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Posted: 01 June 2010 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
Thank u very much guys for encouraging me. Now I will be out with the first chapter.
 
CHAPTER-1
 
It was a very rainy evening and we could see a girl coming out of library of university and running towards another girl riding a scooty shouting at the top of her lungs, " AARUSHI... AARUSHI... please stop... how will I get home" but the girl riding scooty just turned gave an evil smile and went with full speed.
 
Now we are able to see the girl. She is taller than an average indian girl at the height of 5'7". She has got a slender built but has curves in all the right places. She has got a fair complexion and is very beautiful. She has got long black hair which reaches her waist. Now we are able to see her face and it is none other than our PRATIGYA... She was crying by now. Today was her first day of university as well her birthday. Today she entered the age of 19 years and was now legally capable of making her own decisions but as a reminder she was nothing more than an orphanand a servent in her uncles house she was beaten very badly and her step-grandmother twisted her ankle with all her might so that on first day of collage everyone think that she is a crippled and wont give much attention to her and give all their attention to her real grand daughter Aarushi. She knew that aarushi had planned to leave Pratigya behind in collage so that when Pratigya got home she would be beaten so bad that she wont be able to go to collage. But what both of them did not know is that faith hassomething else planned for her. From today onwards her life will not be the same ever again.
 
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Strong winds were blowing as the rain increased but Krishna was hell bent on winning the race he was having with his friends but when he took a sharp turn a shoot filled the area. Krishna immediately stopped the car and got outside to see who had screamed. He saw a girl fallen in mud who was injured badly but was not able to stand. He helped her up and was about gto offer her to take her to the hospital when she apologised for falling in front of his car started to attempt to walk but gave a cry of pain and collapsed.
 
 By now Chandu and Tunna have also arrived and saw what happened. So then advised as a strike was on by the doctors the should take her home with them to which Krishna agreed.
 
When they reached the Thakur Palace Krishna scooped her in his arms and went inside where Sajjan Singh was talking on phone to someone and seemed very angry when he saw Krishna entrying the palace with agirl in his arms. When he saw the girl for him time seemed to have stopped as he looked at Krishna and said, " thank u so much. U found your childhood friend, your fiancee and your future wife in one day what I haven,t been able to do in 4 years. Krishna this is Pratigya Saxena..."
 
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plz reply and tell what do u think... I know it is short but I promise next one will be bigger.

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Nice Big smile
Please continue
Can you Add me in your PM list ??

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Posted: 01 June 2010 at 12:56pm | IP Logged
nice FF Smile i am eagerly waiting for the next chp!! xx

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Posted: 01 June 2010 at 2:00pm | IP Logged
it was very good update. plz do continue. can't wait to know what is pratigya's reaction ?.thank u for the update.plz update soon

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Posted: 01 June 2010 at 4:30pm | IP Logged
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
eee scenewa to bohut he interrestingwa lag raha hai..........
BravoooooooooooooClap
jaldi karbo next part likbo..........
i am waiting Day Dreaming

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Hey that was gr8 (: can u pm me too thanks

 
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Posted: 02 June 2010 at 6:41am | IP Logged

OMG!!!This ff is so darn goodStar.I love the character sketch as well as the first chpSmile.So,Pratigya and Krishna are childhood friends.How nice!! I hope that she'll get all the love she deserves and I hope she doesn't go back to tht hell like place ever again where she gets treated so badly.Looking forward to the next chpSmile



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