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Posted: 10 June 2010 at 11:21am | IP Logged

wow dii ... tumne toh sach mein kamal kar diya! Clap

CIDians ki dil ki baat likhdi yaha!!! hats off to u! Thumbs Up

Loved this poem, each n every word made me remember abhijeet Smile

who's in death bed now! Cry

But I know unhe kuch nahi hoga, voh vapas aayenge!!!!!! Big smile

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salam.......great poem .......i love poetry.......specially on abhijeet tooo kia batt ha bossssssssssssssss tereeeeeeee
abhijeet sir kalia arzzzzzzzzz kia ha

is se pehke ke bewafa ho jayen

keyun na aey dost hum juda ho jayen

to bhi heere se ban gia pahtar

hum bhi jane kal kia se kia ho jayen

to ke yakta tha be shumar huwa

hum bhi totain to ja baja ho jayen

hum bhi majborion ka uzr karain

phir kahain aur mubtila ho jayen

hum agar manzalain na bun payeen

manzalon tak ka raasta ho jayen

dair se soch main hain parwane

raakh ho jayen, ya hawa ho jayen

ishq bhi khail hai naseebon ka

khak ho jayen, kemia ho jayen

ab ke gar to mile to hum tujh se

aise liptain teri qaba ho jayen

bandagi hum ne chor di faraz

kia karain log jab khuda ho jayen........................!

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Bhavanab

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Posted: 10 June 2010 at 11:12pm | IP Logged

@bidz and jatt thanks a lot for liking my poem

Bhavanab

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@ bidz.abhi.daya, dayabi, snehal_7s, jatt48, anantanni, sunnyp1414, sneha_fighter, jiya1, bhinder.kamboj, luna_lovegood, visrom, Shagnika

thank u all for liking it waise shagnika i was waiting for some comments as well Tongue

Edited by didobhav - 10 June 2010 at 11:48pm

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Posted: 10 June 2010 at 11:51pm | IP Logged

really maza a gya!!

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thank you jeet

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ur welcome!!

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thank u all for liking it and hopefully we get to see some excellent performances today

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