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(mayank aur nupur college me ek sath padhte the.. college k baad mayank ko delhi me job mil gya aur mayank delhi chala gya..college me sab jante the k nupur ko mayank bahut psnd hai.. yahaan tak k mayank ko bhi iss baat ka pta tha.. pr mayank ko apne career k aage kuch bhi nazar nhi aata tha.. aur nupur morena se aayi ek sidhi sadhi ladki usse yahi lagta tha k mayank ko agar pta hai to wo iss bare me isliye kuch nhi bolta k usse morena se kahi zyada Mumbai ki ladkiyo me interest hai.. whqt bit ta hai.. 3 saal baad achanak mayank apne sare friends ko call karke batata hai k usse uski company permotion de kar Mumbai bhej rhi hai.. Jahaan sara friend circle ye jaan kar khus hota hai, wahi nupur kafi confused hai)

D to N : ney nupur.. mayank ka msg aaya tha.. k wo Mumbai aa rha hai

N : kaun mayank??????? Main kisi mayank ko nhi janti..

B : oh really

N :haan main kya jhut bolungi

S : bologi kya tum iss whqt jhut hi bol rhi ho. Aur wo bhi hum sab logo se.. hum sab achche se jante hai.. k bina mayank k commitment k tumne uska intzaar kia hai.. hum tumhare dost hai.. agar humse jhut bologi to koi fyada nhi hai

N : hmm.. tumhe kisne keh dia k maine mayank ka intzaar kia hai

G : achcha.. to fir inn 3 saalo me itne achche se ladke tumhari life me aaye.. aur tumne sabko chalta kar dia.. hum sab jan na chahte hai kyun??????

N : ok fine.. thik hai.. main manti hu.. k maine bina mayank k commitment k uska intzaar kiya.. syad ye meri hi bewakufi hai.. jo main uska aaj bhi intzaar kar rhi hu… kya pta delhi me usse koi ladki mil gyi hogi.. waise bhi ab uski umer ho chuki hai settle hone ki.. uske pass achcha job hai.. ab to promotion bhi mil gyi hai..

U : haan.. delhi me ladki mil gya hai.. tabhi to wo promotion lekar Mumbai aa rha hai..

S : kaisi bachcho jaisi baate karti ho tum nupur…

N : fir kya karu.. mujhe mayank se nhi milna hai

G : kyun???

S : main batata hu.. nupur ko ab mayank se milne me darr lag rha hai.. mayank ka naam lete hi iski heart beat already tez ho jati hai. Ab nupur ko ye darr hai k kahi wo mayank ko dekh kar khud ko sambhal nhi payi to… aur jo baat nupur ne college me mayank se nhi kahi thi.. hum sab k itna kehne k baad kahi mayank ne iski aankhon me dekh li to…(interrupted by nupur)

N : bas.. aisa kuch nhi hone wala. Aur main kisi se nhi darti hu.. aur haan.. inn 3 saalo me sab kuch badal gya hai.. mujhe mayank k aane naa aane se koi fark nhi padta.

B : excuse me.. abhi tumne kaha k tum 3 saal se mayank ka intzaar kar rhi ho.. aur ab tumhe uske aane naa aane se koi fark nhi padta …hume to tumne confused kar dia hai nupur.

N : kuch nhi.. aur haan main kisi ka intzaar nhi kar rhi thi.. wo tum logo ne mujh se zabardasti bulwaya hai..

S : koi nhi.. pr ye baat mayank ko pta chalni hi chahiye.. ab ye baat tum btaogi ya hum bataye.

N : kyun nhi.. main khud hi bta dungi.. k kaise tum logo ne zabardasti mujh se bulwaya hai..

S : to done.. humne to mayank k liye welcome party organize ki hai.. usme tum aa rhi ho

N : aisa maine kab bola.

S :  abhi bola naa.. kisi se bhi puch lo

(sare samrat ki haan me haan milate hai)

N : I really hate all of you.. & smiles

All together : but we still loves you

N : ok fine.. pr ye jo intzaar wali baatein hai.. emotional atayachar wali baatein pls mayank k aage mat karna.. Main ab usse kuch bi nhi kehna chahti.. I hope all u understand..

S : tum jo chahogi wahi hoga..

N : main bas itna chahti hu.. k mere aur mayank k bare me party me koi baat naa ho..

All : ok done..

S : iski chinta mat karo. Tum nhi bhi kehti to aisa hi hota.. ye baat to aakhir tumhe hi mayank ko batani hai

N : aur jo main kabhi nhi batane wali…

N : ok guys.. mujhe ghar jaana hai.. kafi late ho chuka hai

(nupur cafeteria se chali jaati hai)

S to all : aise kaise nhi batayegi..nupur ko batana to padega hi

D : pr iss se kya hoga

S : tumne kabhi ye socha hai.. k nupur k sath hi mayank kyun hasta hai.. inn 3 saalo me mayank ne kabhi humse hamara haal chal pucha ho na pucha ho.. pr nupur ka zarur pucha hai.. Hume lagta hai k mayank ko career k alwa kuch nhi sujhta.. pr kya kisi ne ye socha hai k mayank ko career banana ki itni jaldi kyun thi.. Mayank ne apni choti behan ki shadi karwa di.. pr khud ne nhi ki…kyun jabki bada to wo hai wo bhi 6 saal….pehle uski shadi honi chahiye thi…

B : aur inn sare kyun ka ek hi jawab hai Nupur..

S : right.. derr se hi sahi pr tum logo ko samjh me to aaya.. Mayank bhi chupa rustam hai.. dekhna uski planning hum sabko zabardast jhatka degi.. Hindi film ki tarah

D : ok..ab kuch kuch samjh aa rha hai

G : mujhe sab kuch samjh aa gya hai.. to welcome party me hi kuch karna hoga.. Maine bhi bade dino se koi hindi film nhi dekhi hai

D : aur live film dekhne ka apna alag hi mazaa hota hai. To hum sab kal sham ko milte hai.. samrat k farm house pr…

U : pr mayank ko bta dia hai naa.. pta chale jinke liye ye party rakhi hai.. wo hi nahi aaye

S : uski chinta tum mat karo.. sab set hai.. kal subah tak mayank Mumbai aa jayega.. usse airport se lene main hi jaunga.. din bhar me mayank aaram kar lega aur sham  ko farmhouse pr party….

(Next day samrat k farmhouse pr.. jahaan samrat mayank ko lene airport gya hai.. wahi baki ka gang raat ki party ki taiyari kar rha hai)

D to N : nupur wo phulo wala puch rha hai kaun se phul bheju

N : jo tumhe psnd ho dia …

D : nupur ye party mayank k liye hai aur hum sabko pta hai k mayank ki psnd k bare me tum se achcha koi nhi bta skta..

N : haan ye to hai.. marigold.. genda phul..

D : ye kaisi psnd hai

N : ab tumne mayank ki psnd puchi thi to maine bta di

B to N  : curtains kaun se color k lagane hai

N : matlab ab tum log curtains bhi mayank ki psnd k lagwane wale ho

B : ye tumse kisne keh dia.. ye to maine aise hi puch lia. Agar chaho to hum wo bhi mayank ki psnd ka lagwa denge.

N : nhi mujhe lga.. k tum log mayank ki psnd ka itna khayal rkh rhe ho.. koi bhi color k lga lo

B : nhi ab to mayank k psnd k hi lagenge.. bolo naa nupur ab ye to tumhe hi btana padega

N : white…

U : aur pucho mayank ki psnd.. white color k curtains..

N : ab pucha hai to ussi color k lga lo..

(at the end party ki sari taiyari ho jati hai.. har cheez mayank k psnd ki.. flowers se lekar curtains k color tak.. fir sab samrat ko phone karke bta dete hai k sari prepration ho chuki hai.. wo bhi aa jaye mayank k sath.. As mayank k liye ye surprise party hai to mayank ko pta nhi hota.. fir bhi wo samrat k sath chal deta hai.. Farmhouse pr apne liye party dekh mayank khus ho jata hai aur bari bari apne friends se milta hai)

M : hey benji..  hugged him

B : main to achcha hu.. tumhe dekh kar bada accha lag rha hai

U to M : mayank hum bhi hai line me..

M : hugged him.. I know.. main bhi tum sabse milne k liye baichan tha

M to D : hi dia.. kaisi ho..

D : main to as always fine hu.. Bas subah se tumhara hi intzaar ho rha tha..

G : haan mayank kafi mehnat ki hai humne…

M : gunjan.. wo to nazar aa hi rha hai

(as mayank ko nupur nazar nhi aati kyunki wo ander kuch lene gyi thi aur abhi tak aayi nhi hai..aur mayank ko ye lagta hai k syad nupur party me hai hi nhi)

G : kisi ko dhund rhe ho mayank????

M : haan… nhi.. wo main(interrupted by gunjan)

G : kya haan nhi… haan ya nhi

(tabhi nupur ander se bahar aakar garden me candle jalane lag jati hai.. as usse nhi pta k mayank aa chukka hai..aur mayank ki nazar uss pr padti hai..Nupur ne white color zaridar saree pehni hai.. as sare friends ne usse request kit hi k atleast aaj k din to wo mayank k fav color ki fav dress pehne... )

M : kuch nhi.. Main nupur se milke aata hu..

S to G : to ab se hindi film start hoti hai

G : chalo dekhte hai..

M to N : hi nupur….

(nupur ko zara bhi ehsas nhi hota k mayank aa chukka hai.. achanak se uski awaz sun kar nupur gabra si jati hai.. aur jis candle se wo baki ki candles jala rhi thi.. wo apne candle apni dress pr gira leti hai..mayank jaldi se nupur ki saree se candle hatata hai..)

M : tum bi naa nupur kabhi nhi sudhrogi.. abhi tum jal jati ho..

N : pr tumhara hath to jal gya naa.. dikhao mujhe… (mayank ka hath pakadte huye)

M ; kuch nhi hua hai.. thik hu main

N : haan tabhi hath pakad kar baithe ho.. dikhao mujhe chup chap se

(aur mayank chup chap nupur ko apna hath dikhata hai.. mayank k hath me zara bhi kharoch nhi aayi huyi hoti..)

N : ye kya mayank.. tumhe pagal banana k liye hamesha main hi kyun milti hu.

M : kyunki main aur kisi ko dhundna hi nhi chahta..

S to G : ab hamari entry ki bari hai scene me

(gunjan samrat ko kuch keh pati iss se pehle samrat )

S to MN : kya baatein ho rhi hai…

M to himself : kya sahi timing hai..

N : kyun?? Tumne bhi karni hai kya..

S : haan kyun nhi..

N : to ye lo candle apni dress pr isse girao.. aur baki ka kaam mayank kar lega,,

(nupur wahaan se chali jaati hai)

S to M : isse kya hua

M : kya pta.. ye to tumhe hi achche se pta hoga. (mayank bhi wahaan se chala jata hai..)

G to S : ye kya kia tumne.. ekdum galat time pr entry mari thi..

S : bilkul sahi thi.. ab dekhte jao.. hindi film ka mazaa to aise hi aata hai..

G : bas iss film ka climax bigad mat dena..

S : wahi to set kar rha hu..

(tabhi dia sabko bulati hai.. k ab whqt ho chuka hai k mayank cake cut kare..)

D to M : mayank ab ye cake cut karo.. aur usse sabse pehle usse khilana jis se tumne sabse zyada miss kiya

M : dia..behtar hoga main cake cut hi naa karu.. kyunki jisko maine kam miss kiya hai wo mujhe marne wala hai..

D : mayank itna haq to hum logo ka banta hai

(mayank cake cut karta hai.. wo sabse pehle samrat ko cake khilata hai.. ye dekh kar sab hairaan reh jate hai.. kyunki sabko lagta hai k wo nupur ko cake khilayega..nupur ko bhi iss baat ka dukh to hota hai.. pr wo fir bhi smile karti hai.. taki kisi ko kuch naa pta chale..)

G to N : are u alright.

N : haan bilkul.. kyun kuch hua kya

G : kuch nhi.. chalo game khelte hai

B : gud idea..

S : bad idea.. mayank itne salo baad hum logo k sath hai.. aur hum game khelenge..very bad

G : to main bhi truth and dare ki baat kar rhi thi

S : haan lekin.. isse thoda modify karke kehlenge.. iss baar target mayank hi hoga.. hum me se job hi bottle k open air ki tarah hoga mayank uss se truth ya dare kuch bhi le skta hai

M : samrat this is cheating.. sidhe sidhe tum mujhe fasa rhe ho.

S : kya kare.. tum itne dino baad jo hath me aaye ho.

M : ok .. pr main hi(interrupted by samrat)

S : to tum maan gye

M : maine kab kaha

S : abhi tumne kaha.. sabne suna

(sare samrat ki haan me haan mila dete hai.as mayank k pass koi aur option nhi hota game start hoti hai.. pehli bari nupur ki aati hai aur mayank truth leta hai)

N : mujhe kuch nhi puchna hai

M : soch lo nupur.. fir ye mauka mile naa mile

N : maine soch lia

(agli bari dia ki hoti hai mayank truth leta hai)

D : mayank tumne delhi me hum sab me se sabse zyada kis ko miss kiya.. sach bolna..

M : hmm tum sabko.. dia ko apne attitude k liye.. dodo ko khane k liye.. Benji ko muskurane k liye, gunjan ko padhte whqt, samrat ko jab ek achche friend ki sabse zyada zarurat hoti thi tab

U : aur Nupur ko??????tumne uska naam to lia hi nhi

M : Nupur ko to main bhula hi nhi.. to yaad aane ka swal hi nhi hota..aur dia ka swal tha k kise miss kia to maine bta dia..

(nupur mayank k answer se shocked ho jati hai..tabhi barish shuru ho jati hai)

N to herself : bas ab yahi hona reh gya tha

G : kya hua nupur.. dekho naa barish ho gyi.. tumhe to pta hai naa agar main time se ghar nahi pahuchi to bauji naraaz ho jayenge..

D : nupur thik keh rhi hai.. hum logo ko bhi chalna chahiye..

S : ek kaam karta hu.. main nupur aur gunjan ko ghar chod deta hu..mayank tum mere sath aao.. sorry dia tumhe uday aur benji ko lift deni hogi

D : ok fine..

N : kya fine.. gunjan ka ghar.. east me hai aur mera west me.. hum dono ko ek sath kaise chodoge..

S : ye to main bhul hi gya tha

M : ek kaam karte hai.. tumhare garage me jo dusri car hai uss se main nupur ko ghar chod deta hu.. tum gunjan ko chod do..ab to sab thik hai

N : nhi.. mujhe tumahre sath nhi jaana hai mayank

M : main tumhe date pr nhi le jaa rha hu.. tumhare ghar chod rha hu.. chalo chup chap

(nupur chup chap mayank k piche chal deti hai)

G to S : dekh li hindi film…kuch nhi hua

S : aaj kuch to hona chahiye.. warna koi fyada nhi hai..

G : matlab..

S : kuch nhi

(mayank aur nupur raste me)

M : nupur kuch puchu tumse..

N : tumhe iske liye permission lene ki zarurat nhi hai itna haq to tum rakhte ho

M : bas yahi sun na tha

N : matlab..

M : kuch nhi.. pta hai nupur college me sabko lagta tha k tum mujhe psnd karti ho..

N : aur tumhe kya lagta tha..

M : mere lagne naa lagne se kya hota hai.. pr mujhe pta tha ya kahu pta hai..

N : kya pta hai mayank tumhe??

M : yahi k ye sari party ki prepration me tumne sabse zyada help ki..yahi k inn 3 saalo me tumne nhi maine intzaar kiya hai..

N(car se bahar ki taraf dekhte huye.. ) : kiska???

(tabhi red light pr mayank car rok deta hai..red light ko dekh kar pehle to nupur simple sa reaction deti hai.. pr tabhi mayank bolta hai)

M : ye car ab tabhi aage badhegi jab mujhe rishwat milegi..

N (shocked) : rishwat.??? Kaisi rishwat aur kis khushi me???

M : iss khushi me k maine apne liye ek ladki psnd ki hai.. bas uski haan ki deri hai.

N : mayank green light hone wali hai. Aur tumhe kya rishwat chahiye.. ya bolu ka gift chahiye mujh se tumhari shadi ka

M (pointed his cheek) : I need a kiss from you.. after all tum hi wo ladki ho..

N (shocked & blushing): what???(tabhi green light ho jati hai.. piche se traffic horn dena start kar deta hai)

N : pls mayank car chalao…

M : aur meri rishwat.??????

N : tumhe jo chahiye mil jayega.. abhi yahaan se chalo.. pls mera itna kehna to maan lo

M : Ok…Jaisi tumhari marzi..

(mayank car chalna start karta hai….nupur is so much in shocked & surprised.. k mayank ye sab bol rha hai.. wo car se bahar ki tarah hi dekh rhi hai.. iske thodi derr baad hi nupur ka ghar aa jata hai.. nupur k ghar k bahar…)

M : nupur ghar aa gya..

N : haan.. Mujhe jaana hoga mayank

M : Hmm janta hu

(nupur kiss on mayank cheek & said)

N : mera jawab ye hai…(aur iss se pehle mayank kuch samjh Paata nupur jaldi se car se nikal kar ghar ki taraf bhagti hai aur ghar k shed k niche se khadi ho jati hai.. mayank ko jab ye realize hota hai k nupur ki haan hai, to wo apni khushi chupa nhi pta.. aur car se bahar nikal kar barish me bigane lagta hai.. nupur usse bhigta hua dekhti hai.. to wo mayank k pass wapas aati hai..)

N : ye kya kar rhe ho.. tum bimar pad jaoge… abhi to ghar jao..

M : ek min ruko.. mujhe aur bhi kuch kehna hai

N : kya???????

(mayank apni pockets check karta hai.. pr usse kuch nhi milta.. then wo car se car ki chabhi nikalta hai..apni knees pr baith kar nupur se kehta hai

M : I know k maine hamesha se hi tumhara dil dhukhaya hai.. pr you know naa k main aisa hi hu.. pr I know k tum mujhe psnd karti hu.. aur main .. main tumse pyar karta hu will you marry me???(

(aur car ki key ka ring wo nupur ki taraf aage badha deta hai.. aur nupur bhi wo key aur ring accept kar leti hai)

N : ab tum ghar jao.. warna bimar padh jaoge.

M : ok…(mayank jaane lagta hai.. pr car ki key to nupur k pass hai…car me pahuch kar mayank ko khayal aata hai k car ki key to nupur k pass hai..Nupur ishare me mayank se puchti hai kya hua..mayank ishare me batata hai k car ki key to uske pass hai..Both smiles.. & nupur return the key to mayank.. but only key.. not the ring…)

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Posted: 03 June 2010 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
Wonderful os Annu
it was amazing
it was so sweet, simple and nice

really Rab ne bana di jodi
maynk-nupur made for each other

i loved it to the core

Awesome OS - i must say
plz do write more


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such a cute os
plz pm me nxt tyme u write one
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loved it

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aussum yaar..
loved it..
very nice..
continue soon


Edited by hazraluvroka - 04 June 2010 at 2:54am

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Sweet

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Very nice...=)

Loved the OS

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nice os
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