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omg you updated! that was awesome and new guy? Shaan's in for some trouble.LOL can't wait to read the next part! Big smile

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great work.,please update as early as possible.,and  pleasemake khanak smile/laugh
with the new man infront of shaan so that he gets jealous.
 

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GREAT STORY ... Fashion ... totally loved it !!!
 
A new guy in the scene ... just what Shan needs to jolt him .....
 
 
Hope Khanak and the new guy become good friends and Shan gets J ..... LOL

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awsomeee story....loved it
do cont soon n add me in ur pm list, thnx

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here is Chapter 4... hope you guys like it...  plz comment and give any suggestions u hve .Smile
 
 
 

 

INTRODUCING THE MAN ON TOP OF KHANAK AT THE END OF CHAP-3... KARAN WAHI aka. Sid from DMG

ABHISHEK MALHOTRA, 24 years old: He and Shantanu are best friends and have practically grown up together. He is like a third son to Shantanu's parents and like a brother to both Akshay and Shantanu. He fell in love once, but had his heart broken and since then he has tried never to be serious about the matter of the heart.

 He thus became a notorious playboy, having string girlfriends.  He is very lovable and friendly, and the one thing he cannot stand is a damsel in distress, for this he has always been teased as being the one with the savior complex.

 

 

CHAPTER 4  

 'Abhishek! oh my god, itne saalon ke baad finally tum wapas India aa hi gaye'

Abhi smiled,' Akshay bhaiyya woh kya hai ki meine aap sab ko itna miss kiya ke meine dad se keh diya, ki dad ab chahe aap mujhe dis-own hi kyun naa karde mein India wapas jaa raha hoon.'

'acha bachoo, mere saamne zayada bate mat baana, mein uncle ko achi tarah jaanta hoon. woh khud India aae honge tujhe saath leke, tujhe dis-own karne ki dhamki de kar!'

' haha', abhi made an irritated face, ' very funny, NOT! Par ek baat toh sach thi, i missed you guys a lot yaar!' with that he hugged Akshay, just like he always did when he meet Akshay, who was just like an elder brother too him.

'good to see you too Abhi. Aur tu bilkul sahi time pe aaya hai, Shan abhi , hopefully ,aata hoga.'

' kya baat kar rahe ho bhai, Shan! Woh bhi 7 baje uthega, aur neeche aayega! Ho hi nahi sakta!'

' well yaha bahut kuch badal gaya hai...'

' oh my god, yani ke Tashu sach keh rahi thi! Shan , hamara shan office jaata hai!'

' haa, aur suprisingly woh office ke kaam mein zayaada bura bhi nahi hai!'

'NAHI!!!' Abhi made a sad melodramatic face, his one hand on his forehead and one on Akshay's shoulder.' Aisa nahi ho sakta! Shan hum non- working, party- loving, adventure-seeking, good -for - nothing's ka leader tha aur apne usse' Aap ne usse kaam pe finally laga diya! Apne yeh acha nahi kiya bhai...'

' hahaha, melodrama baandh kar, aur jaa kar usse mile, kafi miss kiya hoga tum dono ne ek doosre ko, best friends jo ho. Mein waise bhi office ke liye late ho raha hoon, jaldi jakar kuch files check karni thi. Tujhse mein shaam ko milta hoon.'

'Okay bye bhaiyya.'

Yakeen nahi hota, shaan aur kaam. Anyway, jaakar khud dekhta hoon, mujhe toh abhi bhi lag raha hai yeh log mazaak kar rahe hai. Abhi climbed the steps, and when climbing his last step, he saw a girl with long hair, in a sari going into Shan's room. ' Tashu toh sari nahi pehnti, phir yeh?'

he walked towards the room, and held the door knob,  and turned it. when he entered the banged into someone. She pulled on to his shirt to prevent her from falling, but it caused him to lose his  balance, he then tripped on the carpet, and fell... On top of her.

'Ahh!'

'Ouch! That was a ...' he looked at her, she looked so innocent, and beautiful. Her eyes, they were not only innocent ,but they also looked like they had seen a lot, they were also a bit red, like she had been crying. Why was she crying, he couldn't think of what kind of a moron would have it in him to hurt her, her with her innocence... He knew it was a man who made her cry, he knew that sadly only members of his species could be that dumb!

'j...ji uthiye.'

' uh?'

'uthiye.'

' oh! sorry, mein woh...' he looked up and saw Shan infront of the bathroom door, looking at them, with a confused and stunned expression. ' Shan! Hi. ' Abhi rolled over and got up. Then helped the sari- clad girl who as under him. And while still holding her hand he smiled in his most flirtatious manner while looking down at her, 'hi I am Abhishek, but you can call me Abhi.'

he kept looking at her, waiting for her to tell him her name, until Shan came towards them,'uh... Khanak yeh mere bachpan ka dost Abhishek hai, tum isse Abhi bhi bula sakti ho.' he then turned to Abhi, ' Abhi yeh hai Khanak, she doesnt know much English.'

'oh,' he smiled at her again, 'aap ko angrezi nahi aati aur mein soch raha tha ki aap mujhe pasand nahi karti, isliye apna naam nahi bata rahi.' he bent a little to her, 'waise apka naam bahut khoobsurat hai.'

Khanak smiled, 'aap se milkar bahut khushi hui, aap dono jaldi se neche aa jaiye, Natasha ji ne breakfast laga diya hai. Uh' ji mera haath.'

Abhi realized he was still holding khanak's hand, 'oh sorry.'

Khanak then smiled at him and left the room.

Abhi then turned to Shan, 'wow, itni khoobsurat ladki hai kaun?'

'Abhi'' Shan hesitated wondering how to say it,' Khanak meri patni hai.'

'WHAT?! Teri aur Natasha ki shaadi hone wali thin na? phir, Khanak. Waise mein tujhe zayaada blame nahi karonga, Khanak ki khoobsurati aur saadgi dekh, koi bhi usse pyaar karne lagega.'

'Shut up Abhi! Mein Khanak se pyaar nahi karta, woh toh''

Shan then told the whole story to Abhi, who listened carefully, and seemed to understand every bit. The accidental death of Suraj, the sarpanch's decision to get Khanak married, Shan's marriage to Khanak, everything.

Abhi put his hand on Shan's shoulder 'yaar jo hua so hua, apne aap ko blame maat kar.'

'kaise blame na karoo, meri wajah se Khanak ne bahut dukh dekhe hai, aur kal raat''

'kal raat? Kal raat kya hua?'

Shan took a deep breath,' kal meine gusse mein Khanak ko kaha''

'Shan kya kaha?'

'meine usse kaha,' he took a deep breath and said all as quickly as he could,' ki mujhe khush hona chahiye, at least mein zinda hoon, suraj ki tarah nahi' OUCH!'

'zyada ouch karne ki zarorat nahi, sirf ek halka sa lafa mara hai. Tune jo us bechariko bola hai na uske baad terko chulu bhar paani mein doob marna chahiye.'

'kisse chulu bhar paani mein doob marna chahiye?'

'Tashu tum yaha?'

'Abhi, ab mein yahi raheti hoon, apne Shan ke paas.' She went and hugged Shan.

Abhi felt awkward, ' uh mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai, mein jata hoon, bye guys.'

Abhi went out of Shan's room and went downstairs,' Khanak kaha hai?'

He looked for then asked a servant who was cleaning,' suno, yeh Khanak kaha hai?'

' Ji woh kitchen mein hongi.'

'thank you.'

He went towards the kitchen, as he went nearer the aroma of food grew stronger, when he entered the kitchen he saw Khanak cooking food.

'vaah kya khushboo hai! Kya bana rahi ho?'

'shrikhand, aap lenge?'

'Shrikhand! Mera favourite hai, mera matlaab mera manpasaand hai, meri mom bhi gujrati thi.'

'thi?'

Abhi looked down on the floor, he was never quite comfortable talking about his mom, he always missed her,' haan, woh aab mere aur mere dad ke saath nahi rehti, woh Delhi mein hai, khabhi khabhi milne aati hai london. London, jahan mein rehta hoon.'

Khanak smiled, she could sense his discomfort and sadness while he was talking about his mother.'aapko mere haath ka bana shrikhand bahut pasand ayega, mere poore gaon mein, mera shrikhand sab se achcha mana jata hai, sabh khane aate the jab mein shrikhand banati thi.'

'sach?'

'aur nahi toh kya?'

Abhi smiled he knew she had changed the subject deliberately, he decided then that this girl was not only beautiful, but also had brains to accompany that beauty. 'par mein shrikhand sirf ek sharat pe khaaonga.'

Khanak looked at him,' kaise sharat?'

'tumhe mujhse dosti karni hogi.'

'baas itni si baat, toh theek hai, aaj se hum dono dost hue, ab toh aap khayege na ?'

'nahi.'

Khanak had a quizzical look on her face,' par aab toh aap aur hum dost hai toh?'

Abhi pointed at her,'isliye, isliye, nahi khaaonga.'

'mere face par kuch hai kya?'

Abhi looked at her, ' nahi, par poonch kyun rahi ho?'

'aap hi ne toh mere face par ongli dekhai aur kaha,"isliye".'

Abhi laughed,' meri bholi dost, mera matlaab that ki tum mujhe aap bula rahi ho, isliye mein nahi khaoonga. Bhala dost se koi aap karke baat karta hai? Mujhe tum, tum bulao ya Abhi. Aap ya Abhishek ji kaha toh mein tumse baat nahi karoonga, na hi tumhara shrikhand khaoonga, bhale hi mere bahut maan kare khane ka.' He made a child- like face and turned his back on her.

Khanak smiled and then started laughing, she felt nice, after a long time she laughed and it reminded her of her old self. 'theek hai, Abhi. Ab toh khaoge na?'

Abhi smiled, and turned to her' zaroor, aur thoda jaldi haan, mujhe bahut bhook lag rahi hai.'

'Abhi tum yahaan?' Natasha entered the kitchen. ' Sorry mein tuhe theek se welcome bhi nahi kar paai, woh kal mera aur shaan ke bech ladaai ho gayi thi isliye' kher jaane do, welcome back to Mumbai.'

Abhi smiled, but couldn't help but think about how stupid Shan was, Khanak ko rulaya, aur Tashu se ladai, is ladke ka kuch nahi ho sakta!

Tashu then hugged him. Khanak saw them, she saw how Tashu hugged him, and how the carefree look on Abhi's face vanished and gave way to a look of happiness as if'

A thought came to her mind, which she couldn't brush off, especially after looking at the way Abhi held Natasha. Does Abhi love natashaji?!



Edited by p.fashion.d - 16 June 2010 at 3:28am

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Posted: 16 June 2010 at 3:22am | IP Logged

ABHISHEK is played by Karan wahi... but coz of a difficulty im not being able to upload his pic can someone plzzzz do dat for me....

And i want to thank all of u fro appreciating my FF... and thanx for ur suggestions... i will keep them in mind while proceeding in the story.... Smile


Edited by p.fashion.d - 16 June 2010 at 3:25am

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Good story... keep going:)

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Posted: 16 June 2010 at 4:17am | IP Logged
ahhh....awesome!!! im glad natasha will get someone really nice atleast....
and abhi will, im sure, play catalyst b/w shaan and khanak....

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