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heyy guyz m starting another ff. its called By your Side... Forever. i hope u all like it.Embarrassed
 
Index~
Part 1- Pg. 1
Part 2- Pg. 16
Note- Pg. 23
 
 
Part 1

 

'Why me? What have I done? Baba why did you leave me? I need you....please come back. I miss yo-'

 

"Riddhima" A deep voice called.

 

'Was that my name? Sounds like music to my ears' I look up 'what happened to my veil, m sure I had it on. OMG...'' I came face to face with him. My greenish hazel eyes just drowned deep into his bluish grey eyes. I kept looking, no thoughts came. I just couldn't pull myself away from those eyes. They are like a deep ocean filled with many things yet to discover.

 

"Hey..." I heard his voice. It was calm, soft and soothing. I looked at his complete face as our trance broke. I blinked as an indication for him to continue. He looked into my eyes and turned around completely within the next second.

 

"Man get a grip...chill. Why are you so nervous for? Come one talk to her you idiot." I giggled as I heard him mumble that. I wonder if I look scary to him or else why would he act as if I might eat him up.

 

"Well now you heard that, there's no point in hiding how nervous I am. Riddhima I know you must be going through a lot right now. I can see it on your face. But I myself m pretty freaked. I don't know how to start but I do wanna make this work so how about we start off with friendship. What say, friends?" he said and put forward this offer with hopeful eyes.

 

I sighed as I put my hand in his. This MARRIAGE had to start somewhere and I guess this was it. He smiled at me and that's when I noticed what a charming smile he has. Those dimples are just too cute.

 

He went to the cupboard and came back after a good minute or so and passed me a pair of clothes.

 

"go change, the bathroom is over there." He said while pointing towards a door. I followed the instructions and came after changing. As I came out and neared the bed I saw he had already changed and with him he held a pillow and blanket.

 

"Riddhima go to sleep here m going to sleep on the couch." I looked up into his eyes and saw the care for me. I thanked him through my eyes and he gave me a small nod in return.

 

As I lay on the bed and closed my eyes, I heard "By the way, Riddhima you looked simply gorgeous today." My head and eyes shot up at once but for some reason I felt my cheecks burn. Am I blushing?

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i kno its a small part. don't worry next time it will be longer. but till then i wanna see loads of comments and m only gonna continue if i get a good response. remember all critism is welcome here on this ff and last thing plz do press the like button. hope u enjoyed the part.Embarrassed


Edited by Dark_Desire - 04 August 2010 at 2:20pm

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Posted: 08 June 2010 at 6:07pm | IP Logged
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA 
i am first.............
 
comming to the part....wel it seems very intersting...........so think that armaan and ridihma had arranged marrige in which they did not see each other and now on thier wedding day they meet for the first time.......
 
i hope that its gona be romantic falling in love after marrige kind of FF.....i love those kind and i dont think that anyone has wrote anything like that before.......
 
i am loving this consept very much....
thanks for the pm
lods of love
nruti
 
 
PS i hope that you will be updating ur FF regularly......


Edited by arluver15 - 08 June 2010 at 8:57pm

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Posted: 08 June 2010 at 6:42pm | IP Logged
very interesting start nikki. pm me and am looking forward to read it.
love
sani

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Posted: 08 June 2010 at 6:43pm | IP Logged
Aw hun!
that was a brilliant part! I really want to read more, do PM me with updates hun!
Hug
You're so cute, great writing Smile

xo. Fatima

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Posted: 08 June 2010 at 7:07pm | IP Logged
HEYYYYYYYYYYY

LOVE IT TOO GUD
AWESOME
SPLENDID
INCREDIBLE
TOOO GUD LOVEEEEEEEE ITTTTTTT

PLZ PLZ PLZ CONTINUE AND PLZ PLZ PLZ PM ME THE PARTS NOT THE PMS PLZ PLZ

I WOULDDDDDDD LOVE TO READ THIS
I WONT READ UR OTHER ONE BUT THIS ONE FOR SUREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

I WONT EVEN MISS THAT FOR MY DEATH BUT ANYWAYS
I AM OVERACTING; OR I MAY NOT
I AM NOT SURE

OK BEFORE GOING JUST WANNA SAY KA
AGAR AUR KOI COMMENT NA KARA TU PLZ PLZ SIRF MERE LIA HI PART LIKH DANA...I WOULD LOVE TO READ IT ALONE....KISSE SAY SHARE HI NAHI KARNA PARAGA... BUT DONT WORRY ASI PROBLEM AYEGE HI NAHI...

I AM SENDING PMS TO ALL MY BUDDIES, BECAUSE I DONT WANT THEM TO MISS IT

LUV ITTTTTTTT TOO GUD

PLZ PLZ PLZ CONTINUE SOON
CANT WAIT TO READ THE NEXT PART

TC
LUV,
MARYAM
(BUDDY)


HEY BY THE WAY..MY COMMENT IS PRETTY LONGGGLOL

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Posted: 08 June 2010 at 8:12pm | IP Logged

hawwwwwwwwwwwww =O

come on silent viewers jus comment once. plz tell me if its good or bad. i have 60 views yet only 3-4 comments. jus one word will do but but plz plz plz push the like button and write a comment.

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Posted: 08 June 2010 at 8:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nikki_19_luv

hawwwwwwwwwwwww =O

come on silent viewers jus comment once. plz tell me if its good or bad. i have 60 views yet only 3-4 comments. jus one word will do but but plz plz plz push the like button and write a comment.
yaar dont worry
kal subha check karna
inshallah kal shaam tak u will have  a lotBig smile of comments dont worry

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Posted: 08 June 2010 at 8:25pm | IP Logged
hello.. reserved. will be back after reading

Niki. do we hava love button for that i wish to press that 1000000000000000 time... awesome start yaar.. i knew this would be ARMAAN MALIK .....

i really loved do.. do continue soon.......................  loved it man...



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