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Our Destiny Is Sealed : Abruptly Closed (Page 3)

myownarea IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 10 June 2010 at 12:56am | IP Logged

call it a amental block..but i love to read with names as M and N Day Dreaming

please? Big smile

daniella05 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 June 2010 at 12:59am | IP Logged
intro was amazing!!! sounds awesome..
waiting 4 ur update
thanks 4 the pm

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love.mayurarti IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 June 2010 at 1:19am | IP Logged
wonderful concept
keep writing dear
n tnx fr pm

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adi_gupta IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 June 2010 at 3:06am | IP Logged
add em to your pm list

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storytellerm IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 June 2010 at 4:45am | IP Logged
continue soon dear and pm me too plz

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seemamittal Goldie

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Posted: 10 June 2010 at 8:28am | IP Logged
Heyyyy sonam
Amazing concept
Do continue soon
N thanx for pm

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sonam961986 Senior Member

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Posted: 10 June 2010 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
A town of dreams ....... you won't find it on any map .... because it's a part of my imagination .....

One day, when during the fall of the dawn, as the sheet of darkness got removed, and slowly from the mountain climbed up the sun ... and saw the plaintiff of desires and dreams ... the colorful buds blooming all over ..... as the town shined in the light ..... and on a mountain rested an enchanting and a huge house ..... surrounded by green gardens and beautiful flower fields and a green forest with river flowing by the side ....... and a waterfall to complete the landscape ..... the town of dreams; of smiles and happiness and in which lived a fragile young girl ........

On the beaten path arrived a two - horse coach with an old coachman, following a robust young man on a black horse ....... he was going to stay in the castle which rested in the heart of the forest .....

He came down from his horse and decided to wander in the beautiful forest and it's surroundings .... something was in the air .... some kind of magic ... but what, he couldn't understand ..... he was walking with the horse ... in the forest ...... when the cool wind blew and mesmerized his senses .... he was wearing a white shirt, a black pant and a black overcoat .... he had blue eyes and dark brown hair ... the wind was blowing his hair and his overcoat ... he slowly removed it and kept it on the horse .....

He was enjoying the breeze and started singing ...Kyun hawa aaj yun, gaa rahi hai ..... he tied his horse to the tree and started walking while moving his hand from his hair ..... he slowly spread his arms to capture the calmness Kyun hawa aaj yun gaa rahi hai, he slowly touched the flowers ... Kyun fiza rang chalka rahi hai He shot his gaze all around to capture the beauty of the plaintiff ... something was different ... Mere dil bata, aaj hona hai kya he slowly stood near the tree, resting his hand on it .... Chandni din mein kyun chha rahi hai .... he put his hands in the pocket of is pant and started walking ahead .. Zindagi kis taraf jaa rahi hai He smiled to himself and shook his head Mere dil bata, kya hai ye silsila, Kyun hawa aaj yun gaa rahi hai, ga rahi hai ... ga rahi hai ....

She slowly brushed her long black hair .... her hazel eyes smiling as she came out of the door in a white chiffon pleated halter gown, crushed and tight under her chest while flowing till her feet .... she was walking through the garden, taking in the fresh air which was blowing her hair and exposing her neck .....

He stared at the landscape and captured it in his mind ... Jahaan tak bhi jaaye nigaahein, baraste hai jaise ujaale ... he was walking in the flower fields .... Saji aaj kyun hain ye raahein He slowly touched the delicate flowers Khile phool kyun hai, niraale .... Suddelny he smelled a beautiful scent .... Khushbuyein kaisi ye beh rahi hai ... he couldn't understand why his heartbeats were increasing ... Dhadkanein jaane kya keh rahi hai He sat in the field, his hands on his knees Mere dil bata, ye kahaani hai kya ... and slowly lied down .... Kyun hawa aaj yun ga rahi hai, ga rahi hai ... ga rahi hai ....

She reached the flower fields .... her hair were blowing, she was trying to hold them together .... and was walking through the field imagining her prince ...... she beautifully made a flower crown for herself and wore it ... she resembled a princess .... she started humming Aa ... aaa ..aa ... aaaa... aa... aaa .. aa .... And kept walking ahead ...

He suddenly got up, listening to the beautiful, he captured a glimpse of her but thought that she was just an imagination ..... he stood up and started walking, smiling Ye kiska hai chehra jise main, har ek phool main dekhta hun .... He still thought about the melodious voice .... Ye kisiki hai aawaaz jisko, na sun ke bhi main sun raha hun ... He could sense someone walking ahead ... Kaisi ye aahatein aa rahi hai ... He thought about the sheer glimpse he had seen before and started walking towards the forest ..... Kaise ye khwaab dikhla rahi hai He could now feel someone around him .... Mere dil bata, kaun hai aa raha, Kyun hawa aaj yun ga rahi hai he again heard the voicega rahi hai he was sure from where it was coming and started running towards the center of the forestga rahi hai

She was twirling and dancing, spreading her arms and singing to herselfAa, aa .... aa...He reached their and saw her dancing, he could not remove his eyes from her .... she was like a dream .... so beautiful, so pure .... she was just the girl he dream t of ....Aaaa ..aa, aa... aa He started walking towards her, reducing the distance between them .... she was lost in herself when suddenly she felt someone and stopped .... they were really close .... just inches away from each other .... he stared at her, she looked like a princess ... white creamy skin which was glowing under the dim light of the sun ... the long black hair which were coming on her face due to wind .... and her beautiful scent which was mesmerizing him .... she lowered her eyes and became nervous .... before he could go on ... she ran away to the opposite direction ...... he stood there still ... he was captivated by that beautiful voice and those beautiful hazel eyes .... she ran as fast as she could and entered her house and shut the door behind .... she was breathing high .... she could still feel his gaze ... she had goosebumps ... she had never felt such eyes before ....... he had never seen a girl so beautiful before .......

Edited by sonam961986 - 10 June 2010 at 3:51pm

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tehzeeb25 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 June 2010 at 3:42pm | IP Logged


thanxx 4 d pm

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