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Bhavana's creations,"Those Eyes" poem page 55 (Page 4)

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Posted: 10 June 2010 at 11:21am | IP Logged
wow dii ... tumne toh sach mein kamal kar diya! Clap CIDians ki dil ki baat likhdi yaha!!! hats off to u! Thumbs Up Loved this poem, each n every word made me remember abhijeet Smile who's in death bed now! Cry But I know unhe kuch nahi hoga, voh vapas aayenge!!!!!! Big smile
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Posted: 10 June 2010 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
salam.......great poemClapClap .......i love poetry.......specially on abhijeet  tooo kia batt ha bossssssssssssssss tereeeeeeeeClapClap
abhijeet sir kalia arzzzzzzzzz kia ha
 
is se pehke ke bewafa ho jayen

keyun na aey dost hum juda ho jayen

to bhi heere se ban gia pahtar

hum bhi jane kal kia se kia ho jayen

to ke yakta tha be shumar huwa

hum bhi totain to ja baja ho jayen

hum bhi majborion ka uzr karain

phir kahain aur mubtila ho jayen

hum agar manzalain na bun payeen

manzalon tak ka raasta ho jayen

dair se soch main hain parwane

raakh ho jayen, ya hawa ho jayen

ishq bhi khail hai naseebon ka

khak ho jayen, kemia ho jayen

ab ke gar to mile to hum tujh se

aise liptain teri qaba ho jayen

bandagi hum ne chor di faraz

kia karain log jab khuda ho jayen........................!

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@bidz and jatt thanks a lot for liking my poem
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Posted: 10 June 2010 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
@ bidz.abhi.daya, dayabi, snehal_7s, jatt48, anantanni, sunnyp1414, sneha_fighter, jiya1, bhinder.kamboj, luna_lovegood, visrom, Shagnika

thank u all for liking it waise shagnika i was waiting for some comments as well Tongue Tongue Tongue

Edited by didobhav - 10 June 2010 at 11:48pm

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Posted: 10 June 2010 at 11:51pm | IP Logged
really maza a gya!!
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thank you jeet
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ur welcome!!
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Big smile Big smile Big smile thank u all for liking it and hopefully we get to see some excellent performances today

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