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EternalKarSim

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Posted: 07 June 2010 at 7:56am | IP Logged

So this is another one shot of mine. I've made it a bit funny for my extraordinary viewers. Please feel free to comment/criticize. Hope you guys like it.

                           

Siddhima- Sid, you belong to me

 

A month passed while Sid and Riddhima have been together. Love is in the air. Riddhima and Sid were off to sanjeevani. Sid is driving the car, while Riddhima starts daydreaming about her husband and herself. All the time they spent together. She remembers the day they both confessed at Sanjeevani and now she's happy and excited to meet her friends and patients at the place where her love confessed to her. Armaan too has moved on and is in love with Kangan. As Sid and Riddhima finally reaches Sanjeevani, Sid sees his best friends Armaan and Yuvi standing. He goes there and hugs them. Riddhima hugs Kangan and Sue. They head off to their duties as Dr.Keerti gave them objectives to do. The time came for a break and the gang sits at the cafeteria and having fun. Riddhima and Sid are sitting face to face. Sid drinks cappuccino as it has become  his favourite drink. Riddhima looks at him with dreamy eyes and starts daydreaming. Suddenly Sid sees Armaan's face. He is all shocked with his mouth open. Sid couldn't understand what is going on and he slowly turns his face towards the exit. There he sees beautiful girl standing there. She wears a pink shirt with mini- skirt. Her legs were all skinny and hair-less. She had a perfect body. Sid suddenly gets lost in his mind. Riddhima suddenly stops daydreaming and looks at his face. Riddhima also looks at the girl and becomes furious and says, " Sid, usse kyun dekhrahi ho?" Sid still looking at her and says, " pata nahin". She becomes all jealous and she's looking at the girl like she's going to kill her for stealing her husband's concentration towards her. Kangan also becomes furious and turns Armaan's head towards and says, " Chalo kuch bate karte hain". Armaan says, " hum baad bhi to baat karsakhte hain". Kangan becomes all jealous. both the girls become jealous. Yuvi brings that girl. She is his best friend since school .She introduces herself to everyone. She looks at everyone and suddenly her eyes get locked in Sid's eyes. Riddhima was like biting her lips and was about to scream at both of them. the girl says," kya main yahan bat sakti hoon"? Sid says, " Sure! Kyun nahi". Riddhima is like rubbing her hands as like she is going to strangle her. The girl had the intension of sitting beside Sid but Riddhima quickly sits beside Sid before her. She reminds her that whenever she looks at Sid she is going to see a person who is ready to kill her. Kangan on the other hand feels relieved that the girl is concentrating on Sid but is feeling amusing at the reaction of Riddhima's face. So at that time Armaan says, "To aap kya karte hain?". She says, " Main ek student hoon aur part time model bhi hoon". Riddhima thinks, " OMG, ye toh bohot bari mushkil hai, Oh God!". She thinks again, " Agar ye churail ne mera Sid ko chua , to main usse mardaloongi. Aur agar main ye nahi kiya to mera naam Riddhima Modi nahi hain!". So Riddhima says to her, " To aap kya parte hain?" But the girl is so lost in Sid, He's so cute and hot. And the  check- shirt with button opened and his chest showing, OMG he is so hot. Riddhima couldn't stand her seeing to Sid like this so she breaks her eye lock and repeats in an angry tone, "To tum kya parte ho?" She says, " Main doctorate parti hoon, mera ek ambition hai ki Bombay ka sabse bada hospital me kaam karoon gi, bohot suna hai iss hospital ke bare main, to socha kyun ne main yahan aake thoda dekhloon." Riddhima thinks, " Thoda nahin, zaroorat se zyada dekhrahi ho". Sid says, "Well, Sanjeevani me aisa ambitioned doctors ko welcome karte hain". The girl is so happy to hear from the one she admires. Riddhima is swelling up with jealousy. Then an idea struck in her mind. She hold Sid's arm and rests her head on his shoulder and says," Sid, baby, mere liye ek cappuccino le aao na." Sid says, " Magar thodi der aage tumne cappuccino peerahi thi?" Riddhima secretly pinches him and says," To kya hua, jao." Then looks at him in a naughty way and says," Tumko to pata hain mujhe kaise pasand hai." Sid goes and orders a cappuccino. At that time Riddhima was relieved and had her eyes fixed on that girl. She was acting like a bodyguard so that she could guard him and keep him all to herself. He brings the cappuccino and gives to Riddhima. Riddhima says, " Chalo share karte hain". Sid says, " theek hain main ek khali cup le aata hoon". Riddhima pulls back to his chair and says," zaroorat nahin hum ek cup se khate hain". Sid gets all confused to what is Riddhima up to. And the girl couldn't understand why she is doing she is doing all this. The girl says to Sid, " To kya aap intern ho ya senior?" Sid replies, " Main ek intern hoon, kuch hi mahino main senior ban jaaunga." The girl mistakenly says," interns bohot cute hota hain". Then Sid says, "kya?" Then the girl says, " Nahin kuch nahin". Sid might not have heard it but the words were ringing in Riddhima's head. Their beepers beep as Dr.Keerti has called everyone. Sid says, " aap locker room me hamare liye wait kijiye hum thodi der main arahi hain". Riddhima gets shocked. He has never spoken like this to his wife even, and what's with the locker room? She is ready to take action if the girl does anything to him. They all rush to Dr.Keerti . Dr.Keerti gives them objectives and dismisses them, then she suddenly looks at Riddhima. Riddhima is thinking something and Dr.Keerti says, " sab kuch theek to hai na?" Riddhima says, " nahin, ek ladki aaya. Yuvi ka school friend hai. Mujhe lagta hain woh Sid ko pasand karta hai." Dr.Keerti smiles a bit and says,"Tumhe tumharimpati par vishwaas hai?"  Riddhima says," Of course!" Then Dr.Keerti says, " Woh bohot accha ladka hai, woh tumhe kabhi dhoka nahin dega. Woh tumse bohot pyar karte hain". Riddhima smiles and says," I know". Then Dr.Keerti says, " to jao apne pati ke paas aur ye ehsaas dila do ki tumse sundar aur khoobsuratladki koi nahin mill sakta". Riddhima imagines herself as a soldier. With those black ink in her cute face and a machine gun ready to aim and fire the girl. She runs off to the locker room. There she sees all the gang sitting and talking to the girl. Riddhima's eyes were searching for the girl if she's sitting beside Sid or not. She rushes towards Sid and sits beside him. The girl looks at her watch and says, "Aab mujhe chalna chaihiye. Magar main yahan phir yahan kisi samey aungi." Sid says, " zaroor aana kyunki Sanjeevani me aisa ambitioned doctors ko bohut chahte hai." Sid mistakenly puts his hand at her shoulder and Riddhima gasps like Nupur when she saw Mayank putting his hand on Ria's shoulder. Then Riddhima imagines the girl taking her machine gun and shooting at the soldier. Sid suddenly removes his hand at the sound of Riddhima's reaction. And the gang snickers silently. Yuvi escorts the girl while Riddhima runs to the dressing room and Sid follows her there. Sid says, "Tum ro kyun rahi ho?" Riddhima says, " Chup raho! Tumse main koi baat nahi karna chahti hoon". Sid says, " Magar maine kiya kya"? Riddhima reminds him, " Kiya kya? Tumne uski shoulders pe haat rakhi, usse baat ki aur tum keh rahi ho ke tumne kya kiya? Tum janti ho ki woh tumhe pasand karti hain? Woh tumse kaise ghur ghur kar dekhrahi thi? Sanjeevani me akar zaroorat se zyada dekhrahi thi." Sid laughs and says, " itna jalti ho tum? Itna pyar karti ho mujse?" Riddhima says, " Maine toh plan kar diya tha ki chup chup ke main usse mardaloongi." Riddhima pushes him to a corner, making him feel that he has nowhere to go. Like a mouse being trapped by a cat. She grabs the collar of his shirt, bringing him closer to her and says, " Aab sunlo Dr.Siddant Modi, tum sirf mere ho, aur mere raho gi, YOU BELONG TO ME. Aur agar koi ladki tumhe dekhe bhi na, toh main usse do thapar marungi. Aur agar tumne kuch bhi kiya na main tumhe akela nahin chodungi". Sid slowly hugs her tightly and says," I LOVE YOU, tum mere liye un lakho main se ek ho, Aur tum mere liye sabse sundar, gorgeous , beautiful, sexy, aur hot lagti ho. Aur main chod kar dusro ki haath nahin thamungi." Riddhima has tears in her eyes and a hint of shyness of him praising her. She says, " Aisa pyar karte rehna mujhse, tumhari bahon me rakh kar." Sid laughs and says, " Tumhari jalne ki reaction ki reaction badi cute thi". Riddhima punches him gently and says, " Kya karta , raha nahi gaya". Sid kisses on her forehead and says, " Chalo duty khatam karke ghar chalet hai". Riddhima smiles widely and says, " Chalo". So they finished their work and went back home, loving each other and keeping each other at their arms.

 

                                           THE END!!!

 

 

 

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Posted: 07 June 2010 at 8:13am | IP Logged
hi

this is really sweet, enjoyed it

hope dmg cvs read these fab OS and use them in the episodes

will be fun to watch

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Posted: 07 June 2010 at 8:16am | IP Logged
hehehehe.....nyc 1....i really want ridzy 2 get jealous....

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Nice one and Welcome to IF....
The piece is really ethernal !! Wonderful !!

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Excellent Job i just want them 2 show these type of scenes on dmg

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aww....nice one yaar....rlly cute!!!

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I like the light hearted concept and how everyone is happy

pls do write more of such in future


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Originally posted by punjabkudi98

Excellent Job i just want the CVs 2 show these type of scenes on dmg

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