isas bare mai bath karunga'magar muzhe gunjan se bhi puchna hoga'kyuki iss baar mai nahi chahata gunjan ke mamale mai bhi nupur ke jaisa kuch ho''..mai nahi chahata ki gunjan kisi dabav mai ye shaadi kare.
(outside thy didn't kno gunjan was listening to all their convo'and she had tears in her eyes'.but wiping those tears she came and gave medicines and water to bauji'.and left from thr)
Later bauji asked mayank abt marriage with gunjan'but mayank clearly said tht if gunjan is ready for marriage thn only he will be ready'.(but in mind he knew tht gunjan still loves sam and will not say yes to marriage.)..saying tht he left for Mumbai.
Bauji came in gunjan's room
G: bauji'aap yaha kaise'agar aapko kisi baat ki jarurat thi to muzhe bula lete..mai aa jati.
B: nahi bata'muzhe tumse kuch jaruri baat karani thi.
G: ha kijiye (in mind she knew wht her dad gonna ask and she had made her mind for it)
B: beta muzhe lagata hai ki tumhe ab shaadi kar leni chahiye'.meri tabiyat ab thik nahi rehati'pata nahi kab ye budha sharer sath chod jaye.
G: nahi bauji'aap aisa kyu keh rahe hai'aapko kuch nahi hoga.
B:pata nahi beti..magar meri ek akhari icha hai kit u shaadi karke..apne sasural mai khush rahe'.to muzhe puchna tha kit u kisiko pasand karti hai????? Kyuki mai nahi chahata jo galati maine nupur ke waqt ki wo mai tere sath bhi karu'.to tere nazar mai koi acha ladka hai?????
Gunjan had flashbacks of memories with samrat'their first meet..pool scene'sams proposal'their engagement'all the blissful memories'but thn she had flashback of tht dreadful incident'.the smile which was thr on her face vanished whn she remembered tht accident'tht accident changed her whole life'and all the love for sam got converted to hate.)
G: nahi bauji'mai kisise pyar nahi karti..agar aapke nazar mai koi ladka ho to mai tayyar hu'.(she is talking to bauji but she is not facing bauji'as she is crying while saying all this'.she taken this decision just for bauji sake'.and for bauji she can do anything.)
B: beti maine socha hai ki mayank ek bohot hi acha ladka hai aur to uske sath khush bhi rahegi'usne kaha hai ki agar tuzhe pasand ho to hi mai baat age badhao.
G: jaisa aap thik samzhe'muje manjoor hai.
B: mai bohot khush hu gunjan and hugs her'..gunjan is crying but bauji thinks its bcs she is gonna leave him after marriage'but she has taken a big decision of her life whr her love sam is not thr.
B: gunjan tu mayank ko batade'.mai baki sabko bata ke ata hu'.and with tht bauji leaves.
Gunjan wipes tears and calls mayank
Mayank and samrat had some meeting and after tht meeting ended mayank left the room but he forgot his mobile thr.
After some time mobile starts ringing'its gunjan on other side'sam noticed tht mayank forgot his mobile'he calls peon to call mayank'he goes and sit with reading file'cell again rings'.at this time he cell and picks it up without looking at cell no.
G: hello mayank
S: (hearing voice)chashmish????
G: (hearing sams voice'her heart beat goes high'she is hearing his voicea after 3 years)sa'samm'samrat .
S: (got very happy..hearing her chashmish voice again after 3 years) chashmish tum kaha ho'kaisi ho????
G: (controlling her urge to ask same to him) samrat tum mayank ke phone ke sath kya kar rahe ho.
S: (got shocked hearing stern voice of gunjan) wo.wo'mayank todi der yahi pet ha'mere sath meeting mai'wo chala gaya magar apna cell yaha bhul gaya'.koi message hai kya uske lia???????
G: (controlling her heart beats..she is very nervous how to say wht she wanted to tell mayank..but she decided)ha'tum mayank ko keh dena ki maine usse shaadi karne ke lia ha kar di hai'and with tht she cutted the phone and fall on floor crying bitterely.
S: (hearing gunjan words)he dropped the cell from his hands'he is sits on his seat'.with mere shock'how can his chashmish will marry anyone other thn him'did she really forgot me'did tht accident ended all the love we had between us'.he takes the phone again and asks.
S: gunjan 'tum ye kya keh rahi ho'but the call is ended already'.he kept the cell on the desk and sat on his chair'he got completely shattered by gunjan words'gunjan words r hovering in his mind'and breaking him more and more'.in these 3 years he had hope ththis chashmish will come back to him again'but now she is going away from him'.shd I stop her'I shd'.i loved her dearly she also'but thn he remembered the incident and got tears in his eyes'.nahi mai gunjan ko nahi rokunga'usne job hi faisala lia hai wo soch samaz ke hi liya hoga'.maine hamesha chashmish ki khushi hi chahi'aur aaj bhi chahata hu'..magar lagata hai god ko hume alag karna hi manjoor hai'aur yehi meri saza bhi hai'ki mai sabse alag rahu'mere frends se'mere pyar se.
Till thn mayank came and asked abt cell but sam didn't paid any attentinon to it.
M: samrat mera cell (sternly)
S: (this brought sam back in time and he gave mayank his cell) tumhare lia gunjan ka phone aya tha'usne tumhe jald se jald phone karne ko kaha hai.
M: (hearing gunjans name and seeing hows sams conditions thought)kahi gunjan ne humare shaadi ke bare mai samrat ko kuch bata to nahi diya'kya usne shaadi ke lia ha kardi'muzhe abhi puchna hoga.
He calls her and gunjan tells him tht she is ready for marriage.
M: but why gunjan''..tum samrat se pyar karti ho'aur mai tum dono ke bich nahi ana chahata'.tum dono ek dusre ke lia bane ho.
G: mayank..samrat mera atit tha'magar mai atith mai nahi jeeti'mai sirf aaj mai jeeti hu'aur present mai samrat kahibhi nahi'..aur agar tumhe ye rishta manjoor nahi to bauji koi dusra ladka dekh lenge.
M: (agar maine na kaha to samrat aur gunjan ko milwane ka ek mauka mai gawa dunga)nahi muzhe manjoor hai///magar meri ek shart hai
G: konasi shart?????
M: engagement hum Mumbai me karene'mere ghar pe.
G: magar hum morena mai bhi to kar sakate hai (she don't wanna come to mumbai)
M: hum shaadi morena mai karenge'magar engagement yaha hogi'tumhe manjoor hai,
The whole house is decorated very well and all the guest had came'bauji didn't came as thy had health problems'.but bui came
BI: mayank beta..chalo jaldi chalo shubh muhurt nikala jar aha hai'sagai ki rasam shuru kar dete hai.
M: thode waqt ruk jaiye.
Mayank was restless'he was looking here and there in guest'he was searching for same..he knew he would come'definitely'.here on other side gunjan was dressed very elegantly'she was looking very pretty'but she had no expressions on her face'.just nothing.
BI :chalo ab bohot time ho gaya'hum rasam shuru karte hai'.with tht she gave rings to both.
Mayank still looking for samrat'.looked at gunjan and smiled'.gunjan also smiled but inside it was very very hurting for her.
They exchanged the rings and all clapped nd started giving their blessing to majan'all were happy except majan'mayank was still looking for samrat'and gunjan was just looking down at nowhere.
Here samrat had come to the ceremony well before the time but he didn't showed up to anyone.
When everyone was giving blessings to majan'sam came with big bouquet of flowers in hand'gunjan didn't seen his face as it was hidden in flowers.
S: (giving flowers to gunjan) engagement ki bhot bohot badhaiya.
G: (loking at samrat got shocked'has no words to say'.she was meeting sam after long time'and she had no words to express how she was feeling'she is just staring at smarat'.and sajan had eyelock..but sam immeadiately broke the eyelock and gave congrats to mayank)
S: congrats mayank'I wish u will be happy in future with gunjan.
(with tht he goes out'not looking back at gunjan and goes out of house'he was crying his heart out but nobody can see t as all were busy in function'.and here the sam was broken'he lost his love.)
Here in party gunjan was also crying'.samrat tum kitne badal gaye ho'kya tumhe aaj mere lia kuch nahi lagata'kya tum muzhe bhul gaye ho'..mai tumse 3 saal dur rahi magar tumne ek baar bhi muzhse nahi pucha tum kaisi ho'.tum thik to ho na'.she was remembering her engagement with sam and she start crying again.
Mayank noticed tht'he wanted to know tht did gunjan still loves samrat or not'and he was right'gunjan still loves him a lot'and so he decided even though we r engaged but I will help gunjan to get her love back'she and samrat deserve to be together and I will try to do tht for sure.
(after engagement mayank left with gunjan in car to drop gunjan at diyas place....when they gone'sam seen thm'.he was watching gunjan secretely'he wanted to capture all the memories of gunjan in his eyes'.as he knew tht marriage is gonna be done in morena and he cant go thr'.whn servant of mayank cam running'.with purse of gunjan'.he was shouting..madam aap apna purse bhul gaye'..sam takes the purse from him and told him tht he will give it to gunjan as her home is on the way to his home)
(here while going in car gunjan was silent'mayank was tensed looking at her and asks)
M: gunjan tum thik ho na?????
G: ha ha mai thik hu..muzhe kya hua hai.
M: tum samrat ko party mai dekhke naraz to nahi hui na.
G: (looks at him' thn again in front)nahi aisi koi baat nahi'samrat ko tumne bulaya tha as he is ur boss.
M: gunjan tum sachem samrat se pyar nahi karti ab????
G: mai ne kitne baar tumhe kaha hai mayank'ki mai aaj mai jeeti hu aur samrat mera past tha'.aur ab uska meri zindagi mai koi jagah nahi.
M: OK (tum kitna bhi kehalo gunjan magar ma janata hut um aaj bhi samrat ko bohot pyar karti ho'aur mai tum dono ko milwake hi rahunga.)
As thy were going car broke down'mayank tried to start it again but it didn't started'he checked the car and got tht radiator is got heated so he goes to take some water from near place and says gunjan to wait for him here.
as mayank gone'gunjan was waiting for him to return whn some goons passes from thr in jeep and looking gunjan thy stop ahead and asked gunjan
Goon: hi babes'do u need lift.
G: (scared) nahi'mera dost pani lene gaya hai'.hum chale jayenge'puchne ke lia shukria.
Goon: are aise kaise'ek jawan ladki ko aise beech raste chod ke to hum nahi ja sakte'and all goons came to her'.and started misbehaving with her'..gunjan was defending herself whn mayank comes and looking all the goons shouts and beats the goon'gunjan is very scared and calling mayank but mayank was very angry and he was beating those goons very badly whn one of the goons came from behind and hit him on his head'bcs of tht mayank got faint and his head is beeding'.very badly.
M: gunjan bhag jao'pls jao tum yaha se.
G: nahi mayank mai tumhe chodake nahi jaungi.
M: gunjan jao yaha se..meri fikar mat karo'apne aap ko bachao.
All goons r coming to her'looking tht gunjan runs back and as she is running goons r following her'.she is very scared and in hurry she collides with one of the car'it was of samrat'.he was going by tht way to give the purse of gunjan
Looking gunjan sam comes out and asks her
S: gunjan tumhe kya hua'aisi dari kyu ho.
(seeing samrat she just hugs him'samrat also thinks of hugging but he didn't'he asked gunjan again.)
S: gunjan'ghabrao mat'muzhe batao..kya hua??? Aise dari hui kyu ho?
G: wo 'wo ..mayank'..and she again starts crying.
S: kya kya hua mayank ko?????? wo to tumhare sath tha na'wokaha hai.????
as gunjan is gonna say something the goons arrived.
Seeing goons gunjan hid behind samrat'..and sam see the goons and think something is wrong.
Goon: hey ladke'uss ladki ko chod de'aur yaha se patali gali se chala ja'nahi to bohot bura hoga.
Gunjan catches sams hand and hiding behind him whn sam tells her.
S: don't worry gunjan'.mai hu na'.tum jao aur mayank ko leke aau'mai inn logo ko dekhta hu.
G: nahi samrat ye bohot khatarnak hai'.unone mayank ko chot pohochai'.tum unse mat ulaso.
Sam sees the fear in gunjan eyes'and he is boiling in anger'.as he looked the torn cloth of gunjan and a small injury mark on her skin.
S: gunjan tum jao aur mayank ko yaha leke aao'..mai sab sambhal lunga.
G: magar samrat.
S: (now in anger)jao gunjan.
Gunjan obeys and goes to bring mayank
Sam comes in middle of all goons..all r laughin at him'..but he also smiles
S: bohot dino se hath saaf nahi kiye'.aur tumne to mere dosto ko chot phoho chane ki jurrat ki hai'uski saja to milegi hi.
And with tht the fight starts'.and sam beat each one of them'..he is very angry and beating everyone like he will kill thm'and why not'thy hurted his best frend mayank'and touched his love gunjan'.he was beating everyone'whn gunjan came with mayank'.mayank was not in sense'so gunjan put mayank in the backseat and gone out to call samrat.
G: samrat chalo yaha se.
S: (beating one of the goons) tum gadi mai baitho'mai aa raha hu'and gunjan goes in car and waiting for samrat.
Samrat beating all is coming to car whn one of the goons come and pierced a knife in his stomach'..sam falls on floor bcs of pain'and the goon was laughing at him
Goon: bada udd raha tha'ab skaise thanda ho gaya'ab dekh tere samne hi uss ladki ki izzat kaise uchalata hu.
With tht the goon was going to the car'..The pain was unbearable but sam got violent by hearing goons talk and stand up and again going towards goon hit him'.and beat him like mad man.
S: kya bola tune'meri chashmish ki izzat uchalega'mai tuzhe choduga nahi'and he was beating him and abt to kill him whn tht goon fainted'all the goons r on floor'sam also fall on road bcs on pain'.but he has one more imp thing to do instead of rest'move mayank to hospital'but wht abt the blood which is oozing out from the stomach if gunjan sees tht she will get hell scared'she is already scared by maynks injury'so.he taken out his jacket and wrapped it around his stomach so tht no one can see he has injury'and he walk to the car'gunjan was trying to bring the mayank conscious'but all her efforts were in vain'she didn't knew abt sam being hurt.
S: gunjan hume abhi hospital jana hoga'.tum hospital ko phone karke batado ki hum aa rahe hai'tab tak mai gadi chalata hu.
Sam sat in the car and got hands on the steering wheel but again the flashbacks of incident came in hismind,
S: nahi aaj mai aise nahi reh sakta'I have to drive to move mayank to hospital'I have to drive.
(SO bearing the pain'.his eyes were blurring by the pain but he has to stay awake as this time'he had only one mission in mind'and tht too move mayank to hospital and so he didn't thought abt his pain and driving.)
After some time they reached hospital'as gunjan called to hospital the stretcher was ready'..thy taken the mayank on the stretcher and went inside'gunjan came to samrat but sam told her to go with mayank'he will come later'.gunjan goes'.she still haven't seen tht sam is also badly hurted.
As she gone inside hospital'sam fainted inside the car'.but after some time he wakes up again'as someone was banging his window'..he saw tht bcs of him thr was big traffic behind his car'and officer was telling him to go ahead.
S: (bearing all the pain..taken control of the stirring wheel and drives away)
Samrat after packing go inside hospital'the pain was unbearable but still he went inside and gone to receptionist'.and said all the money required for the cure of mayank is by him and take care of him.
Now he was moving towards the mayanks block'..his one hand was on his ghav'the jacket was also not able to stop the blood now'and as he was moving'the small small drops of blood were left behind him on the floor'.but he was going ahead'.after some time he reached mayanks ward'gunjan was standing outside and looking in the room.
Seeing gunjan sam has smile on his face'for her only he done all this'.for her mayank is very importat as he will be her life partner in future'and for gunjan happiness he can bear any pain'.so he was moving towards her.
After reaching to her..having enough distance of 5 to 6 walks he asks gunjan.
S: chashmish'mayank kaisa hai????
G: (without looking at him)mayank ab thik hai'magar mai chashmish nahi'mai gunjan hu.
S: (hearing this sam felt very hurt'he was bearing the pain from the injury and from here gunjan was also behaving rudely with him'but he knew why she was doing tht'he was the sole responsible person for making his chashmish so rude and bitter'.he was the one who snatched all the happiness from her life...he deserved to be treated like tht.)
S: ok gunjan'.mai khush hu ki mayank thik hai'.tum kaisi ho.
G: mai bhi thik hu'thanks samrat humari madad karne ke lia'..aapki bohot meherbani hui jo aap ne humari madad ki'.magar sab thik hai to aap ab ja sakte hai.
S: mai to yehi dekhne aya tha kitum thik ho na mayank ke sath'..mayank ke sath khush ho na.
G: mai bohot khush hu mayank ke sath'kyu nahu'wo mera honevala pati hai'..ab aur kuch puchna hai'.aapko samrat ji??????
(now its unbearable for samrat to stand also as pain is increasing'the blood is oozing out and falling on the floor and his hand is full of blood'his site was blurring'but still he said)
S: mai bas yehi sunana chahata tha gunjan'.maine hamesha tumhari khushi chahi hai'aura aaj bhi chahata hu'.bas tumhare muh se sunana chahata tha ki tum khush ho.
G: ha mai khush hu'kya ab tum muzhe akele chodoge?????.
S: ha gunjan'mai ja hi raha hu'bas tumhe khush dekh lia'ab muzhe zindagi mai aur kuch nahi chahiye'.(and with tht sam falls on the ground.....bcs he cant hold on any longer now.)
Hearing loud sound tht sam made gunjan looks at him'.scared to see sam on flor'calls his name and runs to him
G: (shaking sam)samrat tumhe kya hua'utho na'she had tears in her eyes'at tht time she seen her hand and looks tht it was full of blood'..blood of SAMRAT.
Got scared like hell looking all this'sam's jacket was full of blood'samrat tumhe kya ho gaya hai'she sees the injury....hell scared and calls doctors'she runs to doctors cabin and call doctors.
Will be continue'..
will happen to samrat?????? Will he survive??????? Will sajan unite???? Will gunjan
forgive samrat seeing wht he did for mayank even though didn't cared abt his
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