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Posted: 31 May 2010 at 10:34pm | IP Logged

                               LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL



Life is not a bed of roses

Neither full of thorns

It's beautiful

It's wonderful

Needed to be careful

 

Life is aim

Aiming for fame

Hard working in pain

Sometimes in vain

But no pain no gain

 

Life is hope

Loosing hope

They're looser

Wiser ones hope

They're winner

 

Life is battleship

Having kingship

In times of wars

Citizen's patriotism

Protects country ship

 

Life is relationship

Here we make friendship

Some are friendly

And are trustworthy

Out of many, they're few

 

Life is a challenge

Its full of ups and downs

One being brave

One being wise

Wins the challenge

 

Life is Love

Love for one's parents

Love for one's childrens

Love among lovers

And to live life, its love

 

Life is a gift of God

It's only life to live

Let love rule our life

To make life wonderful

As life is beautiful

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Posted: 04 June 2010 at 2:30am | IP Logged
Hi,

ur poem is beautiful...wel! writing can b better but as u said u r writing 4 d 1st time I must congratulate.... gud job! kep writing.
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Posted: 04 June 2010 at 10:55pm | IP Logged
Thank u so much 4 ur appreciation..

There is alys a room 4 improvement n i'll surely try to improve my writing da next time 4 sure..

God Bless u alys.
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Posted: 12 August 2010 at 7:01am | IP Logged
Its a beautiful poem.Very meaningful lines
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Posted: 20 August 2010 at 10:52am | IP Logged
It's really a meaningful poem !

-Fatima

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