Posted:
13 years ago
Hun! Your writing is brilliant!
I love the way you have such intricate details which provide to be so useful further on in the story, and how you've showed us the true and real couples.
I love Nikki & Shaan's friendship, they're so cute together! I love the conversation Shaan & Khanak had, too awesome, finally Shaan is showing his true feelings for Khanak, hence his behaviour towards her! I like the interaction between Nikki & Abhi, they're so hilarious together! The way they're grumbling, and arguing and their mini arguments - aaah, reminds me of the good ol' days! And then after all there's AR , though they haven't had any interaction so far - except for Ridhima grumbling about Armaan, I love their characters! I also LOVE that Rahul & Muskaan are married, and have kids! Though in the show RM didn't unite - they have here! Thank you for that! I also love Rishab & Prerna, such a cute couple, reminds me of the old KZK days with Sneha & Prem! Hehe.
Amazing story concept you've got so far, absolutely brilliant writing. I'm looking forward to much much more! Thank you so much hun! ❤️
xo. Fatima