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Posted: 02 June 2010 at 11:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sari12s

i started to watch this drama late.. so i am confused cn u plz tell the story ov her parents dyin and she waz treated bad... it thought pro. is his real parentz.... i am confusedd..
Hey, thanks for reading my fanfic and the answer of ur ques is that it plot of my fanfic and has nothing to do with the storyline of soap.
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Posted: 02 June 2010 at 11:47am | IP Logged
oh wow liked ur 1st chapter...can u pm me wen u update plz thank uuuuuuuu  Big smile xxxx

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Posted: 02 June 2010 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
plz update soon the next chapter. i m eagerly waiting for it.

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Posted: 02 June 2010 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
CHAPTER-2
 
To say that Krishna was shocked to his wits would be an understatement, infact he almost dropped Pratigya ALMOST...
 
He thought this was the girl he was supposed to marry.
 
She didn't look anything like he had last seen her.Although it had been well over 4 years since he had met her the one and only time when their parents were planning their wedding he could see drastic changes in her which were not at all in a good way. When he had meet her even though she was only 14 years old at that time she was very beautiful and had a body to die for. Now even though she still had her curvious body he could feel her bone protuding even through her clothes. He could see cuts and brusies all over the body which could be seen with her with her scarf of and through her wet clothes. He felt a powerful surge of anger for whoever did this to her. When he had first seen her even though he was just 21 at that time he swore to himself that she would be ONLY HIS and no had the right to touch what was his.
 
He was broken away from his train of thought by his father shouting, " BUNIYA... ee... BUNIYA arre sunti ho hamar bahu rani milge galdi aa. KOMAL... ee... KOMAL dekh to kaun aaya hai. "
 
Buniya came running downstair, " Ka, ka kaha apne. Hamar Pratigya milge. Baba ee baba kaha milli ae tumko aur ka halat ho gai hai iski. Baba chal jaldi isko karme mein leke chal aau Chandu Tunna jao tum log Doctorwa ko leke aao. Komal ee Komal beta jaldi jake Baba ke kamre ka darwaja khol. "
 
" Ji Chachiji, hum abhi doctor ko leke aate hai ", said Chandu and Tunna together and went to fetch a doctor.
 
Krishna rushed Pratigya upstairs to his bedroom which Komal had opened and lied Pratigya on his bed. When Komal saw who was in Krishna's arm she broke into tears.
 
" Baoji, humar Pratigya humko milge aur ye kis halat mein hai ye. Baoji aapko hamri kasam jis kisi ne bhi hamar Pratigya ka ye hal kiya hai aap usse nahi chodenge ", cried Komal.
 
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Thanks to all u guys who are reading my ff and encouring me. I will post another part within an hour or two.

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Posted: 02 June 2010 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
Oh wow!!Krishna and his family seem to be very,very loving towards Pratigya.How sweet!!Big smileI hope they give her all the love she needs since she wasn't able to get much after she lost her parents.I hope SS and Krishna teach Pratigya's nasty realtives a thing or two.It was a very nice chp.I am looking forward to the next one.Pls update soonSmile

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Posted: 02 June 2010 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
thank u Smile...finally she'll get sum justice...awesome update by the way xxxxxx

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Posted: 02 June 2010 at 3:21pm | IP Logged
wooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwww
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nice chaptter ClapClapClap
 
i am loving this new singh family
they are very loving and caring ppl
and i really loved krishna takeing care pf prats
Weldone
keep writting .........
waiting for the next scenewa.............Day Dreaming
 
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Well done  Clap
Loved it
Keep it up

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